Gulong Heavy Industry

Let me state in advance that I have only watched 1/3 of the movie. The following opinions are for reference only. If you don't agree with me, I can only say sorry for bothering you. Let's talk about the advantages first: the subject matter is novel, the professional knowledge is excellent, and the plot arrangement is really imaginative. Although there are many people writing on the subject of modern science and engineering in a different world, there are very few who have the level of an author. The author has done a good job both in terms of rigor and readability. There are very few authors who handle professional knowledge at least this well. But this book also has relatively big problems. I'm going to talk about it in more detail, but please don't think I'm nitpicking. I sincerely hope that the author can write excellent works. Only when the work is excellent enough can these so-called problems be called problems. First of all, the title of the book is somewhat misleading. Judging from the title, readers will think that it is about Western fantasy, swords and magic and other classic themes. In fact, it should be about science and engineering men using modern technology to fight naval battles. This is not to say that the content is not good, but it will mislead the audience. I clicked in to see magic and other worlds, but the actual content is the collision of modern technology and magic.        The author wrote down the professional knowledge in such detail that it gave me the illusion that I was reading about hydrology. I know that the author is not about water, and the purpose is to improve the realism of the article, but I couldn't understand the content. I felt helpless in the face of linear algebra, which is no different from reading about hydrology. The environment in the early stage was too stressful, with enemies everywhere and ceiling-level combat power. After reading it, I just felt tired and couldn't see any transition. I only saw an engineer frantically rushing to make progress (of course, this may be my personal problem, I still like lighter themes). There is too little introduction to the description of the different world. The article mainly focuses on describing the protagonist's use of technology, but ignores the theme of being a different world. He only knows about the religion and character relationships, and the customs and culture of the different world are superficial. The protagonist's understanding of the other world is completely covered by the heroine as a shell, and all the content can only be analyzed through the heroine's few words to analyze the background of the world. Last point, the emotional line is not good. I don't want readers to abandon the book for this reason, but unfortunately, his emotional line is not up to par. I couldn't see the beautiful side of the heroine being a girl, and her character as the Riddler made me deduct all impression points. To put it harshly, replacing the heroine with a genderless summon, or even an old man, the system would have little impact on the book. By modifying individual words and sentences, it can even be published as a systematic article. In summary, this is a good novel, but it also has many problems, so that it cannot be popular as a new subject. In my opinion, this is a pity. After all, there are really few authors who are good at writing and can write something new at the current starting point. The above opinions are only for reference by curious readers and are not suggestions and opinions for the author. I hope the author can continue to work hard.

The early stage is very amazing. The author's description of ships and navigation knowledge is professional and hard-core. The setting of using scientific thinking to transform the magical world is very interesting. However, after the middle and later stages of the plot began to contact the ZF department, I felt that the rhythm was obviously delayed, the rationality was insufficient, and the reading felt "out of drama". I don't know what will happen next

I met a 30-year-old young woman on a dating app. We have been chatting very well for more than half a year. Today she asked to meet. I hesitated. I said we both have families and it didn't feel good, but she said it was okay and we were just ordinary friends. So I agreed and asked her for a photo. She looked pretty. She left. My city is not far away. We made an appointment to meet at a milk tea shop. We didn't choose to meet somewhere else for fear of meeting an acquaintance. I arrived first that day because she had to drive for several hours. While waiting, I looked at the photos and thought it was another "car rollover scene." Most mobile phones have a beauty function, but when she got out of that Pamei, I recognized her at a glance. She is much prettier than in the photo, and she is my favorite type. She also recognized me. She didn't know what to say. In order to break the awkwardness, she said to give me a hug. I said yes. She smelled really good. My little heart was pounding. After sitting in the milk tea shop for a while, we went to eat. She basically didn't eat much. She was stripping me the whole time. Shopee, picking out fish bones. When we walked out of the restaurant after dinner, she held my hand and I didn't break away. She said she would take me home. I said my car had a limited number today and I wanted to take a taxi back. She insisted on taking me back. When I got home, I found that she had stuffed a note in my pocket. The note said: Update ten chapters to unlock subsequent content...

The writing is very good, and it is one of the few books that has a real sense of life when I read it later. However, I still don't understand why the master character of the dwarf Heman was made to look like this for the sake of aesthetics regardless of practical use. It turns out that this kind of character who likes to complain is quite good, and the other characters are also quite good. Yes, I hope the author can polish the character of the dwarf more. This asymmetrical aesthetic is not a big problem, but the expression of forcibly twisting the mechanical structure for the sake of aesthetics and causing mechanical malfunction is still too abrupt. It is not like what a mature master should look like. The public and private parts should be written separately.

