
Mortal: Tianlinggen, You Also Have to Rub the Little Green Bottle!
凡人:天灵根,也得去蹭小绿瓶!
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- Cultivation
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- Fantasy Cultivation
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- 3d ago
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There are many protagonists and readers who lick the original author, but the mortal fics are still too 🐢. At least six or seven out of ten books are licking Han Li. I really think that the old devil's love and justice can lead them to become immortals.
I saw someone saying don't steal the heroine
I'll post it too. I won't watch it if you don't steal the heroine. You can do whatever you want downstairs. I'll wet it first.
Disclaimer, some controversial issues!
There has been a lot of buzz about Han Li recently. First of all, the protagonist of this book is not afraid of Han Li. His early cultivation level is at least one level higher than that of Han Li. Han Li does not pose a threat to the protagonist. Don't always say that he is a strong bottle. Han Li will retaliate in the future. If you fool him now, Han Li will retaliate in the future. Anyone who has read the book carefully will understand Han Li's character. He is extremely cautious and is known as Han Paopao. Recently, the nickname "Old Devil" Han has been widely circulated. Some people may have misunderstood Han Li as a reckless man. Given Han Li's character, as long as he doesn't take action against himself, doesn't steal the little green bottle and doesn't return it, and maintains a cooperative relationship, Han Li is unlikely to betray the protagonist. Of course, the premise is that the protagonist's cultivation level cannot fall too far behind Han Li. Then, there is the talent of the protagonist. The protagonist's talent is to seek good fortune and avoid disaster. If his life is in danger, he will take the initiative to prompt him, and he can still prompt him much in advance. So, some of the protagonist's actions may seem dangerous and reckless, but in fact they are completely fine. The second thing is about what some people think about licking Han Li. I don't know how other authors wrote about it, but in this book Han Li is positioned as a wage earner. The protagonist paid some of the elixirs he refined as salary, and Han Li paid half of the green liquid in the small green bottle, as well as his usual work for the protagonist. If anyone thinks this counts as licking Han Li, then I have nothing to say. Then there is the issue of the heroine. Nangong Wan involves the master of the Samsara Palace. The protagonist will definitely not fight for it. The rest will depend on the situation. This book is not a stud book. When the protagonist faces the female character in the original work, the first thing he considers is the value of the other person, and then the appearance. As for which ones to accept, it depends on the development of the plot. I won't accept them forcefully. For example, senior sister Chen and Han Yunzhi will definitely not be accepted if they have no value.
What is Han Li? I would rather betray the world than let the world betray me. It is a scourge to the human world. It plunders the entire human world without solving any problems for the human world. It has almost wiped out the spiritual grass in the human world. It has also plundered all the resources. There are small green bottles and I have not cultivated a batch of them and placed them in various secret realms. First, when downloading the dungeon together, others cannot paddle, and they will die if they paddle; others cannot hide in the back row, and something will happen if they hide in the back row. For example, Zhongwu from Spirit Beast Mountain was hiding at the end of the mine dungeon, but he was the first to be targeted by the Blood Jade Spider. Typical of taking the old devil's position, damn it. Secondly, it is rare for gay men to download the dungeon twice. Even if they do, they will not survive the second round. In other words, if you can survive for the first time, it is called the blessing of your ancestors; if you can survive the second time, you can basically not escape the word death. The representative figure is Nanlong Hou. Thirdly, 80% of the dungeon teammates who are good friends with Han Li and good-looking will survive; Yuan Yao, Zi Ling, Mei Ning, a certain Nascent Soul female cultivator from Xiaoji Palace, etc. The latter not only survived the Yin-Yang Cave, but also walked out of Kunwu Mountain alive. In short, those who are beautiful and have a mutual affection for Han Li have a very high probability of survival. On the contrary, as long as you are not good-looking, you will still have to die, even if you are Han Li's spirit beast. For example, the ugly woman Gui Ling is one of the four guardian spirits of Kunwu Mountain. Containing a copy of Xuan Gu, Stone Disk is simply a selfish person. Those who wrote the book couldn't even lick it clean, and they still licked Zhang Tie to the extreme. The enlightened ancestor did not rescue him, let alone visit Zhang Tie's family, the spiritual world Originally the human race's territory, the Holy Island was dominated by the demon clan. However, the human race's spiritual beasts rebelled and turned into two races, humans and demons. The human race's escape route was not arranged well. The fairy world's clan occupied one third of the fairy world's territory. One clan resisted all races. What's the result? The human race in the human world is useless. They only know how to suppress and ascend together with the demon clan. The demon clan even secretly hid the human race page 108 or sold it. Only the human race can cultivate to perfection. So what did Han Li do for the human race? Shit, those who wrote about mortals did not write about the conflict between humans and monsters. The human race's spiritual beasts betrayed the human race and became human and demon races. It's sad.
This book is okay. I want to interact more with Han Li. I hope it will continue and not steal Han Li's women.
