I Have a Restaurant in Dongying

Test the poison on the eve of the limited exemption. Represents personal views only. The biggest problem with this book is reflected in Chapter 12. That is: too many elements. Sewing, you can sew anything😜.

I have read both this book and the previous book. What can I say? The first point is that every time I write a book, it takes several chapters, which is indeed a bit watery. I won't say anything if you give the big eaters in the world so much cooking water, but what do you mean by giving water to some unimportant competitions? This is not a TV! If you are writing a novel, no one will think that you are full of energy! The second point is that there are so many customers in the heavens that they cook all day long until they can no longer stand up. Without this point, it feels like there is no point in opening a restaurant. I don't know if there's anything behind this, but I can't stand the front anyway, it's too watery.

Is there any curse in writing food articles? Why do you feel that the authors who write food articles are all at their peak when they debut, and the first one is the best, and then the downhill road goes down at the speed of light, getting worse and worse, and even the previous highlights are gone The first question Although the cups in the previous book were a bit awkward, the main plot was well planned, and the food descriptions were also good. Why is it that this book only has hard cups... I beg the author, as you said, the most important thing about food is the taste! In the food section, we should write about the food clearly first. The description of the food alone is still good.Can you stop worrying about inserting your puppet show-style mouth-filling cup into it? ! ! What's the Cooking scene in a different state? It's almost enough to say a few words about the dishes after cooking and serving them... The response to enjoying the food is not to let you put down the glass. The opening chapter is about making and eating Jigoku Bliss Noodles. Most of them are described by Yujiro Noma, it's hard to say Concubine's Smile has three chapters, and the content ratio is almost one and a half chapters. It is about the Riddler's lament, interspersed with a chapter about cup filling, and food descriptions without the puppet show. Is it 1,500 words? It's outrageous In the third course, Tanjiro makes udon noodles and the pork ribs shakiji. Finally, it feels like a food article! I just looked down at the udon noodles and sweet and sour short ribs Then cooking for Senzaemon was really confusing to me. Why do you keep inserting a bag in the middle of the cooking and filling the cup in a white style? Black and White Man vs. Heaven and Earth are intolerable, right? How about putting on hair extensions with everyone? The second problem I think the biggest problem in the first few dozen chapters is thelarge length of The Riddler, which prevents the main world of your comprehensive comic from being extended, and the planning and positioning of combat power cannot be carried out That's not to say that I won't let you ambush and leave surprises for the Riddler, but you can't do riddles just for the sake of riddles... I can tolerate other riddles, but seeing that now there are more than 100,000 words in chapters 40 and 50, can you, the uncrowned king, say goodbye to the Riddler? I have written it no less than ten times, right? Determining the identity of the divine envoy and the trial layout of the opening food court Shiji plot are all centered around this point, and then you put this uncrowned king. The uncrowned king, what do you mean? Please explain it to everyone Compared to Caibo , the first uncrowned king after Caibo, okay, I thought you were some kind of newly promoted special chef. Looking back, you don't look like a special chef. You are so boastful. Compare it to Caibo who was promoted to special chef after traveling, and then quickly promoted to Linchu. I wonder if this is the uncrowned king? Is this the top five shokuji from Caibo? Is the special grade just blowing numb? Afterwards, I saw that the author described the state of an incomplete Heavenly King, or that there were no obstacles before being promoted to Heavenly King. Could it be that he understood the posture of the Heavenly King literally? Just (my son Wang Teng has the appearance of an emperor?) But the protagonist is here with Yang YuhuanThe road ahead is cut off! I'm going my own way! Grandma, Senzaemon and other passers-by: Ah, you have said it over and over again that the road ahead is over Aren't you embarrassed, brother, you haven't explained it clearly to everyone, the uncrowned king of the right path, so just leave it alone. I don't see the right path, and I want to go my own way! It's not that I won't let you take the right path, you have to tell everyone why, right? Let's just say I'm the protagonist, so get out of the way and don't delay me getting the cup, so just pretend, right? Then Mapo Tofu Duel seems to be explained but not explained. Is the author trying to say that Zhenglu pays too much attention to artistic conception and not to taste? Then the food they cook is not unpalatable, right? In your description, it seems that Zhenglu has not given up on his taste, right? Your description is not consistent with what I understand you to mean... On the contrary, when you were cooking before, you always clung to your different kitchen environment, writing a chapter, which was both a fairyland and a human world. Now you have to pay attention to the taste again, which is more or less formal and upright, right? Now that you want to win, you start to worry about other people's intentions. Why don't you just fight for a long time and I will take care of you? What are you doing,this is the uncrowned king? ? ? If the fight lasts for a long time, I will have to rely on storytelling to win, right? I'm stunned. Do you really rely on just one mouth to reach your level? Or if you want to use the flavor of your way to defeat the meaning of the right path, then you have to write clearly to everyone. Your discussion and description are really completely inconsistent. You can't let readers rely solely on their imagination to read the book... Just a riddler, everyone seems to understand but not completely In general, it is riddle after riddle, and then a passerby comes out to remind everyone of the Uncrowned King,Don't forget the Uncrowned King! Then continue the riddles Yang Yuhuan finished the riddles of everyone in the shrine The riddles of everyone in the shrine finished the riddles of Saiha The riddles of Saiha finished the riddles of Senzaemon The riddles of Senzaemon finished the riddles of Saba and the passers-by The riddles of Saba and the passers-by finished the riddles of the Godslayer Dark Cuisine World, Gourmet Club, IGO, Totsuki Wait, wait Everyone understands it, but that's it for the riddles The author understands all the characters in the book, so readers don't understand, right? After watching Mapo Tofu Showdown, I couldn't stand it anymore, so I jumped over and took a look at the acceptance speech, my dear, are all food writers pursuing breakthroughs and then failing? The emperor can't survive the second life and then dies at the speed of light, right 2333 Order a chapter and open a thread to discuss it. Brothers, I can't stand it anymore. It's really hard to find food articles now, but I just keep reading like this and I really can't restrain my soul of complaining. Can anyone explain it to me or discuss it with everyone?

