Cultivating Immortality in Secret Within the Clan

After reading three chapters, I just want to ask the author, why make the family prioritize you? Why not cultivate a mid-grade spiritual root instead of a low-grade one? Building spiritual veins isn't even as important as cultivating you? Are you telling the family that you're a transmigrator? Or are you telling them you have a cheat code? You need to get rid of your self-righteousness.

The biggest flaw in cultivation novels is the lack of intelligence organizations among major sects. These behemoths, controlling vast territories and brimming with diverse talents, inexplicably lack secret agents or departments like the Embroidered Uniform Guard. It's laughable.

I just don't understand why you're holding it in. Can't you just admit it openly? As for not wanting to be a nanny, just say no. Are you going to force someone to come to you? Why write it so awkwardly? Don't you realize that?

The first three chapters drove me crazy. Seeking family investment He still hasn't proven to his family that he's worth investing in.

The first 200 chapters were readable. Then came the revenge between the two demon clans and their help to the Qingxuan Sect, which became terribly written; it seems like the author changed. A whole family, hundreds of lives, all tied to the protagonist's single Golden Core stage. In this situation, you have to be cautious, steady, and stay far away. Trying to show off is suicide.

It's that same old loser/nanny trope again! Why is it that all transmigration/reincarnation stories are about losers? Isn't there ever a normal one?

After consuming a Qi Refining Stage 3 talisman, half of my spiritual energy was gone. I also ingested poison.

I paid for VIP access and read up to chapter 200. The writing is alright, but the protagonist becomes too arrogant after reaching the Golden Core stage. He's not cautious at all, his character is immature, and he's prone to self-destruction. In "A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality," Han Paopao is single and should be trying to hide his identity.

They agreed to play it safe, but knowing there was danger, they still went to take the risk.

In Chapter Nine, 70% of the profits went to others. If it weren't for his breakthrough in cultivation, taking 30% would have been practically like kneeling and begging. You should change "" to "".