Alien Paradise

The logic is illogical in many places. Since there are angels and demons, should angels collect the power of wishes and demons solve desires? The setting of this book is that demons collect wishes and angels become vampires? The most speechless thing is that since the structures of the stones are completely different, why did the protagonist team conclude that antibiotics will be useful? This strain of bacteria is from Earth, and no preliminary experiments have been done. How can we be sure it is effective? The ores are different, the products are different, and the strains are different. Is there anything strange about it? It's only normal that the earth's antibiotics are ineffective.

Recommendation: When it comes to demons, what do you think of first? Or is there something that represents the devil in everyone's impression? Is it a demon that plays with people's souls and deceives them into evil deeds? Is it the various bottomless contracts they signed with people? Or is it an evil and terrifying appearance that makes children stop crying? Or is it the weird and creepy spell? With the development of the times, various things are also advancing with the times. In this world where the Internet is highly developed, wouldn't it be a pity if we couldn't use the Internet? When our protagonist awakens his ability, he masters the ability to use the Internet-Cyber ​​Eye. And our protagonist is the cyberdemon of the new era. . . . Book title: Alien Paradise Author: Ermu Status: Serializing Tags: virtual games, angels and demons, the fourth natural disaster . . . Introduction: In modern society, the power of wish as the food of the devil has become very small, which makes our protagonist who feeds on the power of wish very sad. Fortunately, at the end of his life, he finally discovered a different world full of wishes. So, the protagonist creates a game called "Paradise" in the real world, and recruits players to help him. In addition, he established the Paradise God Cult in a different world, and used "Chaoyang" as the name of his incarnation. He used the power of players to fulfill the wishes of others and harvest the power of unowned wishes to strengthen himself. {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial"}

I feel that Ermu still holds the view of "needing a cute female supporting role to be funny and cute" But I personally feel that this is not really what Ermu is best at. I gave up on the three books several times and read them with patience The opening chapter of Tiandao to the task of solving the first evil spirit is very exciting. This book was amazing from the beginning to the theater fire. At that time, I really felt that you could make me forget to eat and sleep in my senior year of high school to catch up with you. It came But then it got messed up. Elodie and her and the entire related plot were all the same. The whole character creation was not as attractive as Naruko in my opinion The character of Angel was a character that should be placed in a romance light novel from the beginning to the end, and it was incompatible with the style of the entire novel Witches had so many female characters being popular at that time, and the most important thing was that they were aliens themselves. , Having experienced pain and showing ease makes people feel valuable I think you may not have understood that people who have traveled from the earth, including curious people, and people who have never seen "Paradise" and are "shocked" and then turn around, these two characters with natural twists and turns are the most attractive characters in this kind of novel Instead of continuing to add water to the angel's garbage branch, it is better for the strong man to cut off his wrist and let her be a thug. Come on, find a way to add some drama to Mao Zi, Naruko and Zhang Zhiyuan, add more tasks that can only be solved by time travelers, or spend more time describing the locals who are about to join the protagonist. These are definitely the readers' favorites. Also, the character Zhou Zhi obviously has a lot of room for growth. He can grow and change. He is the one who best exudes character arcs and attracts readers. Don't let him go offline. Isn't he still secretly in love with Naruko? What a good content to write.

At present, the latest chapter (450) has obviously accelerated towards the ending, which is a pity Let me tell you my feelings about Ermu's works Witch, a traditional farming novel, although it is a bit fast in the end, the fun of farming is complete: firearms - cannons - planes - mushrooms, and the sinkhole at the end is reasonable. After all, the existing technology has come to an end Under Heaven/Tiandao Equation, a story about farming in the direction of supernatural technology. I was very optimistic about it at the beginning (Gundam), but after the evil horse, it accelerated like crazy. Although the story has been revealed, it can still write about the content of hegemony. The Seven Stars and the Western Dragon Kingdom were all skipped, and the final battle was also hurriedly concluded (at that time, it seemed that the second eye was still writing the article for the king, and there was not enough energy). . . Cut in half without explanation Alien Paradise, is it considered the fourth natural disaster + a double-travel adventure? The first two volumes were very good, with complete and fascinating stories. However, the current situation of the third volume is about to be cut in half again. . This is just over 1 million words If this book ends up being less than 1.5 Million words, then I would like to remind future brothers that it is enough to read the front of the second-level book and get off in time in the middle 😒😒

Ermuda, can you please stop spending so much time writing about the modern world? It's really boring 😒. The branch plot of Angel and Skeleton Hand is boring 😒 The witch also gave up on the modern chapter before. I really beg you not to write about the modern world anymore. Every time, the beginning is very good. In the middle and late stages, you must catch up with the modern world to create urban superpowers. Don't you really know what readers want to see? Don't you really know what you are good at? There are so many novels about urban supernatural beings in Qidian. If I want to read about urban supernatural beings, why don't I read them?

