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The subject matter is good, but the content is poisonous. First of all, why are all the customers female? Why are all the customers female? OK, I just assume you are trying to attract male readers. After all, compared to most female characters written by male authors, the supporting female characters you wrote are not annoying, nor do you objectify women or use some very masculine words. Then why is it that the theme is obviously trading, but the Holy Heart is always expressed? Isn't it good to be absolutely neutral as a businessman? I think this male protagonist is the kind of person who, assuming there are two guests from hostile camps in the same world, would refuse to trade with the other one in order to get to know the one he is familiar with first. Suppose you want to create a mysterious image in the real world and create a pretentious plot, then you should do it well, instead of the plot of arranging the drugstore boss Xu in an anticlimactic and climactic manner. I gave up when I saw the third world, that's why all the customers are women. . . . .

1. Ermu still maintains its consistent level, and the story and plot are also very interesting. 2. Although it is a refreshing article, it is obviously restrained and is relatively friendly to readers who do not want to read trivial articles every day. 3. This subject involves both politics and modernity. I hope the author will not be as bad as the previous one.

What is going on in that world of immortals? The combat power is very high, but how can those immortals be used as slaves by a mortal dynasty? It's so weird that the author hasn't said anything yet and just kept holding it back? Can anyone explain the plot to me? The writing is pretty good, but why is the worldview so weird? It's so strange that it makes people feel disgusted and has inconsistent views. It's sad and it's a pity. I don't know why they practice immortality? Is it the means necessary to achieve one's own ends? Or fulfill the wings of your dreams? Or do you want the protection of your own freedom? I don't understand, this world of immortal cultivators is so weird. How can a mortal dynasty be able to enslave immortal cultivators at will? Why is there no sense of awe at all?

Immortal is just the honorific title given to her by the people. She eats, drinks and poops like ordinary people. Other monks will lose blood when they hit her~ She was also helpless when an unscrupulous businessman defrauded her of her abilities

They all started eating people. The first thing that came to mind was rice? The second choice is instant noodles? To be reasonable, wouldn't it be better to just buy feed if we don't starve to death? I really dislike it. Wouldn't the noodles be better? You can buy a pound of cheap dried noodles for one yuan. Wouldn't it be better to order salt at wholesale? I really didn't expect it to be instant noodles

First, it is too bulky and difficult to transport, and it is quite troublesome to cook such a large amount of instant noodles; second, the price is still too expensive, and the nutritional content is too simple. Overall, the only advantage is that it tastes good and can quickly provide a sense of happiness. In the industrial age, the most cost-effective relief food that individuals can obtain should be pig feed. As omnivores, pigs have feed ingredients that are very similar to what humans need, and are extremely cheap and smaller in size.

I beg you, bro, write Western Fantasy. There is really nothing good to read in Western Fantasy Farming. Show your true strength and let the readers who criticize you see it. Even if you change your skin as a witch, can you make money? Don't challenge yourself every day😭😭😭