Dayan Jue Hongchen Pass is really a failure. It was smooth before, but there is no need here. You gave me a perfect qualification template, a perfect beginning of the story, a perfect golden finger, and a very smooth first fifty chapters, but suddenly I decided to get stuck. It was unnecessary. Even if you were directly promoted to Nascent Soul and waited for Han Li for fifty years, I wouldn't say anything. In those decades, you can do more meaningful things, perfect the skills and formations, and you can write some achievements. Isn't it a waste of time to study hard for fan fiction?
There seems to be a problem with the timeline
The wood attribute Tianling root plus the wood attribute natural Tao body. In the dungeon of Xutian Palace, which was in the late stage of pill formation, the force level was so high that even the two saints did not dare to provoke him, and this was the result. Han Li formed elixirs and went to Xutian Palace when he was about 150 years old. The third level of Zhongyuan Gong lasts for 60 years, and the known dungeon remains unchanged. So in this kind of king-explosion start, there is even a small green bottle plus the Nascent Soul Master and the talent of seeking good luck and avoiding evil. It's really funny to form a pill, isn't it? In the spirit world, a hundred-year-old can become a god. Here is the little green bottle. With such top-notch innate qualities and such a big golden finger, the fighting power is like this.
The protagonist is the plus version of Han Li, you can see it all at a glance
Linghu is in the middle stage, and his cultivation level can be wrong. Han Li was 31 years old when Linghu first appeared. Han Li is 18 years old in the book. How come it took Linghu 13 years to skip the early peak and reach the middle stage, right?
A little evaluation
I won't mention the minor shortcomings. The purpose of reading fanfiction is to enjoy it and to see the expanded plot, but starting from dozens of chapters, it is obvious that the author is struggling. It's also understandable, after all, it's the original work's lay-out period, which is easy to arrange, and it's really difficult to develop in the original work's world view, after all, the world is so big. However, whether intentionally or unintentionally, the author's long-term goal was set too high, and the short-term goal caused the protagonist's advantage to go completely wrong. Coupled with some inexplicable plots, the result was that the original protagonist Han Li was in sync with the original protagonist Han Li for more than a hundred chapters, but the problem is that the skills and talents of the protagonist are really not so delayed. At least, it is normal to have a baby of one hundred and fifty, but no more than one hundred and eighty at most. You have a baby at the age of 200, and then you only start to work in Dajin. This is a bit unreasonable, right? I won't say anything about the poor qualification setting. The almost unfavorable start and always setting up small favors to slow down the pace of getting on the right track really left me speechless. Some of the author's thoughts can also be seen from the formations, Qi refining, puppets, etc. Although the behavior is described as showing kindness, in essence it is still the routine of the Lone Ranger.
There is basically no psychological description of the character, and the dialogue does not express the characteristics of the character. It is barely passable.
Take the line of Yunlu and ask for the magic of turning the yin and yang from the scripture, so that Han Li can change into Han Li, and the black-skinned hottie can sleep and fly together. In one sentence, two tigers will fight unless one is male and the other is female 🙂
What Han Li hates most is being manipulated. You actually think Han Li won't be the anti-protagonist? Even if he can't kill you, you'll never want to see him. While strictly respecting the original work, I also messed up the character occ.
There is no room for two tigers in a mountain unless there is one male and one female. Take Han Li and the protagonist is Han Li's man. In this way, we can share the Heavenly Palm Vase together.
The popularity is a bit low, the plot is reasonable and exciting, and it is not a story about recruiting women without thinking. The female protagonists currently include Zi Ling, Mei Ning, Silver Moon, and Crying Soul. It seems possible. This book probably won't be long, and the hook is too big. It can basically be said that if you don't wander, you will become a Taoist ancestor. If you don't have the little green bottle, you will waste more time at most. After becoming the Taoist in the Immortal World Chapter, will there be some original plot later? However, if you start an original plot, it may collapse, it depends on the author
Either grab it in advance, or pretend you don't know why you want to share it. This kind of thing can only be in the hands of one person.
Don't be so harsh, he was also in the mid-term two hundred years ago
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Since there are multiple girls, I hope the protagonists include:
Please accept the protagonist: Zhang Xiuer, Li family, Liu family, Yan family, Wang family, Mo Yuzhu, Mo Fengwu, Mo Caihuan, Han Yunzhi, Chen Qiaoqian, Dong Xuan'er, Nie Ying, Hong Fu, Nangong Wan, Nishang, Xin Ruyin, Xiaomei, Yan Ruyan, Xiao Cui'er, Zhong Weiniang, Yuan Yao, Yan Li , Fan Jingmei, Zhuo Ruting, Zhou Yuan, Zi Ling, Shi Die, Mrs. Wen, Yinyue, Gongsun Xing, Wen Siyue, Mei Ning, Mu Peiling, Song Yu, Liu Yu, Mingxin, Master Le, Li Yingning, Lin Yinping, Long Meng, Yuan Cha, Bai Mengxin, Bai Yaoyi, Bingfeng, Wen Qing, Tian Qin'er, Liu'er, Xiang'er, Xiaohong, Dai'er, Xu Qianyu, Ye Ying, Ye Chu, Jin Yue, Qingmu, Zhu'er, Xianxian, Cailiu Ya, Liu Shui'er, Baohua, Bai Guoer, Qianqiu Saint, Hua Fairy, Xiaofeng Fairy, Ye Fairy, Bai Yunxin , Xiaoyan, Qu'er, Lanpu Shengzu, Zhu Guo'er, Xi'er, Aunt Zhu, Lan Ying, Xielian, Liuji, Ying'er, Feiyun Fairy, Hu Yushuang, Tian Fei'er, Bingpo Fairy, Liu Le'er, Bai Suyuan, Meng Qianqian, Qu Lin, Xing Hun, Gan Jiuzhen, Chen Ruyan. Wait for someone! If it's not enough, you can add another 100 million points. .
