Farming and Practicing Martial Arts Bring Peace to the World

So far, I personally think that the main problems are as follows. Please don't say that I'm a bad person, and don't say that you're good at it. It's true that my writing is not as good as the author's, but everyone can put forward their own opinions, right? First: How do I feel about this rhythm? It's very bad. The author gave the protagonist a high level at the beginning, and the samurai who was born in a short time was lower than the upper class. Then after the sixty or seventyth chapter, the protagonist's strength basically did not change, and he was still the lower class. Well, to be honest, it's a bit uncomfortable to watch😣. Second: The author probably wanted to write at a slow pace, and then kept deliberately suppressing the protagonist. If nothing happened, he would emphasize the protagonist's poor talent. It seems a bit speechless. The actual progress of the protagonist is not slow. Does the author emphasize the poor talent to show that the protagonist is a waste without Goldfinger? Third: I don't see the use of those outer spiritual roots at the moment, but I think it's just to give them to my family in the back, or eat them myself to improve my qualifications. But the outer spiritual roots are different from the inner spiritual roots. They should be used by outsiders, but there is no airtight wall in the world. Can the protagonist keep these outer spiritual roots? Fourth: The protagonist's characterization is really outrageous. After reading it now, I feel that the protagonist's character has no likable character and no outstanding points. If I have to say one characteristic, it is stupid. You know that spiritual fields can help crops grow better and faster. If you don't grow herbs but vegetables, are you afraid that you will starve to death? I don't think the protagonist has escaped from the economic crisis. Fifth: I still don't understand. The protagonist has obviously learned a lot of martial arts, but it's still so difficult to learn new ones. It's like you have learned 13+16=29, but when you learn 12+15, it's still as if you haven't learned anything. I don't understand this setting.

This number is good and quite auspicious 😁

Geographical determinism (the theory that geographical resources determine the direction of aggression) The abundance of survival resources (classic auras of animals and plants, etc.) Is tropical > temperate zone > cold zone, and there are situations where individual power exceeds collective power. The strong will dominate without the help of civilized countries and can do it alone. , So the parallel earth that relies heavily on foreign objects for cultivation should have more tropical people invading the temperate areas, and the cold zone people will not do much harm to the temperate areas. In other words, China in the parallel world will not be replaced by the invasion of nomads, but will be cannibalized, colonized and assimilated by Southeast Asia and South Asia. The same goes for Africa and South America. It is right that Europeans were sold as slaves. Even if there is a national luck setting, it is easier for tropical powers to cross geographical boundaries to forcibly enslave and unify foreign races than other regions, and their luck is no worse than that of temperate zones. But I haven't read many articles on luck. If the effect of luck is much greater than the power of individuals, and is strongly related to the degree of civilization development, then it is still unclear who is stronger or weaker between temperate countries and tropical countries. To say so much is not to criticize the setting of the book. My statement is general and I have not gone into the details. It is just that the idea that geographical resources determine the direction of aggression has been around for a long time. I was inspired by this article when I read this article about China's suppression of Southeast Asia. Other books also automatically incorporate the original history. Even though they rely on external objects to strengthen their own cultivation, they never consider this deeper issue. Doesn't any reader find it strange?

When I saw the fifth update, I immediately came to see if there were any new Shirogane Moe...

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If the silkworm girl didn't spin silk and make a cocoon, she would have grown up by shedding her skin. It's a pity that the protagonist could have added a reptile. The cultured adult toads molt from April to November and can molt more than 4 times a month. I don't know how the spiritual beast toad is going to be set to molt. Look at the golden toads that will shed their skins when they mate. The protagonist, the chicken thief, uses estrus magic to continuously harvest the shed skins. I wonder when Xiaobai and Xiaohong will give birth to cubs, and will they shed their skins afterwards? Every old man in a family is like a treasure. The old man doesn't want too many. He collects a long-lived turtle and bickers with the old fox. There are many animals that shed their skins, including beetles, Coleoptera, crabs, shrimps, spiders, centipedes and the like. Shrimps and crabs seem to shed their skins throughout their lives. Keeping reptiles is really suitable for the protagonist. It is strongly recommended that the protagonist raises reptiles and collects molted skins to exchange for fertilizer.

After reading a few chapters, I feel like Goldfinger is a little too prominent. I don't feel it, so I might as well make a martial arts system.

Does anyone have anything to say to Lao Bai?

