Dimension Paradise

Feed on the power of wishes... If you catch a person and beat him up, he will definitely beg you not to hit him. You are absolutely sincere. The harder you hit him, the more effective it will be. If you don't hit him, your wish will be fulfilled 🙂

The author is a witch at her peak, and the next one is really not as good as the next one.

The writing is very good, but it's a pity that what the author wrote is different from what the readers expected. Everyone reads this book for the pleasure of controlling the world with their own abilities. In fact, Angel Line was still a good book before. None of the supporting characters in the book are idiots, which is nice. But now that you have brought an angel out, the protagonist has lost his special status. This is boring. The protagonist you wrote is not the kind of person who can become outstanding even if he starts from the same starting line as others. He is just an ordinary person who relies on his own special abilities. When the starting lines are the same, how can you qualify him to be a prominent protagonist? Angels can travel across the world, can they also do what demons can do? If so, what if everyone in time imitates the protagonist? It would be unreasonable not to imitate, after all, you wrote the person so smart before. If you want to imitate it, is this book going to describe the modern world's spiritual recovery? If not, then this book has entered the orbit of a criminal investigation novel. Angels and demons will play a cat and mouse game in the modern world and another world. Of course, you can also say that the ability of the devil's creation will make him special, so the angels cooperate with him to help him become stronger. Then we enter the classic phase of Germany and Germany mismatch, where the subordinates will try their best to take away the protagonist's abilities. Summary: It is very inconsistent with readers' expectations, and the writing style is good. But the plot is really unpalatable.

Elodie, let's style it first. The picture is not completely finished yet and will be added later

The first chapter almost persuaded me to quit. Zhou Zhi is a typical character who has no brains, loves to express himself, and is often surprised. I thought he was the protagonist. Fortunately, after reading the introduction, I found that the protagonist is called Chaoyang

I originally wanted to take it out to celebrate the return of the king when Ermu started to update it again, but I ended up procrastinating. In fact, it has not been completed yet. There is no Internet point or crosswords. I felt particularly interesting when I read this paragraph. If you have a chance in the future, please post the finished draft

From time to time, the Holy Mother is disgusting and double-standard. It is okay for angels to kill, but not for demons

Draw your own version of Naruko Asahara

Ermu, can you change the question about the witch? You can become a god in the early and middle stages, and you must add what you really want to express in the later stages, but the style is not the same as the early and middle stages, and the rhythm of the whole book is also ruined. If I must write it, can't I just write a separate book with a similar style? The Western fantasy style has changed its direction, and the Japanese style has become a fantasy style➕Science fiction style. It would be better to just have a hodgepodge from the beginning. It's just a personal opinion. I still like Ermu's book very much. I hope Ermu can read it and others can criticize it.

The logic is illogical in many places. Since there are angels and demons, should angels collect the power of wishes and demons solve desires? The setting of this book is that demons collect wishes and angels become vampires? The most speechless thing is that since the structures of the stones are completely different, why did the protagonist team conclude that antibiotics will be useful? This strain of bacteria is from Earth, and no preliminary experiments have been done. How can we be sure it is effective? The ores are different, the products are different, and the strains are different. Is there anything strange about it? It's only normal that the earth's antibiotics are ineffective.