I Am Dai Yan of Shrouding the Heavens

I was confused as soon as I read the beginning. Although most innate Tao fetuses are female, it is impossible for male innate Tao fetuses to be biased towards women? After all, there are yin and yang. Men should be masculine and handsome, and represent handsomeness, right? Furthermore, the Taiyin Human Emperor has imperial soldiers and the Human Emperor Seal. It is clearly stated in the original work. However, during the ancient and ancient years, the Taiyin Emperor suppressed the chaos due to the dark turmoil. In the end, a corner of the Human Emperor Seal was destroyed and then lost. It was in the hands of the Kunlun survivors during Ye Fan's period. The immortal-killing gourd that Ye Fan snatched from the Holy Son of Zifu was also destroyed during that period.

There are a bit too many enemies. It has just been through the dark turmoil for a few years and so many kings and saints have emerged. Isn't it funny? The real situation is just a lot of children and a bunch of old people who are on the verge of extinction.

Those who have watched Zhe Tian should not read it, because many of the settings are wrong, such as the Holy Body. The author actually said that there was no Holy Body in the ancient times. How else can the Supreme Emperor start suppressing the Great Dao after a thousand years after his death? Or suppressing the Supreme Being after his death for another thousand years? One thousand years is enough for some of the six batches of people to become emperors again. What the hell is this?

This book is too nonsense, with too many loopholes. The Taiyin Human Emperor's weapons and the Human Emperor's Seal were obviously lost in the ancient times in order to quell the darkness and turmoil. Let me just say this. The author's book actually didn't write it down and it has not been handed down. I am here. I can't stand it anymore, and I won't talk about the other blocking points, let alone the ancient holy body and so on. What's more, this is nonsense. After the emperor becomes a Taoist, he still has so much time to achieve enlightenment immediately within 1,000 years, so why should he be sealed? Are they all going to jump up and preach? ? ? Well, you haven't read the original work, haven't you? ? With the Tianxin Seal, it will take 10,000 years for the emperor to become a Taoist before the next person can realize the Tao? Are you writing a fanfic? If you don't write fan fiction, then don't label it as covering the sky. It will make people vomit. You are also a talent, author.

The author writes that the protagonist wants to become the weakest ancient emperor as quickly as possible in order to take revenge, which is beyond stupid. How many souls can an ancient emperor be worth? You are weak and weak just after overcoming the tribulation, so Soaring Snake will unite with other restricted area supremes to hunt the protagonist! You will die before you can take revenge. Not to mention that Emperor Cheng has to overcome the tribulation. You are just a high-level person, can you survive it? Dilu Zhengfeng, you are just a genius who has a high level of god prohibition and a great level of killing enemies. Are you still young? It took five hundred years to become the great emperor of the void. Ye Fan became the great emperor after more than five hundred years. After Ye Fan, there is a body of chaos, Ye Yishui, the second son of the immortal emperor, the God Baby, he will become the emperor at more than two hundred years old! You should change one thousand years to five hundred years to make it appear that time is tight, otherwise the time for enlightenment is really abundant.

The setting of this book is poisonous. The first point is that as long as someone is enlightened, all spirits will be suppressed and become enlightened. Therefore, the fastest and weakest emperor mentioned by the protagonist is completely impossible, because you have no alternative enlightenment and further cannot even break the heart of heaven, let alone the whole universe. Just after being harvested, you have no one to eat even if you are aborted. After you become a saint, there are not many in the universe (just after being eaten by the Supreme, there are not many high-priced cultivators), let alone eating enough thousands of origins. Do you want the weak to swing the butcher's knife at the weaker? To eat those newly born children with special physiques?

Chen Dong: I beg you, please delete the book. You are still representing Zhe Tian. If you delete the book, it will be the best endorsement.

It's a bit nonsense to suppress the Dao after thousands of years after the Emperor's death. If that were the case, the Emperor would not be out of service. There wouldn't be anyone who could prove the Dao within a thousand years for millions of years. Thousands of years are enough for the geniuses to become emperors from scratch, not to mention those 9s who were just one step away from becoming emperors. If they become emperors in a different way, they can take over the throne perfectly instead of just surviving a tribulation.

He has written 6 books and is still a first-class author. You can imagine how powerful he is.

There are too many trivial matters in the dialogue. In the author's setting, the protagonist is at a disadvantage from the overall situation to the local situation, and has always been passive. I took a cool script and wrote it, but the plot was unpleasant and a bit embarrassing. I don't know if the author rejects Shuangwen so that Goldfinger has no sense of existence and keeps the protagonist in a passive state. But those who come to watch Zhetian fandom are probably used to the rhythm of Zhetian novels. There are almost no emotional scenes, and you can't feel happy... The only thing that attracts me now is the imagination of the protagonist. The protagonist develops skills and simulates the secret realm of Lunhai to change the terrain. These two points make my eyes shine. Add a bookshelf first and take a look at it when you have time.