Internet articles are like a tree. The early structure rhythm and so on are like the trunk of the tree. The better you write, the more information you read, and the thicker the history you accumulate, the taller it will become. Of course, all kinds of fan fiction, or those that refer to the same worldview, are ivy. The concept is quite good, and the early stage is interesting, but after a few dozen chapters, the protagonist interferes too much, and then there are officials who will interfere with the plot experience. Obviously the plot can appear again in a few more rounds. Then the "angel" who appears and makes trouble for the heroine is not lovable. Who in this age would like this kind of trouble maker. There is another small problem that is not a problem. The first batch of experiencers chose the "top rich". Everyone's reaction was wrong. As long as you have never seen or interacted with rich people, it is difficult to write. Next time, let's write about relatively ordinary people. It took a lot of stitches, but also a lot of mistakes.

Chaoyang, a demon who can wander between reality and other worlds, the power to sustain life is actually the power of will. However, the power of will is exhausted in the real world, but the power of wish in the other world is extremely abundant! In order to obtain the wish power of another world, we signed a contract to help people achieve their wishes, and created a game called "Paradise". In reality, people thought they were playing VR, but in fact, they completed commissioned tasks for the protagonist in another world, allowing the protagonist to obtain people's wish power! Recommendation index: 5 stars Recommendation: It feels like the protagonist is just like an NPC. However, he has a human weakness and is easily emotional! It feels similar to Spirit Walker, but the protagonist can be a manager! Look at it from a game management perspective. It feels good and the subject matter is relatively fresh. The protagonist of this book does things cleanly and is good at using his abilities. The plot is not too draggy. It feels pretty good. I recommend everyone to read it!                        {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial"}{"TopicId":"575911170507276288","TopicName":"New book recommendation"}

[Recommendation] The setting of this book is familiar yet strange, yet strange yet extremely familiar. The protagonist is an ordinary earthling who suddenly awakens to become a demon. He needs the power of will to survive, but this thing is rare on the earth. Just when the protagonist is about to run out of ammunition and food, the protagonist opens the door to another world. In the other world, the power of will is full but difficult to obtain. The highlight is that the protagonist can shake people around the earth in the name of playing games. [Work information] Book title: Alien Paradise Author: Ermu Type: Fantasy·Modern Magic Tags: Traveling through another world, traveling between two worlds, demons, group portraits Status: Connected Loading (34,000 words) Recommended:·Five stars·Highly recommended [Highlights of this book] - Writing: sophisticated writing style, detailed and appropriate; flowing, smooth and natural; exciting, with a good sense of rhythm. I really like another book by the author, Let the Witch Go, which I still think is a classic. - Setting: The protagonist can shake people on the earth, allowing them to go to other worlds as game participants and complete tasks. This allows the protagonist to help the petitioners who signed the contract to realize their wishes in the other world, thereby gaining their wish power. It is a very interesting setting, somewhat similar to this game is too real, Super Mechanic and other game stories that can shake people, but it is also unique and very innovative. - Characters: The characters have their own characteristics, and there are signs of group portraits, which are present in both worlds; on the earth side, everyone has a different identity and background, and has their own original circle, but they got to know each other because of a game. I look forward to seeing what impact the game or the protagonist will have on their original lives; in addition, due to the keen insights of individual characters in the two worlds, it is also worth looking forward to what impact the flaws revealed by the protagonist will have on the two worlds and the protagonist. Already pinned, collected, and voted for, I look forward to more updates from the author ❤️❤️❤️, so that we can have a mouth full of fat 😅😅[fn=6 2] {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}

An ordinary earthling suddenly awakens to a strange demonic bloodline and needs to collect the power of faith as food in order to survive. In the modern technological world, it was difficult to find enough willpower to feed him. Before he starved to death, he discovered a gap leading to another world. While packaging the other world into a game and deceiving people in the modern world to adventure in the other world as players; at the same time pretending to be a magic stick in the other world, solving the local people's difficulties and collecting will power. [Summoning Players] [Collection of Beliefs] [Demon Behind the Scenes] Status of the work: "Alien Paradise", serialized, 77,000 words. The author is Ermu, a great writer of China Literature Group. His representative work is "Release That Witch" with 3.37 Million words. The quality is guaranteed. Highlights: 1. Readers can take in both the perspective of the player and the protagonist at the same time. If you like the fourth natural disaster-behind-the-scenes game articles that have emerged in recent years such as "Super Mechanic" and "This Game is Too Real", this novel may be a good choice. Warning: 1. At the beginning, it was said that the protagonist could not find his willpower and was about to starve to death. However, in the other world game later, the protagonist showed many magical abilities, which was slightly contradictory. From my personal point of view, it would be more appropriate if the protagonist is set in a background similar to the Japanese manga [Godless World] (the protagonist is summoned by the declining gods of another world, and assumes the responsibility of prospering the church as a bishop, so that he can not only interact with humans in the two worlds, but also interact with his own main god.) {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New Book Trial Reading"}{"TopicId":"886256127972278272","TopicName":"Weekend Book Recommendation"}

