The Elden Lord Living in Teyvat

As the protagonist who has become a grandson, let me see if there is another Shennong who is as stubborn as me.

Does the author want to write about the protagonist pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger? In the eyes of our readers, the protagonist is a pig!

A small suggestion, it can be the system of another world, but apart from the protagonist and the things on him, don't bring the things of another world to this world. Try not to change Teyvat. For example, the next pyroxene meteor shower in Teyvat feels very chaotic and unreasonable. This is how I feel personally, and it only represents my personal opinion.

I can't stand watching Ke Qing. What are you writing about? As one of the Seven Stars, Keqing is quite busy and has time to go shopping and date with a foreigner. However, he is still a guy with no identity and suspicious behavior. He still commits the common problem of colleagues and is too self-pleasant!

Very well written, don't write it next time

I don't understand why the King of Elden came to Teyvat to be a blacksmith's apprentice.

I've read ten chapters so far and I can't stand it anymore. Come here to complain. First, the protagonist is a time traveler from the King of Elden to Genshin Impact. He uses his personal name. I feel a little disconnected. It's like a three-year-old child suddenly holding a weapon that can decide the life and death of others. In short, the mentality cannot keep up with the power. But most of the starting points are like this, so I won't say anything. Second, there is the problem of the protagonist's character. He must have been an adult before the time travel. The dialogue with the character of Genshin Impact is too childish. Although Genshin Impact is originally a 12+ game, Genshin Impact itself did not give me such a childish feeling. That's about it. The main thing is that it doesn't give people the feeling of writing a story about the King of Elden reaching Genshin Impact. It's like randomly choosing a relatively high-quality Goldfinger and then going to a certain game world to enjoy the game. It is extremely inconsistent with my expectations. The above is just my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it.

It's really "cooling" It's just the author who is "cooling". People are enjoying themselves, and cooling takes off.

I can't stand it anymore. After all, he has the power of King Elden. He's just like trash.

If the article is good, then the article is good. If you can't write well with your imagination, don't write it. This book is like the author's self-pleasure, and it was written by