Crisis Management Game

The battle scenes and plot design of this book are based on the level of food and grass. The only thing that affects the score is probably the emotional drama. In the current indescribable situation, if the emotional drama is to be a bonus, it requires strong writing skills. At present, it seems that the author is a bit behind in this area. The emotional drama in this book is the biggest poisonous point.

When I saw Chapter 25, after returning from the end of the game, the protagonist continued to inspire to be a policeman, I felt something was wrong and the author was trying to make a big deal out of it. Sure enough, I read the book review directly and found that all the subsequent game worlds are very large and not as exciting as the first world at all. (Note: This record was reviewed after purchasing a chapter)

When the male protagonist encounters the female protagonist or the plot where the female protagonist appears, he starts to get poisonous, and all kinds of illiteracy and brainlessness appear. I really love writing emotional dramas, and everyone spends real money reading them. Are you just feeding shit like this? If you can't think of a good plot, you don't have to write it. You can abandon the book and blacklist it.

First of all, let me state that I insisted on reading it. This book is at least readable and not bad. However, due to various needs and wants, the trend of collapse began in the middle and later stages. It felt that the author could no longer come back, so he could only help with the ending. Advantages 1. The protagonist's combat power is stable, and the props are just right. There is no situation where Superman's combat power collapses due to the improvement of the system. 2. Each copy, especially the Myanmar part, is really well written, exciting and has enough sense of immersion. It is really good. Disadvantages 1. The emotional lines are in a mess, the childhood sweetheart, ex-girlfriend, and parents lines are all templated, just a few hints are unnecessary. 2. Regarding the system, it can be said that it is broken. Character upgrading is useless, which is only highlighted during training. In dungeons and real-life conflicts, except for slightly faster reaction speed, it has no other effect. Take the route of a tactical wise man and spend a lot of space talking about the purpose of improving the internal organs. 3. Regarding THEO, the Twelve Apostles started but ended, and even BOSS Bakken was written to death. I won't write about the group portrait war between the two camps, THEO and 7472. 4. Regarding 7472, it collapsed midway. A realistic organization does not have any material financial foundation, or even a program or punishment regulations, and relies purely on love to generate electricity. 5. Regarding Gu Jian and Curly Hair, I once wanted to write an independent line, and the Nepal copy seems to be able to sense the progress of the system. The style is very high, but it is always soy sauce. Two years of suspended animation has no critical role. 6. Regarding Gu Ji's identity. I don't know why I have to insist on being a police officer. In the later stage, when the T1 special forces of various countries compete or compete, the identity of the police is very interesting, especially when the weapons are upgraded to missiles, submarines, AC130 and other cross-border small-scale wars. In general, it is similar to the fact that I could have gone to Tsinghua and Peking University, but I only got into three. It can be seen, but it is still far from becoming a god.

The book opens high and sells low. The first dungeon was called Conferred God, and then it went downhill and became more and more boring. I chose to skip most of the real-life copies due to warnings from book friends and the free portion of the trial chapters. But just looking at the game copy is getting more and more boring. Jump soon to see the end.

If you really don't know how to write the emotional part, you don't have to write it. The writing really brings down the overall level.

First, the golden finger is not unique to the protagonist. The protagonist is equivalent to a public beta player, and there are a group of closed beta players ahead. So far, it has not been shown what advantages the protagonist has over those closed beta players, because the author of those players has not yet written it, so let's see the follow-up. Second, according to the current trend, it is difficult for me not to suspect that the author wants to write the protagonist's classmate Gao Bo as the protagonist's stepfather. Gao Bo praised the protagonist's mother in front of the protagonist's parents, and the protagonist said that he likes his wife. Then in the subsequent plot, his father was written to death (disappeared). Fortunately, this is the starting point. If I changed the website, I would have doubted the direction of this book.