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Do you think there is a problem with the plot design because the character's personality or plot development does not suit your personality preferences? Then you may have problems with your intelligence or values. It may also reflect a shortcoming in your emotional intelligence or worldview that recognizes the diversity of personalities. Whether the plot design is reasonable can only be judged based on the context, but I will not comment on the characters. There are thousands of people with different faces, but the description of the manufacturing industry is worthy of praise. Moreover, the author's novel is very reasonable in terms of military and industry. It can be seen that the author has a wide range of interests. The description of physics, thermodynamics, materials mechanics, internal combustion engines, electrification, ship dynamics, nuclear physics, new energy, science, history and mechanical production tools is almost flawless. In terms of efficiency, the use of magic to increase machinery is also in line with the new concept of novels in recent years. The description of mechanical equipment even has the value of popular science. The lack of content corresponding to the history of science or the development process of related equipment requires additional reading aids from outside the book. The literary and martial arts fights are very good. The literary drama is neither clumsy nor procrastinating. It is concise and clear. There are many foreshadowings, and the plot progresses steadily and orderly. The descriptions of the few martial arts, that is, magic fights, are also detailed enough and not blunt.

Okay, when will the protagonist's combat power be improved?

Publication-grade fantasy. Read until it's on the shelf, the layout is compact; there are clear main lines, many branch plots, a strong sense of rhythm; and the writing is strong. Great reading experience in one sitting. But the disadvantage is that, as the author said, it is published on an online text platform, so the reading experience is not good. Short reading will destroy the strong sense of rhythm of the novel and make it impossible to fully experience the author's slowly uncovering the world. Definitely worth reading

The author must not compromise with the harem party, the single heroine is the best and purest love! This book is really well written, I'll be sure to follow this writing style🔥

Speechless, the male and female protagonists are all opposite-sex protagonists, is there no neutral protagonist? Tired of seeing them all

Have you ever been a bone dragon? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

Viola

The author mentioned in the preface that his techniques may be outdated, but I think there are no outdated techniques, only outdated stories, or in other words, outdated beliefs in literature. I think the foundation of literature is faith. The ability of works such as "The Divine Comedy", "Odyssey" and "Li Sao" to shine brightly in human history does not rely on narrative or rhetorical techniques. They rely on faith and the huge passion brought by faith. Faith does not mean religion here. Don't regard literature as a magical stick. You can apply Kierkegaard's definition of "leap of faith". This faith prompts people to burst out their passion between trustworthiness and disbelief, and guides people to plunge into the ethereal and mirage-like landscape in this wilderness. I read a lot and then looked back at your preface. I only read about twenty chapters before I gave you five monthly votes. I think there is a knowable (arcane throne setting?) But uncertain romance in your creation. Passion will burst out from this uncertainty at this time, and it will be great. It seems that I am saying it wrongly, but my suggestion is, don't read the book reviews. Why not click on this new book and enter the author's world to take a look?

The best description of the official is not to describe it. Just contact it and don't describe it in detail. This can avoid poisonous points and maintain the original mysterious majesty.

I feel that the level of force in the other world is too low, and the two sides are not equal at all. I feel that if the logistics can keep up, a Wu Zhi can go sideways.

Our Ms. Scholar 🥰

It's so well written and feels comfortable everywhere. Unfortunately, I don't have any extra monthly passes. I really recommend this book to everyone

First of all, I have read less than in previous years. I am distracted by other things and my taste has become more and more picky. The last time I felt this way was in "We Live in Nanjing", a science fiction short story about the end of the world. To summarize my thoughts, firstly, the setting is rigorous. I have to express my feelings after reading a lot of competing products that just write the setting chapters and then use them as wipes. If you are better, you will change it if you listen to the advice. If you don't, you will simply not be able to stand it anymore. The second is that the writing is good, the plot is relatively substantial, and the sense of connection is strong. Many old authors have problems with hydrology, but this book only took me three days to read the two volumes. After reading more, similar situations seem more comfortable. The third point is even more valuable. Many newcomers are not good at it, and the pace is even very fast. They are invincible in the world within two volumes, and then they forcefully change the map and the enemy comes from the sky. The experience of following up may not be strong at this point, but if you read continuously, you can feel that the rhythm control is understandable. The interludes of love and food plots are also more able to relieve the tension of battle/preparation. This may be considered water in a sense, but I still understand it here. Fourthly, the plot foreshadowing in online articles is relatively sketchy. If you look carefully at many of the later plots, there are hints of it over and over again. This point directly stands out from many fast food articles. In terms of plot, this book mainly focuses on the collision between earth science and technology and otherworldly magic technology. Common interesting points in this genre are the use of technological products to suppress local indigenous people, and national power to suppress medieval magic. These elements are present, but the performance is also relatively restrained in the early stages to make room for the development of the plot. At present, the first volume after escaping from the dead is actually more of a road story. However, with the deepening of the development of technology in the two worlds and the intervention of national forces, it seems that it will be more difficult to write without switching to farming. If farming, the change will be relatively large. I don't know how the story line will be arranged. If it is to be extended to a genre of millions of words, the later period will probably be incomparable with the current one, and it will be too long to be unbearable. Let's talk about the spoilers, the first volume is about escaping, the second volume is sailing on the sea to gain a foothold and reveal the mastermind behind the scenes (I personally think the fight at the beginning of the second volume is a bit extreme), the third volume is driving a train to rob a prison to obtain resources and learn more about the mastermind, and the fourth volume is currently watching In the future, we will fight the Dragon Cavalry and cause some deep damage to the mastermind behind the scenes. The old church may be destroyed in this volume or wait until the fifth volume. By the fifth or sixth volume, it will basically be the decisive battle. If it is delayed any longer, it may still be a good online novel, but it will definitely not be a good story.