Hey, it's you
It's a very cool fanfic. I fully understand the setting of the original work. It's very satisfying without any sense of inconsistency. I hope the author can maintain this quality until the finale of Fairyland. I will always support the author. This month's monthly ticket has been donated. Come on.
Answer some controversial questions
First of all, there is the issue of the Spiritual Eye Tree. I remember that there is a Spiritual Eye Tree in Yellow Maple Valley, and then I went to see it. The original article was not written, and then I saw the revised paragraph in the comment area. Finally, I decided to set the Yellow Maple Valley to have a spiritual eye tree that cannot secrete alcohol. I think the greatest value of the spiritual eye tree is the alcohol it secretes. The value of the spiritual eye tree that cannot secrete alcohol is not much different from other spiritual eyes. The first reason is that the three sects of Yunmeng Mountain spent alcohol to refine Mingqing Spiritual Water for the disciples in the Foundation Establishment Period. If it were really too precious, they would not waste it like this. At least the disciples in the Foundation Establishment Period would not be able to get it. Reason 2: It took Han Li more than 20 years for the Spiritual Eye Tree to secrete alcohol, so there must be some kind of Spiritual Eye tree in the world of immortality that cannot secrete alcohol. Reason 3: When Han Li obtained the Jade of the Spiritual Eye, he mentioned that it could increase the speed of his advancement into the Nascent Soul by one-third. After the formation of the Soul, he only mentioned the Spiritual Eye Tree and other items when he wanted to restore his cultivation and when refining the Mu Sheng Pearl. Reason 4: Huang Maple Valley's ancestors were rich and it was also an established sect. The Seven Sects once wiped out the Xuanjian Sect. At the same time, Tiannan was considered a place rich in spiritual energy before the invasion of the demon world. There was also the Lingmiao Garden in Falling Demon Valley. Therefore, it is normal for some good things from Huang Maple Valley to be passed down.
Mu Yu
Mu Yu
Finally, Mahayana is achieved, and it's time to ask others for explanations 😏
I vote for you monthly, but I still need to contribute some points. Are you serious?
Is the author awake? It doesn't matter if you need contribution points to speak. Actually, even voting for a monthly vote requires contribution points. Do you think you are too hot and want to cool down? Looking at the settings in your character column, have you robbed Zi Ling? Anyone who dares to rob Han Li's woman has considered the consequences? You want to say that cutting off Yuan Yao and Yan Li is nothing. Even if you cut off Chen Qiaoqian at the beginning, it doesn't matter. After all, this is not the woman Han Li is destined to be. You snatched Zi Ling away but excluded Yuan Yao and Yan Li, two popular female characters. What are you doing? Also, does this mean that the protagonist ran to the spirit world in advance, but left Han Li in the lower world to walk through the space cracks, risking his life to sneak across? Are you planning to trick Han Li into taking a trip to the Gray Realm? If you cheat him like this, are you sure you can still get closer to him? Although I haven't seen the latest chapter yet, judging from the title in your directory, you don't plan to go to Luoyun Sect, and you don't plan to let Han Li go, right? There are also the Ice Phoenix, Silver Moon, and Destruction Eyes in the original work. Did you skip them directly? Even if you don't want it, you should let Han Li get it, right? Is it too much of a waste to just give up? Just because you ask him to work and run errands for you every day, he doesn't even have time to practice. Are you sure you won't become a flower in the greenhouse? Let's not talk about how much Silver Moon helped him in the original work. Let's talk about how many times the Destruction Eyes helped Han Li, but you were directly left behind like this. Do you think it's reasonable? If Han Li in the future time and space knows about these fucked-up things you have done, are you sure that Han Li will still treat you as a friend when he ascends and knows everything? You knew about Han Li's life and opportunities in advance, so you cut off his opportunities in advance. You actually took his woman away, why don't you just take Nangong Wan away too? There are also those opportunities in his original destiny. You don't want them yourself, but you don't give him the time and opportunity to get them. Isn't this too unethical?
It feels like it will be over in about a million words.
Very enjoyable to write
The pace is also quite fast, unlike some that are still in the Nascent Soul stage after 400 or 500 chapters, but the updates are a bit slow
In the author's final chapter, can the main character escape, or stay in Daluo like Han Li?
92 Collects purple spirit, 118 collects plum condensation
Does the author write about the fairy world? Or does it mean that it will be finished after writing about the spiritual world?
Don't mess up