
Longevity Starts with Strengthening the Internal Organs
长生从强化五脏六腑开始
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- Eastern Fantasy
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- Eastern Xuanhuan
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- 2y ago
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The protagonist's combat power is so suppressed that he has to fight dozens or hundreds of moves against ordinary people of the same level. The opponent was poisoned beforehand. The final victory was due to the physical breakthrough and poisoning during the battle. I don't understand why the protagonist's combat power is so stretched with various bonuses. Outside of the protagonist I unlocked organ talents and practiced a lot of high-level martial arts skills on the panel. As a result, every time I fought with the same small level, it was always so strenuous. The protagonist's master was much better, and he was seriously injured. He just killed two masters of the same level who had been famous for many years. On the other hand, the protagonist kept grinding.
Wherever the protagonist goes, something goes wrong. He goes to the Escort Bureau, and the Escort Bureau is wiped out by others. He goes to the Song Family, and the Song Family is destroyed. He goes to the county town, where he is robbed by an aristocratic family, and attacked by a beast tide. He goes to Canglong Temple, and Canglong Temple is expelled. I know you want to develop the protagonist, but the way you write it is really speechless.
The human body has many secrets, and a system of talents and treatments can be written. The reaction nerves, eyes, and brain can improve memory or understanding. There are so many things that can be written. If this book can be written well, it will be the same as the gene lock system. The author will work hard and look forward to it.
The protagonist's cultivation speed is only twice that of others? The resources that can be consumed are simply massive, and the exotic animal meat elixirs are occasionally eaten by others. The protagonist has almost never been broken, and he has also unlocked the functions of the heart, liver, spleen, lungs and kidneys. However, he still cannot beat the warriors of the same realm with slightly more advanced martial arts, and it is absolutely impossible to leapfrog the next level... He can cultivate a black king even if he feeds it to a dog... It's useless.
I feel that the word "unlock 2" is not very appropriate. You are not an innate god or demon, so why unlock it?
If you don't have enough writing skills, don't write too many plots about female supporting characters. It's useless except for being a little embarrassing.
I can't stand it anymore, there are women everywhere, I'm speechless
I gave up the book, it's boring, the story is old-fashioned, once you retreat, the enemy comes to your doorstep, and the protagonist breaks out to show off! How many years has this been written?
Delete my post. It's garbage if it's OK.
Fortunately, I read the book before reading the review. If I had read the review, I might have given up on the book. As a bookworm for more than ten years, this book is very well written and can be used as daily food. The comments in the comment area are a bit picky.
Just one is enough. Stop being ambiguous. Do you have to have a harem?
I don't know what kind of favor or affection the protagonist received from his neighbor. After a sum of money, he also sent rice, meat and eggs. The old man next door died. He kowtowed to others without any affection and wanted to cry. He was speechless. The key is that the author added a narration saying that I am not a good person. Is this what we do now? The Holy Mother always said that she was not a good person, and the old lady said that she was a good person. . .
The most poisonous point of this book
It's titled "The Five Internal Organs" but the author doesn't know what the five internal organs are and what the six internal organs are. Put the stomach in the five internal organs and the lungs in the six internal organs, happy death
Suppressing the protagonist's realm is a basic operation, but this is the first time I've seen someone who has pushed the protagonist's realm from the beginning. The first realm, with delicious food, delicious drinks, and plug-ins, actually encountered a bottleneck, just like a low-level warrior rising to a third-rate. There is such a bottleneck. . .
I've read more than forty chapters and I can't get into it Please give me some spoilers. In the later stage, will the protagonist go out to kill other people when he has no money, and then find some reason to comfort the readers because others are just trash and he should eliminate harm for the people? In addition, is the relationship between the protagonist and the little girl next door still in a state of sleepwalking? A neighbor with whom we didn't have much of a relationship suddenly became an orphan, and the protagonist even ran to someone else's bed and said, "Leave the girl to me?" Even if it doesn't matter in the first place, you have to explain your intentions, right? Want her to continue the family line? I don't want to do any chores. Can I have a maid? I like her talent and want to play character development?
The protagonist is in the bone refining realm and can sprint more than ten meters per second. Is that no problem? The protagonist Yi Jinjing's golden finger and light kung fu can run 20 meters per second. Is that no problem? Is it okay to add lightness for 20 meters per second in the ordinary forging realm? Is it okay if the protagonist's forging state, light kung fu, and golden finger 30 meters per second are enough? With the protagonist's skin-grinding gold finger blessing, it's close to 40 meters per second, no problem, right? Is it okay to do about 50 meters per second in half-step to the five realms? When the protagonist reaches the fifth blood-changing realm, his short-distance burst must be at least about 150 meters per second. Otherwise, how can we reflect the protagonist's speed? You, the author, have said it yourself, the fifth realm is a turning point. The protagonist breaks through the strongest five realms with double mirror guide and golden finger. As soon as he takes action, Jin Cunyue, who is almost knocked off by his speed and sword skills, has a half-baked head! Is it okay for a half-hearted person to open his pulse and run at about 120 meters per second in a short period of time? In the novel, Chapter 292 (Part 1) In less than an hour, the protagonist has to go back and forth at least 1,780 miles, which is 90 kilometers in less than an hour. If you count an hour and a half, that's only 16.6 Meters per second. Even if you, the author, said that most of the road sections described in that chapter are in the snow, then wouldn't it be enough for the protagonist to just bounce between trees? Or are you saying that the protagonist in the Five Greatest Realms cannot jump 100 meters? The protagonist has reached the fifth level of perfection, but cannot reach the sonic speed of 300 meters per second, so his combat power is a bit damaged. The protagonist has not yet reached the sonic speed of Mach 1 in the open pulse level, so I will not watch it.
Why does this type of novel contain so many female characters? All of them are ambiguous.
Always taking half a step, half a step, so poisonous
After reading it, I can only say that it is very classic. The forces you join must be bullied, and then the protagonist comes out to turn the tide. The Jingping Sheng who is about to reach the soul realm is killed by the protagonist who opens the pulse realm. I can't say anything. The key is are you serious about your life span of more than 10,000 years? What's the use of it? Can you use it? Obviously, according to your pace, it will take less than 10 years for the protagonist to reach the highest level. From the age of 17 to now, when he is 21, he will break through to the sixth great level.
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I saw how talented that little girl was and gave up immediately.
In the early days, he was quite well-behaved. After going to the county town and the beast tide, he lost his mind.
When the protagonist was destroying the Python God Cult, he kept mentioning Wu Bao'er. I thought she was the heroine and the protagonist wanted to avenge her. But when I thought about it, wasn't Wu Bao'er a killer who failed to kill the protagonist, attacked the protagonist's sect and was captured and surrendered, but still survived? Is it necessary to keep mentioning her?
After reading the beginning, I think it smells like a copy of Shifang Wusheng, and many places are very bloody. It is an old routine that has been used for many years.
To be honest, I was really good at writing it in the early stage, before going to the county town. Later it felt like it was not written by one person.
You kid, it's a mess, isn't it? You don't want to write anymore in the future, right? 😆 Why did you start a new book, Upside Down Tiangang 😡
Let me first ask, is there no heroine? Or a single heroine?
This book is actually pretty good, Liangcao!