The author should consider finishing the previous book

To be honest, the old author is very capable, but this book is too messy and a hodgepodge. Whether it is the power system or the various copies, the core food and cooking are reduced to scraps. So after reading it all, my reaction was: What is this? It is neither the heavens nor the food. It is quite disturbing to watch. It is better to honestly write a world-by-world food journey in the heavens. In that way, you can write about movies, TV series, animations, etc., Slowly grow and become stronger, and appreciate various different styles, such as ordinary cuisine, luminous cuisine, and even write more interesting or outrageous in the later period, cooking gods and monsters. After all, the planets in the prisoners of food are all food. Come on, there are not many people who are still writing food novels.

If you add too much of something, it will make you feel low.

The only problem with this book is that there are too many villains, and they are sent one by one regardless of life and death. Of course, the big guys are not adventurous, but the small and medium-sized villains are really awesome. The protagonist is getting more and more awesome, and his reputation is getting more and more scary. However, the villains are sent up as if they are really committing suicide. They always feel good about themselves and think they have a chance. Then they are shot to death in batches, sent in batches, and die in batches. It is annoying.

Busujima Saeko

Erina

Every time the author succeeds in writing a food novel, he will reward himself by writing a historical fantasy novel

Food is not the only prisoner of food. Anyone who has seen food prisoners knows that it is very difficult to obtain delicious food ingredients, so there are food hunters. The prisoner of food, food or the menu of life is the goal, adventure and battle are the process, after hard battles and adventures, enjoying the delicious food while improving combat effectiveness. Or eat rare delicacies at critical moments to increase combat effectiveness. It can be said that The Prisoner of Food is an adventurous and passionate battle drama with the menu of life as the main line. Just delicious food or just adventurous battles are not enough.

Can you write less about Death and Naruto? They have no interest at all.

The system can be said to be just a decoration. After reading dozens of chapters, I still don't know what the protagonist's abilities are, and there is no panel. Moreover, there are too many Japanese comics, which can be said to be 99% of Japanese comics.

Since we are writing about Chinese food, we should refer to it in terms of Chinese food, not just this cuisine and that cuisine, but who is the cook?

I'm really speechless. You can just write a few anime into one, but you have to write a lot of them. I can't understand what you are thinking.

I want to know one thing, why does the protagonist always wipe other people's butts? The more I look at it, the more frustrated I become

Why do this type of food articles always break away from the main theme of cooking for diners and watching their happy expressions, but instead always involve themselves in all kinds of miscellaneous things? Is it true that any prisoner whose background is fused with delicious food will become like this? After reading so many books, I thought it would be better to be a chef in Japan.

It's so boring. Of the more than 600 chapters, I probably only read a hundred or so. All of them kept skipping, and it didn't affect my viewing.

It is said to be a multi-world system. To put it bluntly, it is a Japanese animation system. It is all Japanese. If you gradually grow up and defy the sky and the earth, you can defy the air. But I saw a story about a Zhongzhou person who was said to be ambitious and proud, and for various reasons "serviced" the eight million monsters over there. There is a saying that no matter how powerful a slave is, he will only be a slave.

I don't understand how Genshin Impact can get in with everything.

This author's books always fail to read in the early stage. A good food article must write about ghosts, and you must get certain privileges from ghosts. Please, this world is a food setting. There are many chefs who are better than you in the early stage. If it is the middle and later stages, this setting is still okay. In the early stage, a kindergarten leader cooked for the king of ghosts and conquered the king. This king is too ignorant. You can still watch it if you skip to the back. I hope it gets better and better. It's not suitable for me.

Even if you copy it, you won't be able to write at the same level as the previous one. You, the author, have regressed.

…What you are writing is not about food, it is about fantasy; the focus is not on food, but on special effects.

There is a serious problem with the division of realms, and the setting is often messed up. Earlier, it was said that the peak of the god level is also the broken star level, but later, the emperor who covers the world is also the true god level. It is outrageous enough. The broken star level can become the cosmic level after breaking through. The Great Saint Body has been over-hyped. Anyway, various bugs take advantage of different settings.

The character description is indeed quite thin, maybe because it is a comprehensive comic, and the author directly used the characters of the work in the novel, and did not bother to depict the characters. In order to wrap up the world view, I ended up using several online novels to complete the world view setting. I originally thought it would be a comprehensive comic novel with pure animation works, which is also surprising and regrettable.

I just read Chapter 20, and I feel that the writing is okay, but I always feel that the reading threshold is a little high 😰, which is not conducive to attracting people who don't read it often.

The writing is okay, but it feels like the whole thing is broken and messy.

It's written that Busujima Saeko is gone

I want to see what the protagonist Jiang Yuanchen in Tahoe looks like when he goes to the cafeteria.

That Infinity Train is a piece of shit