I Hand the Cultivation World Over to the Nation

Let me complain, the mentality of the protagonist has not changed at all, and the perverted mind of the ancestors of the immortal world has not been written. In terms of intrigues, modern people are more knowledgeable than the ancients. Due to the relaxed atmosphere of modern society, if there is no in-depth study of ideological and political affairs, they are even worse than the ancients in intrigues. Now in the world of immortals, the ancestors are alive After so many years, my own experience is enough to crush most modern people, and it is impossible for my ancestor to suddenly fall in love with someone who is far behind. When I saw this, I almost thought I was watching some female channel. The lifespan is so different. When you became an immortal, my grandfather didn't even have sperm. Then you crossed the world to marry my bitch female channel. You are older than my grandfather. Finally, I don't understand why the protagonist dares to raise a hostile humanoid cloud bomb who has lost his memory but can recall it at any time as his daughter. Does he still think that the world of immortality is a modern society? She wants to kill you, but you raise her as your daughter. This relationship is too explosive for me. The protagonist also frantically leaks modern information to him, and the people in the surrounding state departments don't care. This is too much of a gamble! That author, you can swap the genders of the characters and look at the plot, which can help avoid some logical flaws. Finally, I hope that the author's writing skills will get better and better, and this novel will become more and more popular. Yours sincerely

I decided to give up after reading the penultimate chapter. It is not a big problem to hand it over to the state, but there are a lot of private goods that the author has no idea about. . . The military is loyal to individuals and puts the interests of the clan first in everything. . .

In fact, if the protagonist has no other cheats, turning it over to the country is the best choice. However, the problem is that once handed over to the country, he will inevitably face a lot of intrigues and the like, and the role and rights of the protagonist will inevitably be diluted and restricted, which will lead to poisonous points and fewer fun points. No solution.

Many people's arguments for defending the content are actually untenable, because the real world has various resources and talents that the protagonist can obtain directly. The reality is the protagonist's back garden, and there is no need to hand over anything. Everyone should understand the unique and extraordinary gold content in the world, right? You should understand that cultivating immortals involves spiritual spells or talismans such as charm and hypnosis, right? Only a few people need to be controlled, or even just one person. Of course, such a three-dimensional view of behavior is indeed not very correct, and maybe the book will be gone. So when this book touches on the country, I don't like it because it has too many flaws.

As for this book, I didn't click in to read it. When I saw the introduction and title, I planned to withdraw it. But I saw that the comment area was very noisy, so I clicked on the comments and read it. From what the comments said, I felt that this book should be very popular. I wanted to see if the author was a new author, but it turned out to be Ye Henshui, 6. I can't say whether this kind of subject matter is good or not, because I personally hate this kind of subject matter very much, and I can't make an objective evaluation. But this kind of subject matter is very difficult to write about, so why do I have to write about this kind of subject matter? It's thankless. I read in the comment section that this book is a denigration of immortality and praise of the present. I don't know if it's true or not, but if it's true as the comments say, then this book is indeed a great book. Everyone has different subjective feelings and concepts about technology and cultivating immortality. This is common when reading online articles, because technology is around us, and people often don't care about the things they own. Cultivation of immortality is a very fantasy thing. If you develop yourself, you can live in the air every second. In terms of subjective feelings, cultivating immortality is a head above technology, or even far more than one head. It is very difficult to reconcile things like cultivating immortality and technology. Unless it is scientific cultivating immortality, which is the subject matter of this book, it cannot be said that it is completely impossible to write, but it is indeed very difficult to write. If someone is not in the online literary circle and someone tells me that technology is more powerful than cultivating immortality, I will definitely criticize it. Similarly, some people say that cultivating immortality is more powerful than technology, and I will complain too. But I have to say that when reading novels, the concept of cultivating immortality and the concept of science and technology are not at the same level, at least in my mind. The concept of cultivating immortality is high-end, and technology is ordinary. Internet literature has been developed for 20 to 30 years, and the mainstream has always been personal power. It can be seen that in the eyes of the public, in fact, Personal power is much higher than technology. Even technology can also have things that can be used on oneself to produce power, such as various potions. However, people are like this and tend to admire ethereal things more, because people tend to be very obsessed with illusory things. So when it comes to this kind of subject matter, whether you write about the world of cultivating immortals that is lower than the world of science and technology, that is, the real world, or whether the two are equal, it is not flattering. Everyone places a high value on the level of cultivating immortals, and the real world is an ordinary level, and it is not a science fiction world. Even if you write about the world of science fiction, the future world is higher than the world of cultivating immortals, or is equal to the world of cultivating immortals. In the final analysis, this kind of subject matter is really unpleasant, really really unpleasant. Of course, it can also attract a small number of people. As I said before, whether in the Internet literary circle or outside the Internet literary circle, there will be many people who boast that cultivating immortals is higher than technology. Although I am not to the point of hating cultivating immortals, because cultivating immortals covers too many things, but some people are different, and some People will definitely hate it, so they want to see a worldview in which technology is higher than cultivating immortals, or equal to cultivating immortals. In addition, there are a small number of curious readers. If it is well written, it will actually have some achievements, but judging from the comments in the comment area, this book cannot do what I said.

It feels really short and weak, so the country sends a female secretary to take over the work. At least there are Taoist priests in the army who have to hand it over to you, and you have to sign a confidentiality agreement and secretly send you to the research institute. As a result, every time in the big villa, a female secretary is asked to check your body and mental activities with you. At one time, he said that the cultivation method of cultivating immortals strengthens the foundation and strengthens the body. At the next time, he said that the cultivator is weak, and then the cultivation system is also chaotic. The creativity is very good, and the writing can only give 1 point.

I have a question. If someone on the protagonist's side is soul-searched by a demon sect disciple and discovers that there is a world full of mortals. This disciple reports it to the sect's God-Transforming Ancestor. The God-Transforming Ancestor personally comes to arrest people, controls the protagonist, and then comes to our world. Will the 8 billion people on earth become brothers together in the soul banner?

Are mobile phones reasonable in the world of immortality? Mobile phone signals rely on satellite transmission, unless it is direct end-to-end communication via walkie-talkie. There are no satellites in the world of immortality, so you still can't use mobile phones. If the world of cultivating immortals can still borrow WeChat from the real world, then it means that the real world can directly receive the electromagnetic signals from the world of cultivating immortals. There is no need for the protagonist to keep an eye on you every day when it comes to chatting. The official will directly send a team to help you...

The biggest bug in this book is that in the protagonist's overworld, the best people in all fields in the country come to help the protagonist with suggestions. Various plans are hyped up, but the reality is like a few elementary school students discussing a new game. If the country in the overworld relied on these people, it would have disappeared long ago. In reality, the one who has achieved a little bit is not a human being. The one who takes one step and thinks ten steps away is not like the first villain. The protagonist has traveled through time for more than a month and shows the video to this group of people every day, and they have already made it clear that they are hostile. After giving more advice, he actually refuses to run or hide and wait for others to come. And the workshop owner discussed three solutions overnight. The first was to buy a storage bag to bring real weapons to hard steel, the second was to expose the workshop owner's magic cultivator, and the third was to expose that he could practice elixirs without erysipelas. Is this what the most powerful group of people in the country came up with after a night of discussion? It's better to just go to a big city or a big sect and spread the news that the boss is a demon cultivator and is going to hunt you down. After everyone in the neighborhood knows about this, you will be safe no matter whether the other party comes to protect you or not.

The title of the book is destined to be a hit. If such a big golden finger can't mix between the two worlds, the protagonist must be such a loser.