After raising it for a while, it was finally fat enough and ready for slaughter~ Then, when I read about chapter 30, I found a plot that made book friends tangled up, about [How dare mortals who don't know whether to live or die dare to slap the nose of an immortal cultivator? ] This question is quite interesting and I think it can be discussed. The background of the story is roughly: There is a escapist sect in a certain world. It has signed employment agreements with six countries in the world. It has directedly trained a group of disciples. They have been educated since childhood to serve the world. Graduation packages are distributed, and they are sent to the six countries to serve as national teachers, perform sacrifices, pray for rain, slay demons and exorcise evil spirits. The heroine Liu Shuyue is one of the six disciples who are about to take up the post. When she went to the royal capital to report, she found that the world was a bit strange, and there was no work record of the previous sect disciple. She was thinking Is there a trap, and then she met the male protagonist who crossed over to cause trouble, sowing the seeds of doubt. Then time passed, and when the male protagonist came over for the second time, the female protagonist had already been in class for five years and was exhausted physically and mentally... The plots that book friends questioned were roughly the following two: One, based on the second-hand information Five years have passed, and it is said that Liu has a senior brother who went to confront the queen in another country; the senior sister from a neighboring country used magic and magic in exchange for a very high status, brought hundreds of thousands of troops to the border, and was preparing to attack here... In terms of sense, they are all honest workers, and their status is not aloof enough. Second, the heroine is here in the Qi Kingdom. The king summoned the heroine who was away from home to prepare for war, but the one he sent was a dandy general. He was very arrogant and arrogant. He taunted her face to face, "Linguo has come to attack, and their magic is widely taught. Why don't you teach the magic to arm the army?" Then the contradiction mentioned above appeared [The cultivators of immortality are not immortal enough] Here are my opinions: 1. The writing method of Ermu is somewhat problematic. In the current Internet literature ecology, it is normal to be questioned. 2. But if you suppress your emotions and continue reading, are the behaviors and attitudes of these royal families and generals in the article logical? ——In fact, it is also consistent with the setting and world view. Why is it normal to be questioned? ——Because in recent years, everyone's impression of immortal cultivators is that they are aloof from the world. As a result, the six "Immortal Emperors" here were summoned by mortals? There are still mortals who dare to provoke him face to face? Then this immortal's cultivation is not in vain? Lianqi framed the transformation god, right? Is there something wrong with your playing? How do you write a book! ? ? 💢 Why do you say it is logical? ——Because there is a deviation in the perspectives of both parties. At present, it seems that the immortal cultivators and immortal masters in Ermu Shu are more similar to the honorific titles of mortals. In fact, these sect disciples are almost the same as the extraordinary people like Yunlong Gongsun Sheng and Shenxing Taibao Dai Zong in Water Margin. The magic is magical, and the attack power can be stacked, but you need to eat three meals a day and sleep. If you don't use your shield to defend yourself, you will die if you are stabbed with a knife... If they want to complete the mission of the sect, they must also integrate into the court and gain seniority. So Fu Jun and others respect Liu very much, but there are also generals who are stupid... I feel that the analysis is almost done here. Essentially, it is a disturbance caused by different settings in different novels and sensory dislocation. Summary: Old authors like Ermu all have similar weaknesses, that is, the so-called foreshadowing and guidance are weaker, and some details can make people's eyes dim; But the advantage is that the story is exciting and has unique charm. The most exaggerated thing is that they have written almost no water in the middle and late stages of the book... I hope everyone can calm down, read slowly, and appreciate this unique story quietly 🌹 Additionally add two perspectives. 1. After Liu transformed into food, the local government officials immediately discussed that it was impossible. Immortal masters did not have such powerful spells, so they designated outsiders (casual cultivators) for help. ——This shows that Qi State also hides a group of casual cultivators who may be a little behind in rank, but can still be brought out to deal with them. 2. Strictly speaking, those who followed the step-by-step approach like Senior Brother Liu and Senior Sister Liu will have a higher status (just think about how high it is to sleep on a dragon bed and command an army). Those like Liu who did not follow a career plan would have a miserable life. But even if Liu has accomplished nothing in the past five years, it can still be judged that her status is not low. The prince of Yizhou still respects her a lot, and the king still regards her as the first choice for the national army. As for this general—— Probably because he saw that Liu was an upright person and never violated the rules in the past five years, he really thought that there was no way to deal with him. Well, he is really brainless.

After listening to more than twenty chapters, I didn't notice anything in the mortal realm that could threaten the ability of immortal cultivators. Is it me, the Crimson King? Why do you feel that this cultivator is so humble? This reminds me of the relationship between Naruto's daimyo and ninjas. The daimyo has no martial arts, at least no ability to make the Ninja Village fearful. But even in this way, ninjas still work as cows and horses for the daimyo. I can't say that they are similar, I can only say that they are exactly the same I can only say that this immortal cultivator does not look like a human being, but like a cow and horse stamped with ideological stamps.

