Starting from Tokyo, a Spiritual Revival Begins

Do the monks and eunuchs have to watch after multiple women chase them? 😅😅😅

This book is so well written! ! I read some behind-the-scenes novels in the past. The protagonist takes the extraordinary test and is popular and popular. The protagonist works in a small shop and is bullied not only by extraordinary people but also by ordinary people. Is it interesting? ? The protagonist of this book is well written! !

I'm not very used to this weird hero saving beauty. I take the initiative to attack the opponent and then save the beauty hero. It feels very strange. If the woman knows how to explain this operation in the end, is it the type that she has to hide for the rest of her life?

The protagonist can't leave the factory, and it's boring if he doesn't end up. The character he created is prosperous and wealthy, and then he works in his own shop. Such behind-the-scenes writing is just a mess.

Can you see it? I just checked the comments and saw that they were talking about behind the scenes + harem. I almost felt sick to death when I saw the women around the protagonist of the sacred tree. Isn't this the same?

Author, if you can let go of your obsession with women, you can improve your grades in all the books (Name the Poison Island)

The writing style is too middle-of-the-road! It makes me so embarrassed that I have cancer

It can't be said to be a common problem, it's just a personal opinion. After all, some people must like this, but I still want to say, why do these behind-the-scenes people writing in Tokyo always have trouble with these female characters? They all have their own way of doing things, they are doing big things, they are still obsessed with the love between their children, and the most important thing is that they are not good at writing at all, and it is easy to be clever, so why do you still stick to the heroine? Then, while writing about behind-the-scenes stories, you always end up personally, without even wearing a vest. What we are saying is, if you want to write about my own approach, about collecting beauties, and all kinds of standard cool articles, why do you have to deal with the theme of spiritual energy recovery? Just write a standard cool novel, why not give the protagonist a xxxx system?

Stop writing those docile words, don't write any stream of consciousness, write down who the woman who is surrounded by the Boxing Club and a bunch of powerful people is Kurogiri and who (Senjougahara Kuroi and his daughter). There is too much nonsense in the first twenty chapters, the words are open and the Lord is closed, and the prayers are too awkwardly written.

The introduction states that the protagonist wants to collect all kinds of beautiful girls, but there are still a lot of people in the comment area asking questions. To be honest, if you don't need your eyes, you can donate them!

The author's protagonist is still diaosi's thoughts. You can create life, and you still want to have a harem

Is it deliberately too confusing? I felt like I was in a fog. After reading dozens of chapters, I still didn't know what the protagonist wanted to do.

There is no way that Emperor Guo Hai lost to Yujiro. Yujiro is really not a human being. But in this book, I want to see that Yujiro tried his best but could not break through the defense of the extraordinary strong man in East University.

You should go to Beijing to strengthen Jingye

With the harem behind the scenes, is the author so dazzling and depressing?

I can only say that I can barely watch it. It is said to be behind the scenes, but it has almost been exposed, and he does not wear a mask when seeing others. It was directly exposed to the heroine and asked her to be loyal to her without even wearing a mask. There are also hundreds of ghosts created by oneself, and every ghost knows the identity of the protagonist. What kind of behind the scenes?

I pinched my nose and read dozens of chapters, but I still couldn't stand it. The writing was too awkward, just a few adjectives coming back and forth. The fighting was like playing. The supporting characters were either shocked or horrified. If you want to write a compelling story, don't write too much about the psychological drama of the supporting characters. Just write about the behavior.

I looked at the author's homepage. I have written books for ten years and have created more than 10 million words in total. If I only improve a little bit in a year, I will not be at this level of writing, right? This writing style is as difficult as just starting to learn to write online articles. Not to mention the second grade, the use of various inexplicable words is outrageous. Is this a fantasy language record for junior high school students? 😅😅

The subject matter is a good one, and the man behind the scenes + the two-dimensional characters are really attractive. But the author's writing style is not good for three reasons. First, the narrative is incomplete, which makes the plot a bit fragmented. The second is censorship, that is, I always like to use some words and phrases that look very powerful, but are actually incompatible with the context, and feel a bit like a monkey. The third point is that there is no distinction between priority and importance. The parts that have no impact on the plot are greatly explained, but the plot is hastily done.

The author is incredible, how could he be so embarrassed? He really feels like a middle-aged child and has masturbated too much. I can't stand it anymore 🙂

I wanted to write something awesome, but I used a lot of impetuous words, and I just used them, but I couldn't use them well. Not great.

So far it seems to be well written. The protagonist is invincible. When it's time to pretend, it's not a group portrait. Come on.

The beginning was okay, but the quality of Clone Gods dropped immediately📉. After watching it for a while, I had no desire to subscribe to the end.

The writing has improved very quickly, and the presentation is large and deep. You have to read a long paragraph in one go to feel good. Otherwise, it will be difficult to fish. But I still hope there will be more plots for the protagonist and more interactions between the protagonist and other anime characters. Otherwise, writing a comprehensive comic will be meaningless.

The writing is too frivolous, and the author's mind was filled with excitement There is no detailed description of the scene, it is all fake clichés, nouns, and characters.

Comparing his previous books, I can't say that his writing style has dropped down the level. Is it like learning Chinese from scratch? 😅

It's so embarrassing. The writing level of a second grader in junior high school?

Indeed... The amount of (poison) is large (hair) and the body (body) is full (death).

What kind of rubbish novel is this? Can normal people understand the end of it?

So Yotsuya Miko is a daily manga? This is too everyday, right?