I really feel disgusted with this heroine. She is a classic childhood sweetheart who has a crush on the hero without knowing it. Later, she discovers that she has been silently accompanying the heroine. I feel a little nauseous when I see her. The role is very important and she is not just a passerby. The author doesn't think that his emotional drama is good, right? This female protagonist is so disgusting that I would rather see the male protagonist sleeping with and having sex all over the place in the game

The subject matter is good and the details are full. But the characters and some of the plot are kind of shit. The story structure is still too dungeon-heavy, but it would be pointless to break away from the dungeons. There are too many details and no focus on the characters and storyline. The slightly old-fashioned way of opening a dungeon has the advantage of homogeneity. The overall evaluation is poor. Excellent details make it easier to highlight the shortcomings of characters and plot.

I took a few bites of the snail noodles and it was delicious, but very smelly The dry and delicious naan became moldy and spoiled in a humid place The Wuchang treasure rice was mixed with smelly live maggot cheese. If the author doesn't know how to write, don't write. If you insist on talking about three-dimensionality, you have to stand up when you become a prostitute It's hard to calm down, the late meaning of the sun, something born! 😡

I felt pretty good after reading the first two dungeons, but I didn't expect that the third dungeon was a big mess. It's really better to write a pure system. When I saw the protagonist's father returning to China to find him, I knew something was going to happen. It was really a crash.

Try to write as few emotional lines as possible. It's very dramatic and a little brainless.

Not enough, not enough

A little opinion, don't comment if you don't like it! I have read more than a hundred chapters, and the overall feeling is very good. However, the copy of World War II is very uncomfortable to read. The latest tactical ideas that have been used in the old battlefields, to be honest, feel very distorted. I hope the author will write less copies of battlefields that are too old. After all, there are many cases and data to support the writing of copies. Or use a shell, for example, put some things from World War II into the current war somewhere. It will be more comfortable not to use the background of World War II, because your practical tactics, passwords, etc. Are all modern improvements, not those of the time. No team will be unscathed the first time when adapting to new tactics, right?

A few acceptable concepts on the market are combined, and it can probably affect the simulation of monster killing and upgrading in real life. However, the routines are relatively fixed, and the writing is not very good. It is difficult to chew food and grass when it is said that local dogs are not earthy enough. If I have this ability, I might as well read some fan fiction. If you know of an author with good writing skills who writes about similar topics, please recommend it to me, thank you!

Come on!

The book is finished after the first copy, and there is no need to read the rest. I don't know what I want to write about. There are a lot of things put together. A game is just a game. If you have to force it into reality, it will collapse sooner or later. The second dungeon was obviously supposed to be about zombies appearing in a city, but it was forcibly transformed into a cruise ship in order to conform to reality. You are a special police officer, and the skills you learned in the game are also police skills, but the result is that you can bring them into ordinary people. Normally, it should be a game where you bring in special teams to perform missions and strengthen yourself to become a real soldier. So your setting is that the aliens strengthen you and become the savior?

Faster and faster. Who can read this? I saved it for a month and finished it in one afternoon.

There are not many articles of this type that have been fully subscribed. The author's writing style has improved a lot. I look forward to the next chapters.

