The Elden Lord Living in Teyvat

I've already been reduced to a mere grandson; let's see if there are any other Shennongs as stubborn as me.

Is the author trying to write a story where the protagonist pretends to be weak while actually being strong? From our readers' perspective, the protagonist is a complete idiot!

Here's a small suggestion: it can be a different world's system, but aside from the protagonist and their belongings, don't bring things from that world into this one. Try not to change Teyvat. For example, a Teyvat meteor shower feels very chaotic and illogical. That's just my personal feeling, and it only represents my opinion.

I can't stand reading Keqing. What is this? Keqing is one of the Seven Stars, and she's usually quite busy. How could she have time to go shopping and date a foreigner, especially one with no identity and suspicious behavior? It's just another common problem in fanfiction: being too self-indulgent!

It's well written, don't write it again next time.

I don't understand why the King of Elden would become a blacksmith's apprentice in Teyvat.

I've read ten chapters so far and I'm starting to feel overwhelmed. I'm here to vent a little. First, the fact that the protagonist, a transmigrator from Elden who arrives in Genshin Impact using his own name, really bothers me. It's like a three-year-old suddenly holding a weapon that can decide someone's life or death. In short, his mentality can't keep up with his power.

A truly satisfying read. However, it's the author who's truly enjoying it; they're indulging in self-admiration, experiencing a blissful takeoff.

I can't stand it anymore. He's supposed to have the power of the King of Elden, yet he's treated like utter trash.

If you're going to write a light novel, then don't write one if you can't come up with a good idea. This book just feels like the author is indulging in self-gratification.