I Have a Grand Voyage Game

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Last year, when I first read word game novels such as The Lord and Toxic, I felt that they were either folklore or genre-defining. I was thinking that this type of novel would be really good if it was about extraordinary sailing. Unexpectedly, I finally waited for it 😭

Personally, I think it is poisonous and disgusting 1: If you have an archive, don't use it, just leave it and analyze it blindly, and then keep it if you think it has side effects; you can shoot whatever you have with the archive, the key is that the archive does not see any restrictions, and you still write these things from the perspective of the protagonist. Does it make sense? Two: While saying that you are a hamster gang, let those pirates go. The key is to give an explanation that the experience given by the pirates is low. You might as well not explain. No matter how small a mosquito is, it is still meat! There are some well-written plots, but in the context of this game that can be saved, it seems particularly awkward. The key is that you can't ignore it. The story is good, but not to my liking. Farewell. I wish you will write better and better.

Being able to save at no cost is not a bad point, it is even a bit fun to be able to write. . But being able to save it almost without using it is a poisonous point. . There are no tricks at all, it seems that the protagonist has very low intelligence

You can read it, but this book has a lot of conspiracies. The protagonist's golden finger looks very awesome, but the author suppresses it. The most common magic potion in the mysterious system is one. The golden finger is awesome, but the protagonist written by the author is a trash. Then there is nothing to be done. No way, there is no way to cure the curse of the crew, and I don't take it seriously if I am cursed by the contract. If there is danger, I will use the deus ex machina, which will only suppress the protagonist. Only one of the three clones is useful. The protagonist only has regret medicine, but it is of no use if he has no power. Even the regret medicine is out of control.

Don't get that little white-eyed wolf on board. This kind of person who loves to show off his anger is very unpopular.

I can't help it, I can't stand it anymore after reaching chapter 30. There is a ship interface in the first three chapters, where you can collect materials to upgrade, but the pirate ship you grabbed later disappeared inexplicably. This setting was simply thrown away, and you turned on the reverse gear, which can reproduce the items to the real game. Looking for someone, there is no way to track him down, just looking for a needle in a haystack, the only useful seed has no idea what it does, throw out the secret treasure setting, write about how awesome he is, and then mention that you can't get the secret treasure if you don't accept the contract. The real-life plot is also inexplicable, and it has nothing to do with the plot. Why write about him? If there is no shadow at all, it is meaningless water. Of course, these are all minor problems. After all, there are not many. But if you use the model of navigation, it is actually a pure stand-alone game. The whole process is to kill monsters, clone monsters to kill monsters, and find materials. As for your main line, give a potion system, do not collect occult knowledge, and have skills to learn knowledge. It is the same as Bai Bai. There is no ship. Isn't it a pure digression? I want to recruit partners. The vice-captain doesn't write down the attributes when he gets on the ship. Then more than sixty chapters are written inexplicably. You can make up for it if you want. There is a magic potion in what you wrote. You can show it after taking the potion. Because you accept the partners later, you can make up the previous ones. I am really speechless. This is a game and you don't intend to write it to be related to reality. Then add more game elements. Just write down the attributes honestly in the early stage. The talent is occult, and the skills are added to occult knowledge. Instead of learning occult knowledge, I learn the craftsman skills for shipbuilding, and the blacksmith in the back (I read other people's comments), write a legendary fishing talent, and there is no fishing in the back. I just catch a magic potion in the front, but I can't see the effect at all in the back. That's it, I really want to see a good book about navigation, but you...

Readers who want to see multiplayer online hedging in the real world, please take a detour From now on, this book will mostly contain game plots and less real-world plots. Please read according to your personal preference.

Often suppresses the protagonist's strength. In order to suppress the protagonist, the protagonist's brain is discarded when adding points and unreasonable points are added.

Pure game writing, so pure that it cannot write anything other than the game control interface.