Full-Time Manga Artist

I put this novel on my bookshelf a few days ago. At that time, I just glanced at the introduction and picked it up without much thought. I was bored today and suddenly noticed this novel. Then I clicked in and read it, almost reading it in one sitting. My impression is that it looks good. The plot is an everyday one, and there is no plot in which other people secretly commit crimes out of jealousy. However, I personally recommend turning off the chapter function when watching. Personally speaking, sometimes when I see an interesting paragraph, and there happens to be a chapter after the paragraph, I will click on it. In this case, I often see uninteresting comments, which makes me feel picky. For example, one of the paragraphs describes the protagonist, Akira Toriyama, saying that he will definitely surpass him in two chapters left. Then Akira Toriyama said that he forgot that he had two chapters left, and then the protagonist's pupils shrank sharply. This was so irritating. I find it very interesting. Although it describes daily reality, this is a novel after all, and the society it describes is also Japan. This is also a light novel. This description is not inappropriate, won't appear strange, and won't make people upset. But some people in the comments think that the author is too Japanese-style, and the soul of the protagonist is Chinese, so it is unreasonable to do such a thing. To be honest, when the protagonist often bowed to others, why didn't you think it was too Japanese? Have you forgotten that the protagonist, an ordinary person, suddenly traveled to a parallel world, had more than ten years of memories, and lived in the environment of more than ten years of memories. Is it awkward to describe it like this under the influence? After all, don't forget that this is a light novel, and the later branches are native fantasy, not urban reality! As the saying goes on the Internet, it is unrealistic to find reality in light novels! After all, no one in reality would jump out and get hit by a car to save an unknown dog!

I personally think that copying a work can bring more enjoyment, which is to sublimate the original work based on the cognition of the time traveler. For example, in the work Soul of Chess, the original work does not involve artificial intelligence. The author can add enjoyment of artificial intelligence and sublimate the ending of the original work to a duel between man and machine. Manpower is no match for intelligence, and Go masters are disheartened. For example, Jiebao no longer tries to reach the top, and Go finally returns to a chess game that develops human intelligence. With such a sublimation, the quality of the work will rise, and the plot can be richer, adding interactive content with the Go world and the technology world. For example, if you copy Naruto and Pirates, you can completely break away from the strong lineage theory and small territorial concepts of the original work. The general plot remains unchanged, change to a larger map, and rationalize the lineage theory. Another kind of sublimation. This book has great potential, I'm very much looking forward to it!

Coming from the previous book, this one feels like an improvement over the previous one. Drawing comics in the background of Japanese entertainment, I feel that it is more comfortable now, and the author has stabilized the rhythm One thing I hope is that there are fewer female characters who prefer ambiguous relationships. The water here is very deep and the author cannot grasp it.

Why should I turn to this book? The number of words is too small. It took me only a few hours to read it. It was so painful. At present, there are no poisonous points. The male protagonist feels that he is more dedicated and proactive in his relationship at this stage, which is good. The main thing is to pay attention to the subsequent part of asking for forgiveness. I hope it doesn't turn into a slap in the face plot, but currently it seems that there is a trend of turning enemies into friends.

Oh, what a pity. I hope people who read it will know better. I have read more than 40 chapters of this book. Every woman in the whole book has been written as shit by the author. Latecomers should note that except for this shit point, the rest of the writing is about fairy grass. I originally thought about skipping a chapter, but the author It may be that half of the chapters are stupid and half of them are shit, which makes me very tired when I jump. I am very tired and I really can't go on. I hope people who read it will be prepared. There is always an awkward feeling that makes people feel tired when reading this book. The author is also a magical creature. How he does it, I don't know very well. I hope those who come late will be careful and retreat.

The author is a newbie, so please don't worry if you have any questions about what he wrote. Can you recommend your favorite short comics and animated movies? I am planning to draw "Slam Dunk" for my next novel.

In this type of novel, as long as the protagonist never makes breakthroughs and improves the original plot, he will eventually become a master in the work and become a clown in the eyes of readers. This is a common problem in this type of novel, so the author still needs to keep up with the times and see how to make those already famous works better, or create and modify those imperfect works in the future.

It's like this. If the author doesn't know how to write about women, he doesn't have to write about women. Instead of having a female character appear every few chapters that disgusts the readers, I would like to make a suggestion. If that doesn't work, replace all the female characters with male characters from now on. This will not affect the plot and allow the protagonist to concentrate on copying the book. What do you think?

Tragic news, the great master Akira Toriyama passed away due to illness on March 1 at the age of 68.

It's not necessary to pull and step on a big one. It's about Japan, not that you are all Japanese devils. When writing a chess spirit, you have to step on a Go boy. The Go boy becomes a demon, and the world is unified. The special effects are fake, yes. Is Fujiwara Satoui, who is a chess spirit, really a ghost?