Yue Buqun: My Huashan Sect Has Transmigrated

You'd better write a fusion story; otherwise, if you write it like this, your place won't be able to hold at all, and it'll become a legend in the immortal realm. Especially people from other worlds, who wouldn't be curious? Even the emperor is extremely curious.

It's one thing if one or two people have no background, but if several or even dozens of people suddenly appear without any background and can't be traced, won't others notice something's wrong? If others were to discover that Mount Hua could lead to other worlds, it would likely cause a major disaster. After all, those disciples with low martial arts skills might not be able to keep secrets.

The protagonist is a complete eunuch; he can eat but he won't. He even says that young girls aren't as good as young women, using his age of over thirty in his previous life as an excuse. He's so stupid. If the protagonist were even slightly weaker, he'd be a NEET (Not in Education, Employment, or Training).

To be honest, it's getting increasingly bland. The content has no major flaws, but the plot is flat and smooth. I haven't seen a real climax yet; the protagonist hasn't faced any real crisis from beginning to end, and the face-slapping scenes are very clichéd. For someone like me who's been reading wish-fulfillment novels for 10 years, I know what's coming after just the beginning.

The more I read, the more I felt it was written for a female audience. It was somewhat interesting at first, but it got increasingly boring...

The story got worse and worse as it went on. It would have been more interesting to write about how the two worlds of Mount Hua exchanged places and how they responded to the new world. Now, the focus is on Yue Buqun's reactions. Also, as the story progressed, all the supporting characters became mere tools, and their intelligence was reduced. Everyone just revolved around Yue Buqun.

It's just one world, over a hundred chapters in, and it's still going strong. The initial excitement has been completely worn away, what's the point of reading it?

They're all talking past each other... Hey, if you ask me for advice I'll call you master, if you ask me for advice I'll call you true master... It just gives off a weird loser vibe.

Please stop writing these forced feeding scenes.

Is the martial arts prowess in *Legend of Chu Liuxiang* inferior to that in *The Smiling, Proud Wanderer*? Why did everyone go to Chu Liuxiang's side to eliminate Shi Guanyin and Wuhua, only to complain about the trouble of destroying Songshan in the end? In my memory, the martial arts prowess in *The Smiling, Proud Wanderer* is at least third from the bottom among metal-type characters.