Yue Buqun: My Huashan Sect Has Transmigrated

To be honest, it is getting lighter and lighter, the content is not poisonous, and the plot is bland and smooth. So far, I haven't seen a real climax. The protagonist has never encountered a real crisis from beginning to end, and the plot of pretending to slap people in the face is also very cliché. For a bookworm like me who has been reading for 10 years, I already know what's coming next. It's not long to write a fanfic like Kobu Mugenliu with a family and a family. It is estimated that six or seven world characters will be too many to write about, and the plot is not enough to retain people. The plot is now so complete that you don't need to read the content after reading the title. Brother, either we work hard and write some exciting battles of wits, or we can do something like your book "Revival of Spiritual Energy" and write about the daily life of the harem. It's too plain now.

Author, what is your other name? I forgot.

You'd better write a fusion article, otherwise if you write like you do, you won't be able to defend this place and it will become a legend in the fairy world, especially for people from other worlds. Who is not curious? Even the emperor is very curious.

It's okay to say that one or two people have no origins, but a few or even dozens of people suddenly pop up with no origins and cannot be traced. Isn't it right that they won't be noticed by others? If someone discovers Huashan, he can go to other worlds, even if it doesn't cause big trouble. After all, those disciples with low martial arts skills may not be able to keep secrets.

The protagonist is really a eunuch, he can eat but he will not eat. He also said that young girls are not as good as young wives. He used the excuse of being over 30 years old in his previous life. This is too shabby. As long as the protagonist is even slightly weaker, he is a tauren character.

The more I read, the more I feel like it was written by a female channel. It was interesting at first, but it's getting more and more boring...

It's just one world, and it's been over a hundred chapters and it's still there, and the excitement I felt when I opened it has been worn away, and I'm still watching this

Everyone is talking about their own things... Hey, if you ask me for advice, I will call you Master, if you ask for advice, I will call you Zhenzhen Master... It smells like a dick inexplicably.

Is Chu Liuxiang's legendary martial arts worth as much as Xiaoao? Why did you go to Chu Liuxiang's side to eliminate Shi Guanyin and Wuhua and the others, but in the end you still thought it was troublesome to destroy Songshan? In my impression, Xiaoao's force value is at least the third from the bottom in the gold system.

I have exhausted all my talents😒

This introduction has the eunuch flavor of "You have harmed me"

The introduction to the book feels so confusing, and I will probably end up writing it later.

How should the imperial court position itself in the world of martial arts? If the military force of the imperial court can easily crush the martial arts world, and thirty or fifty armor-piercing elite soldiers can surround and kill top-notch masters, then the sects in the martial arts world will have no room to survive. The martial arts masters' struggle for hegemony will become a joke. No matter how high your martial arts skills are, No matter how good the business is, if I send a few beauties to high-ranking officials to give the emperor a heads-up, the next day the best master in the world and the best sect in the world will be gone. What is the purpose of all the hard work and painstaking efforts in practicing martial arts? Just go and please the court. Being Wei Xiaobao can command the martial arts.

Stop writing this kind of forced feeding plot, okay?

It was only after reading the comment section that I realized there were so many poisonous points behind it. What a pity.

One of the only martial arts novels that I have read in the past two months My first impression of this book was very bad. I couldn't even write the introduction when I looked at it. How could the content of the book be any better? But I accidentally clicked in and found something. The setting of this book is very cleverly conceived. The plug-in is a world-to-world replacement, which actually does not help the protagonist much. The protagonist has to rely on his own resourcefulness to tide over the difficulties. The point that the author ignores is that Yue Buqun in the original work is already very old, and his talent is very poor. If the plug-in does not increase his talent, in fact, no matter how hard he practices, it will be difficult for him to become a master in a short time. Also, if you don't know how to write emotional dramas, don't do those kinds of things. You are developing too fast when writing multiple female protagonists. Why don't you take the time to read romance novels and start an affair without any experience at all? Isn't this nonsense? The original wife, Junior Sister Ning, has no sense of existence at all. Little virgins, don't think that you know love well after watching some movies.

Lao Ye, this introduction is indeed a bit messy. The book is good and the logic is not wrong. How about I change it and get more updates so that I can subscribe more?

It gets worse as the story goes on. Not to mention that it was originally supposed to be about the different responses to the new world after the two planes of Huashan were exchanged. Now it's mainly about Yue Buqun's reaction. Let's just say that the story goes on and all the supporting characters have turned into tool men, and they all have their wits reduced. Everyone only revolves around Yue Buqun.

I feel like it's not good to write about the ancient series in the first world. The first priority group is relatively small. Doesn't it mean that your writing is not good and the subject matter is not friendly? Just take me as an example. I saw that the legend of Chu Liuxiang and the legend of Lu Xiaofeng in the ancient series jumped directly. Take a look at Li Xunhuan's one. The gold series can be used, and Huang Yi's is Datang.

But why are Yue Buqun and Junior Sister the only ones left? Obviously the Qi Sect analyzed the Three Immortals Sword together after massacring the Sword Sect. Will there be another internal fight?

I've read a few chapters, but it's a pity that the author's writing is complete, otherwise I would still have to read it, good novels are hard to find!

The traitor Yuan Chengzhi also came out?

Brother, please change your profile. I don't want to click on it after reading it. It's completely a side effect.

I saw the latest chapter and saw the latest chapter 293. The subject matter is very suitable to my appetite. I travel back and forth with my sect, and after integrating resources, I pretend to be B everywhere. Some readers think that the plot is dull and the protagonist is not in crisis. I am different. I also like to read invincible novels... In short, the theme and plot are suitable for my appetite, and I just ignored some bugs. However, the more planes traveled, the more characters will appear. Can the author control it? Don't be too superficial. In the end, the name of the appearance was not mentioned. It was summarized by XX and others 😅

Author, are you using Shaolin's trick to plot against Huashan and the Sun and Moon God Sect? Yangmou, wonderful, please update and subscribe.

Brother author, go back to your comfort zone Incorporate some fresh work into each world one by one, and write it more cheerfully. I feel like some people will still read it When written together, it feels too messy, even more messy than the disabled setting such as mixed martial arts Like the one who travels at the same time starting from Zhe Tian, ​​isn't he also pretending to be in different worlds? In fact, there is no need to be too eager to write something new to distinguish yourself from the past. Your past is your style In fact, many of the current astronomical texts are not as good as your old book. Write it from a different perspective and write it in a different way. It will feel like a new book.

Zixia, Jiuyin, Jiuyang, Wedding Dress, Mingyu, Yi Jin Jing, The Great Shift of the Universe Excluding swordsmanship, there are still two skills left.

Ming Peng led the Huashan Sect all the way to the top and left the legend of the Huashan Sect in various worlds.

😂 I often write about Yue Buqun's behavior in bed with dozens of couples, and also describes Mrs. Yue: Jade feet... Ugh

Become Zixia Wedding Dress Gong. You can also ask Hua Zhenzhen to practice, and then teach the skills to Yue Buqun. Then they transfer the skills to each other, stepping on the left foot and the right foot. The quality and quantity also improve.