Echoes of the Past

I left one book in the one-page recommendation and read it in one day. It was really good. —————————— ⭐Sincere work, worth recommending⭐ ✔️Advantages ① Good rhythm control ability: Read as a whole, the plot develops smoothly and is reasonably proportioned. It is basically not too delayed or too hasty, and it is very comfortable to watch. (There should be an outline and strictly followed the development. Is this the leeway of the old author? ② Completely adequate characterization: Very smart characterization, the main character's personality is likable, and the author's ability to shape characters based on dialogue is also worth mentioning. The best part for me is that this book weakens and partially allocates the "growth" usually borne by the protagonist, broadening the perspective and reducing the pressure of single-point narrative. As a light novel, this is definitely a plus point. ③ Qualified Creator: The novel is about thinking first and looking at the whole picture. There is currently no setting of left- and right-brain interaction, which is a world worth seeing. ❗️Disadvantages ① Transition and connection Yes, this is the case, I have seen many posts mentioning this issue. It feels more like the author's own thinking inertia. The brain automatically renders the connection between space, time and perspective when creating - but it is not reflected in the text. This makes the transition and connection abrupt. The characters move from one scene to another with only a period; the perspective of the two people switches, only the upper and lower paragraphs are different. In fact, it will be much better if you add a dividing line. Don't artificially create a reading threshold! In other words, what the reader sees is the author's "re-creation" of the picture. A good creation highlights the key points without losing the whole picture, like an impressionist oil painting; a bad creation is prone to a chaotic collage feeling, with some parts being distinct and others being completely missing, thus affecting the reader's understanding of the entire picture. There is this "collage feeling" in some of the descriptions in this book. Improvement in this area may require the author to think differently, because as a creator, those neglected parts may already be "scene modeling", "NPC" and "character setting" - but readers have never seen it before. ———————— ❓️Expectations and reservations (the following may contain spoilers) ① The relationship between the black mist and the nerds, from the beginning to the present, gives people a hint of "acting without acting". This makes me have some guesses about the length of the book, because generally the driving force brought by such bright lines is not enough to support a long story. However, considering that the author is likely to have a detailed outline, I still look forward to it. ② Although it is updated once a day, the content is solid and not irritating. Please continue to persevere, author, we love you ( Attached is an AI cat meal~

Can the author close his eyes when writing? I have a mysophobia and don't want to read second-hand words🐶

First of all, let's talk about the advantages The world view is attractive; the plot is obvious and not boring; the character portrayal is individual, not rigid; the story is strong; the three views are normal; compared with other books from the current starting point, it is excellent Disadvantages The disadvantages are relatively few but they also affect the reading experience. The narrative is confusing, the picture is poor, and the details of some descriptions are blurred. The transition is abrupt, making it difficult for readers to understand, and the reading experience is more tiring. Some characters or settings are introduced without foreshadowing or introduction, or are introduced too late Narrative tense and perspective changes are frequent and confusing. For example, the protagonist starts from a certain event in the present and recalls the experience a hundred years ago, and then abruptly changes the narrative perspective from the current protagonist to the previous protagonist, and then abruptly changes it back after writing a paragraph.

When did the daily detoxification become so powerful? I actually recommended a normal novel.

As mentioned, I will set up a pot here. You can bring your own ingredients, and then wait for an opportunity to catch the seal in the pot, and then you can eat delicious seal!

I have never felt happier in Seal Mama's book club 😭

Write the transition carefully. The first sentence is still chatting in the room and the next sentence appears somewhere else. Although I can understand it, the viewing experience is too poor. I would like to insert a few sentences to explain and write more words to make the reading more comfortable. The character setting and plot are quite interesting, but the content sometimes seems too abrupt.

The author's description of changing perspectives is so poor, it's a bit hard to read.

It's well written, but you have to pay after it's put on the shelves, otherwise you won't be able to read it, it's too greedy for money.

It's so confusing I read three or four chapters, and the names of people appeared out of nowhere.

Emmmmm What I wrote before is very good, now are we going to farm? The protagonist now works as a bodyguard, a teacher, and finally a nanny for the heroine. Is writing a heroine just for the sake of being a breadwinner...

You have to know that the title of a book is the first impression of readers. Everyone will have an expectation when they see a title. For example, those who like to read Cthulhu will click in when they see the title, and those who like to read Western Fantasy will not click in.

Surprisingly, your ability to write an introduction is much worse than your ability to write an essay.

Speaking of the old days, I think of the past, and when I think of the past, I have to mention all the things before 🪖

This book is good, but the beginning is not suitable for the current environment of Xiaobai Shuangwen. Alas, the results are really not worthy of this book.

The Fifth Heavenly King is my favorite elf fanfic. After reading it, I was originally waiting for the next fanfic with posters, but it turned out that this one has made rapid progress in various Cthulhu fantasy. Although the seal's writing style and stories are all online, what about my elf novel? ? ? ! !

Can you turn off the anti-theft? I can't stand it if I'm bankrupt.

Damn, it's so well written... I really should let the people on the fantasy list learn how to write the otherworld in this book (except for mushrooms)

To be honest, after reading 50 chapters, I don't feel as good as the first two books. If I hadn't read the author's other books, I would have been persuaded to quit after the first ten chapters. My experience is still a bit confusing, and some parts of the writing are a bit inexplicable... I can only say to keep working hard.

The writing style is okay, but there are always too many nouns crammed in at once, which makes it expensive to understand. People's names are not that common, so it takes a lot of reading to get used to it.

How about the protagonist's strength?

From the beginning until now, I still don't understand which cow derailed, or which deer split its legs? Author, please reply.

I've read all the author's books, do you have any recommendations?

Yes, it won my heart. I finally found a good book, but the first three chapters were written too quickly.

Today's introduction actually contains no introduction

It's too late to write a review of Shennong. I'll write it when I see the next climax

How come no one reads this well-written book?

To me, it's pretty good overall. It's of relatively high quality. I hope it ends well. I don't know why Solisa didn't even get a role.

It's very strange. What is going on with Nan An and the heroines, nerd, Solisa, and Suiyue. It looks weird. I feel like I have to divide Nan An's several lives into several people to barely understand it. But he is the same Nan An. It doesn't matter how strange it is that these relationships happen to the same person. It would be too bad to say that they are all part of the nerd, but it would be too bad to continue like this. I can't understand it. The more I look at it, the more I mind.

Damn it, it's been so long and there's still no discussion thread, I don't even think about it.