Dragon King of the Mountains

Removing the heroine has no impact on the plot at all. You just relied on this character to write a third of the word count. The heroine is not well written, and your writing skills are not up to standard.

The white tiger bloodline of Wan Niang is a bit inexplicable. The protagonist is because of the Seven Kills Monument. Wan Niang is just an ordinary person. She only uses the lowest demon pill to have the top demon blood and her training qualifications are top-notch. While talking about how top-notch the qualifications of the protagonist are, there is also cheating on the Seven Evils Monument and how fast her training is. The result is not only the woman, but also the younger brother she recruits can always keep up with the protagonist's upgrade speed. The key is that she does not consume any resources. In comparison, the protagonist is simply too expensive.

It looks a little embarrassing. The character of Wan'er feels a bit useless. It is better to set it as a ghost bride as suggested by a book friend. This not only enriches the character types, but also turns a blind eye to the protagonist's harem because ghosts are infertile. You are now set to be your childhood sweetheart, the female dragon queen. The key is that her strength is average, but she will be jealous when a female appears. Is this okay? In the future, when the four, five, and six characters appear, how will you write about your character?

The author is great. Knives should be regarded as light weapons. If you want to focus on weapons, you can dream of fighting and fighting. (Insert a comment that ordinary tigers have the talent of making tents for tigers and controlling the wind. You, a dragon species, can't control the wind and rain, and don't have any magical talent?) It's really good to watch. Come on, brothers of Xiancao! !

New - Reference Picture of the Protagonist's Demonic Body The previous reference picture didn't look good, so forget it, let's use this ink picture. There are really very few pictures of ancient dragons and people, and it's hard to pick them out. They're all here to read the novel, so don't care about the picture. If you're not satisfied, you can make up your own mind. Isn't this the advantage of the novel?

The picture I saw accidentally on the Internet seems very suitable.

"You don't do anything every day, it doesn't rain or thunder. You are the fucking bullshit dragon king" "I am the dragon king of the mountain"

Could it be that he is a protagonist, no matter how good Goldfinger is, and has no side effects or compulsions, he still has to complain?

White Snake

Reference picture of Liu Wanniang

Please read it, guys!

Author, if you do this, you don't have many readers in the first place, and you still do it like this.

It would be best if the protagonist has a real dragon form in the future instead of the current half-dragon and half-human form. How handsome the dragon form is

What is written in the front is demon, and what is written in the back is human. Another fantasy novel in the skin of a monster. Starting from Chapter 11, cultivation started to change.

A man born between heaven and earth, how can he live in depression for a long time!

Isn't this better looking? ? ? ? This is the king

The book is okay, but Wan Niang is the biggest flaw of the book!

The author's plot is good, but the process is so rough that people have no desire to read it.

People are not human, monsters are not monsters, this book has no future, I can't get up

Reference picture of Yuan Xueyi

What are the names of the author's other books?