Recommendation: The protagonist is a weak demon who can cross two realms, but his life is extremely embarrassing, because he needs to absorb faith to survive. Without faith, he will die. However, faith is monopolized and controlled by powerful gods. The protagonist can only develop in a low-key manner, accept commissions in other worlds, and then attract people from the earth to work, while he enjoys the benefits. A high-quality inter-realm communication text, which is also a variant of the alien mission flow. Although the protagonist is called a devil, he does good deeds. The article describes the intelligence capabilities of the powerful forces, and the protagonist does not expect to be able to hide the facts of another world. Rating: Liangcao+ Category: Fantasy-Modern Magic Tags: Traveling between two worlds Behind the scenes Calling players {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial"}

Feed on the power of wishes... If you catch a person and beat him up, he will definitely beg you not to hit him. You are absolutely sincere. The harder you hit him, the more effective it will be. If you don't hit him, your wish will be fulfilled 🙂

The author is a witch at her peak, and the next one is really not as good as the next one.

The writing is very good, but it's a pity that what the author wrote is different from what the readers expected. Everyone reads this book for the pleasure of controlling the world with their own abilities. In fact, Angel Line was still a good book before. None of the supporting characters in the book are idiots, which is nice. But now that you have brought an angel out, the protagonist has lost his special status. This is boring. The protagonist you wrote is not the kind of person who can become outstanding even if he starts from the same starting line as others. He is just an ordinary person who relies on his own special abilities. When the starting lines are the same, how can you qualify him to be a prominent protagonist? Angels can travel across the world, can they also do what demons can do? If so, what if everyone in time imitates the protagonist? It would be unreasonable not to imitate, after all, you wrote the person so smart before. If you want to imitate it, is this book going to describe the modern world's spiritual recovery? If not, then this book has entered the orbit of a criminal investigation novel. Angels and demons will play a cat and mouse game in the modern world and another world. Of course, you can also say that the ability of the devil's creation will make him special, so the angels cooperate with him to help him become stronger. Then we enter the classic phase of Germany and Germany mismatch, where the subordinates will try their best to take away the protagonist's abilities. Summary: It is very inconsistent with readers' expectations, and the writing style is good. But the plot is really unpalatable.

Elodie, let's style it first. The picture is not completely finished yet and will be added later

The first chapter almost persuaded me to quit. Zhou Zhi is a typical character who has no brains, loves to express himself, and is often surprised. I thought he was the protagonist. Fortunately, after reading the introduction, I found that the protagonist is called Chaoyang

I originally wanted to take it out to celebrate the return of the king when Ermu started to update it again, but I ended up procrastinating. In fact, it has not been completed yet. There is no Internet point or crosswords. I felt particularly interesting when I read this paragraph. If you have a chance in the future, please post the finished draft

From time to time, the Holy Mother is disgusting and double-standard. It is okay for angels to kill, but not for demons

Draw your own version of Naruko Asahara

Ermu, can you change the question about the witch? You can become a god in the early and middle stages, and you must add what you really want to express in the later stages, but the style is not the same as the early and middle stages, and the rhythm of the whole book is also ruined. If I must write it, can't I just write a separate book with a similar style? The Western fantasy style has changed its direction, and the Japanese style has become a fantasy style➕Science fiction style. It would be better to just have a hodgepodge from the beginning. It's just a personal opinion. I still like Ermu's book very much. I hope Ermu can read it and others can criticize it.

I'm very curious. They say that they don't have enough willpower and can only live for 9 days. But I think the protagonist can teleport, become invisible, and create things. Doesn't these abilities require willpower? It is obvious that the protagonist can rescue people by himself, but the protagonist spends his will power on artificial bodies in the main world, making weapons and other items, and he is invisible next to him to give reminders. I am curious whether the wish power earned is more than the money spent on the player?