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Good looking

Come on👏I haven't seen such a theme for a long time

I can't keep up with it. It has many advantages, novel subject matter, good writing, smooth plot, and the male protagonist's character has been basically established. There are also many shortcomings, especially after the death of the male protagonist's father, the plot started to take off. The first shortcoming is also the most fatal shortcoming, that is, the world view is too small. The crisis game is set in the real world. The first level is understandable in the real world, but then there are limitations in the real world. Many things cannot be written, so why not In an imaginary or fantasy world, if you leave the real world behind, there are many things to write about. You can write about 2012, apocalyptic floods, nuclear bomb crises, earthquakes, Independence Day, and even aliens. The layout and excitement are no more exciting than your rainstorm and subsidence. The second shortcoming is the emotional drama between the male and female protagonists. I don't know whether the author does not have enough experience in love or it is a problem with his thinking. In my opinion, the role of the female protagonist is just a tool. Apart from being beautiful, it has no meaning. Here we want to catch a spy, so the male protagonist goes out to travel and climb mountains with her, and then he catches the spy. Here we want to catch a repeat criminal, and the male protagonist just happens to catch it. The plot is properly promoted and the cheerleading team, in addition to praising the male protagonist in a roundabout way, only has the point of being good-looking, and the second male lead is not well portrayed. The third shortcoming, setbacks, is especially obvious in the plot of the heavy rain in India. The Indian government cannot be said to have perfect crisis warning, it can only be said to be completely zero. India is not China, and their officials and government are very slow to respond. However, in the article, they do not say that they are talking nonsense. It is really possible that older officers listen to the protagonist without any brains. The protagonist has done many influential things in the article, but the actual performance is too smooth. It is like playing an RPG game with a known ending. It cannot give the reader, at least it cannot give me any sense of crisis. The protagonist can solve it anyway~. The last shortcoming is the system. Good guy, a white crisis management skill can maximize the mobilization of all parties and know the crisis events well. How do you plan to write better skills in the future? Transform directly into Yuan Shikai and move the machine gun 3 meters to the left with micro control? I think white is the knowledge that can basically organize a department to deal with a crisis, and blue is the knowledge that can basically organize a group to face a crisis, which is higher or has a larger scope, or is very professional. For example, fire, white is equivalent to the emergency plan for property fires, which can only deal with local fires and arrange for the evacuation of people. Blue is the process for firefighters to deal with fires in shopping malls and communities. More advanced ones, such as purple and gold, are for dealing with regional fires such as the explosion in Tianjin and the explosion in Lebanon. But as of now, apart from the literal attribute differences between white and blue skills, they are not functionally reflected at all. I wrote some of my own feelings about reading the book. I hope the author can work hard. It's not easy to follow. I think this subject matter is very good. I hope the author can cherish it.

Good book. The protagonist itself is set in China, and it is difficult to develop explosive plots in real life, such as gun battles, laundry, smuggling, terrorist attacks, etc. The general environment does not allow it, and this kind of plot is difficult to write.

Don't order it, run away. It's all about emotional drama. The author admits his mistake and refuses to write it. Only when you blindly order the full text do you realize that this person just likes to disgust you. He just hates that Qidian cannot unsubscribe!

Is it true that no one thinks it's a problem for the protagonist to speak obscenely about his own mother? Immediately persuade them to retreat!

Don't write plots where multiple women compete for one man. The man acts as if he has never been in love and doesn't know anything. This is purely disgusting for readers. The protagonist of that book, Zhou Bala, is a pure scumbag, hypocritical, pretending to be confused, only a little clever, and nothing else.

It's better to call it a crisis management game. Now the name feels like a studio text, hhh

As for the name of the protagonist, I actually put some thought into the name. For example, the name is Gu Ji, which sounds a bit selfish, but as a special police officer of Xia State, he keeps saving people, which gives a sense of contrast. Of course, Ji itself has some other extended meanings. Among adjectives, it represents danger and subtle signs; signs or omens of things, which are more suitable for the theme, consistent with the character's character, alert and observant.

I've read Chapter 365. I originally wanted to save more for reading, but now I can't stand it anymore. One thing is that it's getting more and more complicated. The scenes are getting bigger and bigger, but they are very empty. All the supporting characters are tool people, and the protagonist is alone. It's a team, but it's just a grassroots team. They have to wipe their butts everywhere. I feel that the author's writing power has been out of control; Another issue is the issue of female characters. You have to write them even if you can't write them. What they show is the stereotype of women, love brain, right? I used to keep writing about the kind that Mu Qiang had a crush on, but now I have to repost it. I just blush and feel speechless when I don't care about work. Why bother, just to show the author's masculine charm in your imagination? I can understand that writing more about the main plot is a bit tiring, and the pacing needs to be a combination of fast and slow, but you have now weakened most of the readers. They were originally full of passion and wanted to do big things when faced with crisis, but they changed their minds and had a long love for children. Moreover, it is only for women. There are more than 300 chapters. I don't know what will happen next, but it has already annoyed me. Originally good food has been replaced by someone from behind. Don't write about what you are not good at! I just want to know after so many chapters, has the situation improved? Is it still so stuck, with the emotions written poorly and the events dragging on?