Mortal: I Have a Portable World

It's great. I haven't tipped other novels before. This is the first one I've tipped! Although it's not much, it's my little thought! The author will open a new book soon!

It's a bit funny. In the original fairyland chapter, the circle didn't come back in the end. Are you still writing based on the fairy world setting? The reason why you people are afraid of grabbing the little green bottle is because you are afraid that the Time Dao Ancestor will close the loop on his timeline. Who will go and who will die? After all, there is a future Han Li is watching. But I find it funny. In the original work, Ancient or Modern was the first Time Dao Ancestor, so didn't he close the loop of time earlier than Han Li? There is a future, ancient or present, where Han Li will be able to grow up. But Han Li didn't grow up in the same way, and killed the ancient or the present. The setting of time closed loop is wrong. Compared with the setting of closed time loop, I prefer the setting of Great Luo Jinxian, which is to integrate all the bodies in all parts of the world and in each time period into one, to become the Great Luo Jinxian and to be the only one. There is no future body, nor past body, only the present Daluo Jinxian body. There is no possibility of dying after being killed in the past, and there is no possibility of being stronger in the future to protect oneself.

I have read so many mortal harem stories, and this book is the most comfortable one. I come back to read it from time to time.

The female characters in the character list are enough. It was good at the beginning. It was a bit disgusting to include the female characters who appeared as mortals. The master, the senior sister who holds the pots and bowls, and Mrs. Wen were all included. When I saw this, I felt that the book suddenly dropped several levels.

It's well written at the beginning, but after 200 chapters it turns into a pornographic book. I really have no motivation to subscribe. I'm not here to read pornographic books.

Nangong Wan

There are too many female protagonists, and when there are too many, they won't be able to handle the emotional lines, which is boring.

Because I love mortals, I have read all the fanfictions! This book seems to be okay so far, especially the way of treating vials is more reasonable. I hope the author can keep writing. You can learn from the good things of other fans and avoid the bad things! The ones that have been written relatively successfully so far are scientific cultivation of immortality and immortality.       ：，，，！       ：，！       ，（），，！       ，：       1（），，，？ Why can it overcome the three supreme laws? (I think it's only the black hole realm); Why is my magic power deeper than others? Why is the consciousness stronger than others? Why can you defeat others? 2. You can open a harem if you have a heroine, but you can't take up too much of your resources, let alone delay your plan for immortality; 3. Your IQ must be online, don't fall short, and don't make yourself or your enemies mentally retarded. After all, in this cruel world, no one is simple; 4. You can be forewarned and you can take advantage of Han Tianzun, but you can't steal too many opportunities from Old Demon Han and you can't affect his trajectory, but you can't be indifferent to opportunities. You have to write down the reasons why you don't want to grab them or you can't grab them; 5. You can appropriately expand the opportunities that Han Li didn't encounter or the maps that he didn't open, not too many, and not too many; 6. The fighting must be exciting and the plot must be reasonable. This is where Wangyu is better than others! 7. As a time-traveling party, we must always maintain the thinking of modern people and ask more questions for those who have not time-traveled. For example, what is spiritual root? How is each level different? What does this world look like? How is it different from the cognitive solar system? Etc! Keep satisfying readers' appetites!

It would be great if a master wrote a supplementary version of this book. I have read the most complete version of this book so far. I would like to prevent the most critical content from being written. If I write the supplements, I can beat those few pornographic novels!

Author, I really want to ask why novels about mortals are basically half-step licking, so you have to find the original pig's feet. Without him, wouldn't you be able to write? And every so-called transaction is where the protagonist suffers a big loss just to gain the so-called favor. So you read the novel just to be a licking dog? So far, there is only one Mortal novel that has done well. It doesn't describe Han Li very much. There are few transactions and the main character takes advantage of it. The results are still the best among the Mortal novels. Facts have proved that if you don't describe too many scenes of Han Li, the protagonist is not a virgin, and your butt should be straight, the results will naturally be good.

There are more and more women in the future, and it feels like the facial makeup has become more complex, which is also a common problem in harem stories🤣

Don't mess with female characters who are not outstanding! Too many harems will only dilute the roles of the harem girls, weaken the charm of the female characters in the book, reduce the quality of the work, weaken the appeal of the work, and make the work's performance decline! This is why stallion works are becoming less and less popular!

The plot of the recent return to the Feng family was really a failure, repaying the favor without leaving a name? What about yourself? Tired

The writing skills are worthy of recognition, but I personally still don't like harem scenes with dozens of female protagonists. 4 To 5 women are enough. After all, women only relieve the loneliness and fatigue of cultivating immortals, and everything is still focused on cultivating immortals.

This author is very good and understands the preferences of most LSP readers, including me. When you open a harem, you have to open it like this. You either have a single female protagonist and no female protagonist, or you open a harem and don't leave out any female characters. The female characters that many readers like may be one, a few, or all. If you accept the harem, no one will ask who accepts so-and-so.

When will the author write the book?

Isn't Linghu in the middle stage of Nascent Soul? Why has he changed to the early stage?

No! The author has your new book! ! It's the end of the month!

I really like to read books about the cultivation methods of a family, with a group of wives and concubines, and a house full of children. So I also wrote a book, and now I have entered the signing process. Book friends can invest in it, and the current income is not bad.

I remember the author said he would write about the fairy world, but he didn't write it. To be honest, the spiritual world chapter is too long. I've read several fanfics and finished writing about the spiritual world

In the spirit world, why can you be so arrogant and domineering? Isn't it like other novels that you should have strong trump cards but also be submissive, be manipulated in various ways, and feel aggrieved in all kinds of ways?😜

Come and read the author's new book, All Heavens Recruit Girls😁

The beautiful woman named Cen in Chapter 30 is described very well, so it should be written like this 😁.          ，，

Remember to send a notice when a new book is opened. This is probably the mortal who has the most complete collection of girls! What theme should you choose for your next book? Immortal rebellion? Zhu Xian? Covering the sky? Perfect?

This book is really good, and the harem battles are well written 😄

Author, what will you write next?

It looks quite comfortable

The author has opened a new book, just click on the author's name to enter 🙂

Before watching, I clicked on the heroine's color card and took a look. It's so ugly, I don't want to see it.

If you like this harem fan, you can check out my mortal fan, which is also a double-digit heroine, the harem novel "Mortal Cultivation of Immortality: The Holy Son of Shaking Light"