As soon as Chapter 35 came out, the character of the protagonist of this book instantly dropped to the ground, and the appeal of the entire book instantly dropped to a low point. If the author hadn't been a master, this book would have been so overwhelming in an instant. Originally, the protagonist awakens the demonic power and discovers a different world. He uses the appearance similar to the fourth natural disaster to harvest his will power and get what he wants. The protagonist cannot find much willpower in reality. The devil will starve to death without willpower. The protagonist has trouble eating in reality. As a result, the fourth day had just begun, and supernatural forces hostile to the devil appeared in reality. This is simply the most poisonous spot among poisonous spots, but the author stepped on them all without missing a single one.

I can't stand it anymore when I see the police chief being beaten. In the first game, when recruiting players, they can say that they are not smart enough and need help. When they fight the police chief later, they have to save costs and just teleport over and throw a bomb, and then it's over. They say they don't have enough willing power while wasting their willing power to let the players fight. In the middle, they directly talk about the position of the chief. In the end, they even end up playing by themselves, which loses the gameplay.

The angel line is really handled inexplicably. If this book was worth 85 points before Angel Line, now it is worth up to 60 points, wandering between poison and hay.

The devil in this book is not a devil at all. If a devil wants to survive, he must have willpower. Willpower can only be obtained by helping people fulfill their wishes. If you think about it carefully, it means that if you don't help people fulfill their wishes, you will die. How can there be such a devil? . . Anyway, it's just that the protagonist really doesn't fit into the setting of a demon. On the contrary, it doesn't feel inconsistent at all to treat him as a little god who wants to help people fulfill their wishes. . .

It is said that the protagonist is weak, with various invisibility, teleportation, and various props. Although the physical props and body will not exist for long. Let's just say the protagonist is strong, acting as a nanny for the players in various ways. (It's understandable at first) I thought I couldn't take action personally in another world, so in the next chapter I killed someone myself and projected it remotely. When I thought that only those with extraordinary power in another world could collect the power of wishes, the reality came with a demon hunter. For the second time, the game invites civil servants to enter the game. Do you still plan to report it to the superiors and plan to cooperate in development? After reading more than 20 chapters, there are quite a few loopholes.

A Little Notebook of Grudges Today is the eighth day of the second eye break, let's hold grudges

It only takes one bad ending and it won't stop, such as dancing or z. It's quite difficult to keep the complete story if you have big eyes.

Draw a rising sun

{"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New Book Trial Reading"} People say that "Paradise" is a real paradise, where you are unrestrained and can do whatever you want; People say that "Chaoyang" is an omnipotent god. As long as the contract is reached, it will definitely come true. No one knows that I am working hard to survive; No one knows how lonely I am in this noisy world. Book title: "Alien Paradise" Author: Ermu Time: May 20-present Number of words: 110,000 words Tag: Other world travel/magic/demon/group portrait [Analysis] Two worlds, the real world and the other world. The protagonist has the ability to bring people from the real world to the other world through the ability similar to soul travel, which needs a carrier to convey. In addition to the protagonist (the devil), there are others (angels) who can travel between the two worlds. The other world is similar to the steampunk style. In addition to the conventional system, there is also a religious system, both of which are independent of each other. The notorious gangsters, the thrill-seeking rich second generation, the undercover official personnel, people with different identities and backgrounds and different thoughts gathered in the "Paradise" to complete the task. They thought they were spending money to indulge in entertainment, but in the end they were spending money to help others; ordinary people living in a different world, the law enforcement agency that controls power, and the church that controls faith, the three are independent and entangled with each other. There is not much description of the protagonist in the article, but there are different views on the protagonist from the different perspectives of paradise experiencers, people from other worlds, institutions and churches, thus outlining an unfathomable image. [Plot Guess] Is it because the wish power cannot be collected in the present world because the wish power does not exist in the present world, or the concentration of wish power in the present world is not enough, or the wish power exists in the present world but can only be sensed in a different world? Only people in this world can cross over to another world. Can people from other worlds cross over to this world? Park visitors have already speculated that the other world is a real world. Is it possible in this world to create something that can travel between the two worlds? ＜Guess 3＞Can I make a wish by myself? Is it because the current ability is insufficient, or is it because it is unable to respond to prayers for oneself? If we cannot be self-sufficient, can the "gods" pray to each other? [Recommendation] The writing style of this article is steady, the storyline is compact, and the rhythm is relaxed. Fierce scenes such as battles can arouse readers' nervous emotions. The advancement of the plot also pave the way for subsequent scenes. The author has profound writing skills, and the characters in the group have their own characteristics. They are good at thinking and observant. Each has its own wisdom, and its own charm can also bring out the power and mystery of the protagonist. Let us wait and see how the story will develop in the future, and how the collision between paradise, church, and reality will unfold.

It's such a bad ending. There will be no next book.