This book failed because some novice readers threatened the author to tamper with the plot and raise the combat power too high. As a result, it couldn't be contained in the later stage. Lao Bai had no choice but to change the map. In the end, he had no idea and had to unfinish it. So now the author must not listen to those novices who insist on their own way of writing. Looking back at those trolls who don't add anything and don't vote, who don't change the plot and don't vote, it turns out that they are all trainees and they are clowns🤡

It's hard to imagine that you've written it and the dragon has died.

I can only say that the author has not made any progress after writing this for so many years. I stopped reading it from the time the woman appeared to the time when she started having an affair with the male protagonist. It's boring. The male protagonist is already strong, but he's restricted to the woman's family. It's wrong that they don't belong to the same family. There is such a big gap in strength between the male protagonist and the female. They have to be together. I vomited. Moreover, they somehow help each other within a few days of knowing each other. I'm speechless.

I'll go and see who I find? Isn't this Eunuch Bai! New book released again! Will definitely watch it. 🤓🤓🤓🤓

Two updates a day is enough for anyone to watch. The fans of the Eagles next door saw it and thought we looked down on it. Ten updates a day!

For lousy authors, I can only say to be careful when entering. You can even write books with good grades like Dalong failed, so what else can't be cut?

Someone Bai has a new book again. Guess how many words it has this time.

If the book friends who read this post are still hesitating because they are worried about being a eunuch in the book club, you can relax. You can follow this book with confidence. Lao Bai has conceived a lot of ideas in every aspect of this book. The outline world view and subsequent plot are very complete. It may be different from the taste of Dalong Fantasy, but it is really good-looking! The most important thing is that Lao Bai made up his mind and promised not to run away. He has paid me a huge sum of money. If he dares to run away, the huge sum of money will be mine. It just so happened that a new book was released in Sanjiang and it will be on the shelves soon. There will be a lot of updates once it is on the shelves. The book is now a little fatter and can be finished.

Xiaoqing

Human Martial Arts {Excellent martial arts to prevent damage, external skills, and horizontal training} The three realms of corporal - strongman, warrior, and samurai. The three realms of guru - master, grand master and grand master. {Zhongwu enters Zhe to calm the body and mind·Neigong·Qigong} The three realms of the lower class - layman, Taoist priest and Taoist priest. The three realms of guru - mage, heavenly master and great heavenly master. {Shang Wu Dao Dao Ping Tian Xian·Xian Dao} The Three Realms of the Corporal - Refining Qi and Transforming into Spirits The Three Realms of the Guru - Refining Qi and Transforming into God - Guru, Immortal Master, and Great Immortal Master. The three realms of corporal, each realm is divided into three levels: upper, middle and lower. Master, mage and guru are at the same level. It is divided into three categories: virtual elixir, real elixir and golden elixir. [Alien Cultivation] Spiritual beasts and evil spirits must overcome tribulations. Only after they have overcome tribulations can they have the fighting power of the three realms of guru.

I can't watch it any longer. Can't the protagonist keep some secrets? He has to tell others everything and pretend that others can keep it secret. If an enemy catches your parents and tortures them a little, others will turn out their underwear. The author's self-pleasure is too serious, there is no logic at all, and it doesn't mean that you can't say anything, but there is no need to say the important secrets. If you don't say it, it's okay. I feel that after reading this book, it is all supported by the halo of the protagonist. As I read it, I felt like I was back ten years ago. There were all kinds of domineering things, beauties falling into their arms, magical weapons, martial arts secrets, etc., But the novels ten years ago were not like this. I don't know what the author was writing. He was probably refining it. If he couldn't stand it, he would have left long ago. Think more before writing. Think about how you want to write it, or just drive screws! Alas, that's what I said too. Goodbye, everyone.

I like this kind of novel so much. It not only writes about strange and weird insects, birds, beasts and fish, but also about family life, short stories and fireworks in the world. It's so great! And the sense of pictures is very strong. I don't know if it's because my imagination is too rich. Every time I read the article, I feel like there are pictures appearing in front of me

I am now sure that the author has never held a management position. Can you fake death to look at me? What a shame you figured it out! The leader of a force suddenly died. It would be strange if this force is not in chaos. Then the protagonist pops up again. Alas, I am not dead. I am just playing. What do you want these subordinates to think? What a scam!

After reading 80 chapters, the writing is okay, but the setting of the realm and the physical setting of the protagonist are doomed to make this book unpopular. At most, a small number of people can read it. Reading such awesome plug-ins does make me feel frustrated. The writing is not as refreshing as the writing...

