Immortal Tang: Starting from Teaching the Immortal Moon Refining

The wording is so exaggerated, a bit artificial

The words and sentences are frivolous and do not suit the atmosphere of classical fairy tales. The characters cannot stand up and are monotonous. The plot is unstable and randomly generated. The setting of the founder of the new immortal way is not bad, and he also has the idea of ​​​​traveling through levels of cultivation to fight monsters. It is a waste for the author of so many books to write like this.

Is this protagonist trying to wipe out the old spirit of Liutian? So where will the protagonist stand in the future? If you side with the imperial court, you will definitely carry forward your new immortal way, which will inevitably cause a conflict with the old forces. During the Anshi Rebellion, you are destined to have a fight with the cannibal monks on the Anlu Mountain side.

Isn't "supernatural" a word in Western fantasy? Nowadays, all immortals and heroes use it. When I see the extraordinary, I think of knights, wizards and so on. What a show.

Hey, it's completely the nanny school. Li Bai was raised as a son. Li Bai pretended to be B everywhere and messed around. The protagonist tried his best to wipe his butt. No wonder his grades were so poor.

The choice of words and sentences is too artificial and too pretentious. People who like it will like it very much. I am too old to watch it.

The essence of entertainment literature is easy to understand, the essence of serious literature is profound meaning, the essence of explanatory literature is conciseness and conciseness, and the essence of poetry and parallel prose is the elongation of artistic conception. It's amazing to be able to do all four things.

If you preach, you will naturally become a master, why should you be called a Taoist brother?

There are no people in the comment area, there are too many explanatory contents, and the pretentious plot is indeed not very satisfying. The author wants the protagonist to have a spirit of "I come to the world for all living beings and look down on the world." The problem is that the pretentiousness is too stiff, and the content is not very smooth. My biggest feeling after reading it is that all the actions of the protagonist are done out of necessity.

It feels like the protagonist is too hasty. If you don't build power, you will mess around and make reforms. It is still worthwhile to rebel and establish an earthly country. Liquidate various aristocratic landowners.

The pretense is so disgusting, and you can't hold it back even though you're pretending, anyone can take it easy.

Recommendation: The protagonist whose talent is severely limited sacrifices himself to an island country and is reincarnated into the Tang Dynasty. Here, find out the new immortal way and vow to break through the shackles of the previous life. What kind of wonderful things will happen in this prosperous Tang Dynasty by teaching Taibai, the relegated immortal, and Zimei, the poet saint, to cultivate immortality? In this world, how would the direction of history be different? Will the prosperous Tang Dynasty decline? Let's find out in the book! Point 1: The writing style of this book is excellent and the wording is just right. Although online articles do not value these, good writing will always bring readers a better reading experience. It is said that articles have an outline, and the outline of a chapter is the title. The chapter titles in this book are basically dual, and the summary is concise and concise. Point 2: The protagonist is decisive in killing, arrogant and unruly, but also kind-hearted, willing to help some poor people, and has a full character image. As the era of the prosperous Tang Dynasty, the legendary figure of Taibai who was banished to the immortal was indispensable. The author also has some different views on Li Bai. Isn't Li Bai, who has been seeking official positions all his life, pursuing fame and fortune? Point 3: As the plot develops, the protagonist's new immortality will inevitably conflict with the old immortality. What kind of sparks will the friction between the old and new immortality create? As the background of the Tang Dynasty, will the subsequent historical trend change due to the protagonist? These are quite worth looking forward to. Of course the most important thing is that this book will not be a eunuch! Not a eunuch! Not a eunuch! If you like Xianxia and the prosperous Tang Dynasty, you can watch it! {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}

In other words, if it is to preach, then preach it openly; if it is to ascend to immortality, then fight for it. It's not like writing it like this, but also including historical celebrities. Slipping away

It's about cultivating the Tao in the open, but secretly it's about fighting for power and gain.

Class will always exist and will never disappear! The cake can no longer grow and can only grow outward! How did the United States develop? One station ago, the economy in the United States was in depression, but the next station, the outbreak of World War II led to the emergence of the largest country.

You should write food articles. I follow your food articles every time. This is really inappropriate.

Recommendation: The protagonist of this book travels to a world of immortals and heroes in the Tang Dynasty. It is also the peak of peace and prosperity. Land and resources are monopolized in the hands of the imperial family. Strange people from various sects are lurking in the secret and are ready to make trouble. People are still living in dire straits. The protagonist spent a long time cultivating in such an era, making friends with dignitaries, strange people and hermits from all walks of life, and came up with the idea of ​​​​reform and innovation to create an era. For book lovers who like novels such as The Age of Change, this book is your fairy tale! Book title: "The Immortal Tang Dynasty: Starting from Teaching the Immortal Moon Refining" Author: Si Wen Ke Nangong Hen Status: Serialization (150,000 words) Elements: Immortal Heroes of the Tang Dynasty, passionate cultivating immortals, group portraits Recommended reader types: Immortal novels, historical articles, group portrait articles, lovers of the changing times Highlights of this book: ★Historical figures in the world of Xianxia The beginning of the book describes the protagonist's interactions with historical figures such as the poet Li Bai and the poet Du Fu, and teaches them spiritual practice. The appearance of such historical figures in fictional Xianxia novels always gives people a sense of knowing joy. Of course, book lovers have their own feelings! ★Detailed descriptions of ordinary people This book spends a lot of pen and ink describing the poor and miserable lives of ordinary people. The details are quite detailed, showing that the peaceful and prosperous times are just the prosperous times of the aristocratic families, and provide support for the main plot protagonist in the changing era. Fans of novels about the changing times should be able to understand it best. {"TopicId":"847235287436099584","TopicName":"New book trial reading"}

The author's ideal world is so beautiful, but it's a pity that I can only watch from the sidelines, and even hold back. I hope everyone can do something to promote the advancement of the times.

Come on, keep on keeping on, I have to finish writing.