There are advantages and disadvantages. The story is okay, but if the next customer is still a girl, the author might as well form a girl group. It would be good to publish the book as a female channel, but it is not suitable for a male channel. 😁

It feels like the author has lost more than half of his readers during the witch period. I am an old reader in the early days of witch. I barely finished the book on Heaven's Path, but I really can't read the book on Xenoverse. Let's check out the new books. There is a Trafford Buyers Club for similar themes. That one was too long. I gave up after reading less than a thousand chapters.

Isn't it, this is really written by the same author as the witch? After reading more than ten chapters, the plot is getting more and more vicious. All stores opened by the system know that they need all three certificates, but you actually go directly to a drugstore to sell elixirs? ? ? Your elixir is an elixir. Given its effectiveness in treating Jeanne d'Arc's soldiers, it is something that goes against reality. You haven't mentioned any extraordinary elements in the real world, right? So you just sell elixirs like this? I can't understand it. If I hadn't looked at your author's name, I would have thought it was a book written by a newbie.

First transaction Time: Chapter 4 Customer: Liu Shuyue Sold: Expo Ancient and Modern LV2 (White) - local historical knowledge, you think you can learn lessons from it, but in fact it cannot enrich your story library to the greatest extent. Harvest: Qingxin Jue LV6 (white), Feng Shui Secret LV1 (white), Alchemy LV2 (white), Spiritual Sword Art LV5 (white) Second transaction Time : Chapter 10 Customer: Jeanne d'Arc Sold: Spiritual Sword Technique LV5 (white) - The sword energy is attached to foreign objects, and it can hurt people by flying flowers and picking leaves. It looks very powerful, but in essence it is still a mass-level ability. Harvest: Freedom guides the people LV1 (gold), voice of trust LV5 (green) The third transaction Time: Chapter 16 Customer: Liu Shuyue Sold: Freedom guides the people LV1 (gold) - freedom does not need a real-name system, but the leader does, otherwise how can the people chant your name? You are usually the darling of the times, and it is easier to gain the trust of the people no matter what you do. If water can carry a boat, then you are the head of the wave. Harvest: Tianxia Gong LV8 (purple), Divine Eye Technique LV9 (purple color), Golden Cicada's Escape Technique LV1 (purple), Qianxiang Sword LV10 (blue) The fourth transaction Time: Chapter 22 Customer: Gildray Sold: Specially able to eat LV1 (grey) - better appetite than ordinary people Harvest: Riding (white), black magic (grey) The fifth transaction Time: Chapter 33 Customer: Liu Shuyue Sold: Black Magic (grey) - —Sacrifice the heart, which can increase the life span of the victim by one percent Harvest: Baguazhang (green) The sixth transaction Time: Chapter 33 Customer: Joan of Arc Sold: Feng Shui Secret LV1 (white) Harvest: Blessed Blessed Holy Girl LV1 (Green) The seventh transaction Time: Chapter 33 Customer: Liu Shuyue Sold: Blessed Holy Girl LV1 (Green) - Easily hurt by flames, but black magic cannot get close, will not be cursed, and the holder is locked to women. Harvest: Unknown The eighth transaction (to brush performance) Time: Chapter 36 Customer: Villager Sold: None Harvest: 450+ points The ninth transaction Time: Chapter 39 Customer: Lin Qing Sold: Baguazhang LV1 (green) Harvest: Birth of Agreement LV1 (purple) The tenth transaction Time: Chapter 62 Customer: Walter Weiss Sold: Voice of Trust LV5 (green) - You can tell whether the other party is approaching with good intentions or malice just by the sound of his voice. Note: Lies cannot be distinguished. A white lie is still a lie, but you like it. Harvest: Three thousand *SR15 The eleventh transaction Time: Chapter 65 Customer: Liu Shuyue Sold: Take LV1 by force - grab if you can't buy it, inferior ability, recommended to be permanently sealed. Warning: Any ability obtained through non-trading means is a serious infringement Harvest: Ability*8 The twelfth transaction Time: Chapter 73 Customer: Liu Zhidong Sold: Dance Genius LV2 - an artist who controls the body until the emergence of nerve takeover technology. Harvest: Ability*4 The Thirteenth Transaction Time: Chapter 73 Customer: Liu Zhidong Sold: Riding (white) - gives you the courage to mount any wild horse Harvest: Tianlei Ling (Purple) Color), Demon-Slaying True Sword (gold) + ability*2 The fourteenth transaction Time: Chapter 81 Customer: Marlena Sold: Breathing Method LV9 (white) - a mental method that simulates the swallowing of spiritual energy by monsters, which has some effect on cultivation but not much. If you can't figure this out, I suggest you test the demon's lung capacity. Harvest: Alchemy The Fifteenth Transaction Time: Chapter 135 Customer: Ah Jiu, Ah Hua Sold: None Harvest: Spiritual Energy Body The Sixteenth Transaction Time: Chapter 153 Customer: Jiang Siqi Sold: Qingshen Dafa LV6 (white) - giving soul to objects, magic stick skills, bone-eroding heart-burning curse LV5 (white) - Pain, so painful, heart-breaking pain! It's not you, it's the person you're casting the spell on. Harvest: Agency Information The Seventeenth Transaction Time: Chapter 161 Customer: Gu Zhaoning Sold: None Harvest: Weakness LV1 (grey), respiratory failure LV1 (gray), Qi and blood deficiency LV1 (gray), curse: bad luck LV2 (green) The eighteenth transaction Time: Chapter 164 Customer: Patient*N Sold: None Harvest: Weakness and fatigue LV1 (gray)*N, respiratory weakness LV1 (gray)*N, Qi and blood deficiency LV1 (gray) *N The Nineteenth Transaction Time: Chapter 202 Customer: Elori Sold: Living Dead LV1 (Green) - What doesn't kill you will definitely make you stronger. You are still sick, but the disease is no longer fatal; your breathing is weak, but it can meet your own needs; your energy and blood are empty, but the cold cannot kill you. All kinds of hardships finally create a strong body. The premise is that you have to ensure adequate sleep, because you are a living dead! , Qingxin Jue LV1 (green) - an entry-level mental training method. The advantage is that it adapts to the talents of most people, but the disadvantages are also the same. Harvest: Blood of Affinity LV5 Twentieth transaction Time: Chapter 227 Customer: Su Xingwan Sold: Specially able to sleep LV1 (grey) - sleeps more soundly than ordinary people, dancing genius LV2 (white) - an artist who controls the body until the emergence of nerve takeover technology. Harvest: Dream Maker LV1 (color)