The author here binds trust in family members with disclosure of secrets, but this binding itself is problematic. The protagonist leads his relatives to make a fortune through the spiritual field. Doesn't this show trust? It seems that trust means that all secrets must be told publicly. This kind of forced binding is very inconsistent and awkward. It would be okay if this secret could be kept forever, but can it really be kept secret forever? If one day someone talks in sleep, is drunk, talks too fast, is listened to, and cannot help but show off, it may not be intentional, but even if it is not intentional, it greatly increases the probability of the secret being leaked. This is from an unintentional but leaky perspective. (This in itself is enough to be a major flaw. Even if it is later written that the protagonist Qian Ren perfectly kept the secret, it has already discouraged a large number of readers. If the author later develops a plot in which the protagonist's relatives leak the secret and attract powerful enemies, it will be enough to ruin the book) From the perspective of intentional leakage, even among relatives, there is also the problem of inequality rather than scarcity. Even if the protagonist has supported them a lot, they may still only see the part that the protagonist has more than them and produce various envy, jealousy and hatred. In addition, people are not born with various beautiful qualities, such as perseverance and resilience, such as self-reflection, such as the quality of keeping promises, such as the loyalty of keeping secrets. These all require acquired education, which may be the teaching and guidance of theory, or the painful lessons of reality. Especially for uneducated people, if they grow up in an environment where the bottom class harms each other, and they are uneducated, they have no idea how to be a good person (this is also part of the reason why the saying goes, "Unruly people come out of poor places, although it is biased"), how can we assume that they have noble character and can keep secrets all the time? For another example, secrets are passed on from ten to ten, and the protagonist's father regards his brothers and sisters as the closest people, but brothers and sisters also have brothers and sisters' friends, and there is no guarantee that someone will choose to leak the secret in order to gain a relationship with another person (this price does not have to be paid by the person, and it can be said to be a loss-free, because he has only completed the transmission of the information, but the painful price has been paid by the protagonist). For a self-aware person, when his best friend/relative tells him the secret, he will even actively refuse to listen or refuse to explore carefully, for fear of accidentally leaking it. For example, the protagonist's father is a self-aware person. He knows that the protagonist does not know how to obtain the spiritual root, but he does not inquire further. Obviously this is already good, why do you have to continue writing and leak the secret to more people? Not to mention whether major secrets should be kept in front of relatives, but here is at least a plot with major controversy. How dare the author write such a controversial topic? Are you really not afraid of dissuading a large number of readers? (I find that many authors just can't tell whether the novel is written for themselves or for readers. If you write for yourself, of course you can be willful and write whatever you want, but don't expect to make a lot of money; if you are writing for readers, you should avoid it as much as possible. Some plots that are obviously controversial, although it is difficult for everyone to agree, but this operation can win over more readers to the greatest extent. However, authors without this self-awareness should not expect their works to become popular.) Well, screening readers and purifying fans, right? Then let him screen it, I won't accompany you.

Setting of the work - Corporal 3rd class - Strong Warrior Warrior, 3rd Class Master - Grand Master Grand Master. Official level setting - five levels: country, province, city, county, township, and no level. Fifth level/national level - grand master, fourth level/provincial level - grand master, Fourth deputy/deputy provincial/regional governor (Pengli region has three cities and 22 counties under its jurisdiction) - master (upper third level), third level/municipal mayor - master (middle third level), second level/county governor - master (lower third level). In fact, regions, cities and counties are all on the same level. The powerful Master Zhu convinced the rest of the three cities to form the Peng Clan of Pengli District. First-class chief/township forestry director--warrior, first-class deputy/deputy township--warrior.

The new book is good. Old readers can read it again, and new readers can give it a try. I hope it won't be a tj.

I still can't understand your realm classification, it's a mess

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The background of this era is not good! It would be nice to have gunpowder guns in the Ming Dynasty. Otherwise, if we had aircraft cannons in the 1980s, we should also have machine guns! The marksmanship of the guru realm can penetrate iron as well as tofu, and the AK used by the soldiers can also penetrate iron as well as tofu. It can also be fired continuously. The heavy machine gun is even capable of killing warriors at the corporal level. Unless you practice martial arts to a great master, it won't be of much use in the world of hot weapons. There is also a war in which Chuanwutang teachers are on the front lines. How can students have a holiday? Just pull down the front line for exercise! It's not convenient to charge. It's better to be a commander's guard in the rear and do some chores.

What I wrote earlier is quite good, but it's a pity that it's unfinished. We are all mortals, so it is generally easier to write in the mortal stage. After all, it is supported by basic science and will not be messy. But when it comes to the fairy world, it is over. It is very easy to get stuck in the state of whether to comply with basic science. If you can't continue writing, it will be unfinished.

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