In order to increase the plot, the author made Pig's Feet, a noob or a necromancer, go around saving people. In order to avoid being found out that some of the abilities of the necromancer cannot be used. He was already very good, but now he is even more bad. As a result, no one was saved. Instead, because of the protagonist, those who might be saved by the Church of Light were directly destroyed. I want to ask the author what you want to express.

After seeing the plot of Dragon Valley, I think the protagonist still hasn't changed his mind. There are more than 10,000 giant dragons, aren't they more than 10,000 heavy-duty fighter planes in the air? They are divided into categories: those who are good at air combat can be used as fighters, those with high load-bearing capacity can be used as bombers, and those with high load capacity can be used as early warning aircraft. The Dragon Internet cafe has made a dragon simulation air combat game for training, and the dragon can be equipped with technology-side plug-ins 🙂. How cool is this? When the enemy came up from the air, they were first blasted by external missiles, pulled into the distance, and then fired another wave by the cannon of the dragon's external armor. Finally, they got close. Your sister, the dragon also had composite armor and reactive armor hanging on the outside. There is a helmet sight on the dragon's head and auxiliary attachment points on the wings. It's beautiful just thinking about it 😁

The goblin part is completely unreasonable. First of all, it is an impulsive assassination. If the new leader of the dragon clan is assassinated like this and the dragon clan cannot destroy the goblin kingdom, he can just go to the zoo. Don't talk about the issue of war potential. This is a racial bottom line issue. If the leader of your new generation is assassinated and is still indifferent or can't hurt the opponent, will the dwarves or the temple come to assassinate him next time? Secondly, in a world of swords and magic, there is a race that can develop relatively cheap weapons for saints. Then other races have no backup or just fight directly. Is it ridiculous to just sit back and watch the enemy get stronger step by step and then slowly die? And then the goblins can use this technology to target the dragons, then can the empire and the temple still be inferior to the goblins? If they are not as good as the goblins, then this division of forces is completely ridiculous. If they are better than the goblins, then why haven't the dragons entered the zoo and the cattle pen? The last point is that it is illogical for a world where great power belongs to itself to develop this kind of technology. One day, the goblins at the bottom will resist the oppression of the upper class. Why would the goblin high-level officials allow such a weapon that can threaten high-end combat power? You're not going to tell me that goblins are a unified society, are you? Just the name Goblin indicates that it is impossible for such little creatures to unite.

The protagonist is not strong enough as an individual, so he just hangs back. His own combat power is not high, and he has to run around with a bunch of unrelated women. It was enough to save them all, but in the end, a group of police officers and civilian women were killed due to lack of strength. Only one princess was rescued. All I can say is that this scenario is disgusting.

What year is it today? Why do you feel that there are so many high-quality western fantasy products popping up recently?

To be honest, if it weren't for the solid writing skills, this book would have collapsed. I can understand the treatment of the earth, but I don't support writing like this. To put it more abstractly, readers need buffers. The author's buffer zone is all arranged in a different world. Have you ever thought that from the reader's perspective, the earth is a natural buffer zone.

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I hope the author can continue to work hard and try to catch up with the exhaust of the bear, wolf and dog. Really, even if I catch him, the whole fantasy bundle is not enough to be a fantasy.

I haven't seen such an interesting article in a long time. Reading the beginning makes me, a former electromechanical dog, very excited. I decided to reward you hard 😎

I don't know what everyone is arguing about. I have read countless books, whether they are vicious or not, and I can read books with a single female protagonist, multiple female protagonists, no female protagonist, and a dog-licking male protagonist. The key is not to make the female protagonist too flowery. I am advancing the progress all the way, and the industrial part is written to my taste. The current heroine Zi Jin is also good. I have recently caught a key plot point. Here is a picture to congratulate me. I have failed many times due to being too edgy and barely managed to get a picture that I can see. 😁

Imagination and professionalism coexist, and the author is able to develop the plot from multiple angles and multiple lines, as well as various foreshadowings, and the deduction of the situation is also more reasonable. The world slowly unfolds with the plot. It is a rare excellent work.