I'd better write another book, Release the Witch. It's almost ten years since the 16-year-old book was written, and I really want to read it again. There are not many good books among Lords. Your book is outstanding. One or two times in life is enough. Don't think about success in all aspects and being popular in any style you write. I feel like you are taking such a big step and failing a bit. You will transform after writing one book and all the fans you have accumulated will be wasted. Unless you are reborn and come back to write, you have written all the good works of others and no one has read it. How many people have tried this trick all over the world without any problems? For example, Chen Dong has always written fantasy and even made a series called Yes, but if he likes this genre, he keeps reading.

A cultivator of immortality was crazily ridden in the face by a worldly dandy. . . . . . The self-propelled nuclear warhead was ordered by the emperor and he was asked to give birth to a child? Do you have to pass down the magic to the children of aristocratic families? Used as a slave? Did the author post the wrong male video?

To be honest, when I first read it, I was a little overwhelmed. Both parties involved in the transaction were deprivation rather than reproduction, and the protagonist had no special characteristics. My first reaction was a joke from decades ago, how to exchange a paper clip for a villa🏡. The answer is that there happens to be someone who needs what you have, and is willing to exchange it at a premium. . But writing it this way directly limits the scalability of this novel, because it is foreseeable that the next person to come will definitely be someone who needs what you have, and you just don't need this ability. . . One is that the protagonist's growth is limited, and the other is that the novel's growth is limited. .

The setting is very interesting, but the plot of the world of cultivators is very uncomfortable, and the doubts have not been solved. People in that world have no respect for power, just like those who have received the halo of wisdom. Liu's behavior is a bit like a female comic who only accepts anger and does not take advantage of the general. It feels very uncomfortable for readers to have such contradictions and doubts that are not solved.

The male protagonist is too soft, especially when he meets a beautiful woman, his personality drops sharply and his personality charm is completely lost.

I'm sorry, I can't stand it anymore. I saw: Shouldn't the immortal master give birth to a few children for the king? How about passing down the immortal skills. The immortal cultivator who can massacre cities and annihilate countries by riding on a horse is dismissed by a mortal king with just a piece of edict... Forget it, riding on a horse is really disgusting.

What is a fairy? The ultimate individual soldier ability and invincible mobility. He can assassinate an emperor every day. He can assassinate officials in towns and cities. He can start the rule at any time in the troubled times. In the troubled times, the heroes can divide the empire and change the dynasty and reshape the rules. But you told me that mortals can disrespect the immortal master, even insult, enslave and manipulate the immortal master, but the immortal master swallows the verbal imperial decree and allows him to be driven by the rules of the world. Even if I go to the imperial city to expose myself, I feel sane.

I hope the new book will be better than The Witch, support it first.

Long time no see, another day full of energy~

After reading the latest update, I would like to say a few words. The most important point is that this book is not an unlimited flow of combat power. There will be no such plot as "using trading cheats" to "match abilities for continuous fighting", at least not yet. This is a story-telling exploratory article, similar to "My Simulated Cultivation Path". Anyone who has read it knows that this is not an ordinary cultivation novel. It just uses the "Huan Zhen" golden finger to introduce a story. The author made it clear in his acceptance speech that it was just a series of changes brought about by different characters in several worlds, connected by the protagonist store manager. Therefore, the author himself emphasized that it is not unlimited flow. There is no need to speculate about the best combination of abilities. The exchange of all abilities (at least so far) is currently to advance the plot and reveal the world view. The role of the protagonist is only to provide a tool and perspective (plus the harem Asasi the author wants to write about) That is- Category: Infinite Hodgepodge Style: Same author as No. 1 "That Witch (I haven't read it yet)" is similar. It has a harem story-telling style, multiple female protagonists, a low proportion of emotional lines, and is integrated into the plot. The female protagonists are all introductions to new plots Plot: I think it is very interesting, refreshing and appropriate, less Or there are no big poisonous points yet Highlights: [Collision of different worlds], for example, the protagonist formed a regiment of modern troops (the kind with automatic rifles) in the ancient world, and then tortured an ancient legion Writing style: At least in line with the title of a great god Follow-up: It should be salvation*N, changing the world in various aspects and ways, the protagonist is a proper order-side protagonist at the starting point of the new era (that is, the [lawful neutral] that best meets the values of our readers)

Didn't you find that this book was frustrating to read?

Good book highly recommended! Some people think that the Emperor of Da Qi was very annoyed. How dare mortals threaten immortal cultivators? First of all, the emperor's behavior seems very unreasonable, but in fact there are explanations and patches later. Secondly, everyone does not need to be rational. Where can there be so many rational people? King Zhou of Shang still dared to blaspheme Nuwa. In the end, the heroine's reaction was to fight back and not feel defeated. In short, those parts cannot be considered shortcomings. This is the first time I read Ermu's book, and I feel that the writing style and setting are both top-notch. But I heard that the later stages will always be unfinished. I hope it can be completed successfully this time and regain the style of the great master.

It's a familiar feeling. At first, I would update a chapter every two days, then gradually I would update a chapter every few days, and then it would completely stop.

Otherwise, let's return to the fantasy of farming in the West.

The heroine will die as soon as she wants. I feel that the author is still living in the old times. This writing method is purely poisonous. Later, after the protagonist becomes the master of flesh and blood, his personality is also very split. I can't stand it for more than 400 chapters. Now it has stopped updating. It seems that the writing has collapsed.

I wanted to subscribe, but when I saw the comment section I was so scared that I cried 🙂

The more I read it, the more it looks like Hotel Xeno, but the writing is not as good as Hotel Xeno.