I Am Dai Yan of Shrouding the Heavens

I was confused when I first read the beginning. Although most innate Dao embryos are female, it's impossible for a male's innate Dao embryo to be more female, right? After all, the Dao is divided into Yin and Yang, and men should be masculine and handsome, representing good looks, right? Furthermore, the Taiyin Human Emperor possessed an imperial weapon, the Human Emperor Seal.

There are just too many enemies. It's only been a few years since the Dark Ages and turmoil, and so many kings and saints have already appeared? It's ridiculous. The real situation is probably just a bunch of children and a bunch of nearly extinct old people.

If you've read *Covering the Sky*, don't read this, because many of the settings are wrong. For example, the Holy Body—the author actually said there was no Holy Body in the Primordial Era. And what's this about the Great Dao Suppression only starting a thousand years after the death of an Extreme Dao Emperor?

This book is utter nonsense, riddled with plot holes. The weapon of the Taiyin Emperor, the Emperor's Seal, was clearly lost in the ancient times during the suppression of darkness and chaos. Let me just say this much, yet the author states in the book that it wasn't passed down. I couldn't continue reading at that point.

The author's idea that the protagonist should become the weakest ancient emperor as quickly as possible in order to seek revenge is utterly foolish. How many spirits can one ancient emperor withstand? You're weak and feeble after just completing your tribulation, so Tengshe will probably join forces with other supreme beings from the forbidden zones to hunt down the protagonist!

This book has a flawed premise. First, once someone attains enlightenment, it suppresses all other beings from achieving enlightenment. Therefore, the protagonist's claim of becoming the fastest and weakest Great Emperor is completely impossible. Without an alternative path to enlightenment and further advancement, you can't even break through the Heavenly Heart.

Chen Dong: I'm begging you, please delete the book. You're still endorsing "Covering the Sky," deleting the book is the best endorsement you can give.

The idea that the Great Emperor only suppressed the Great Dao a thousand years after his death is a bit far-fetched. If that were true, the Great Emperor wouldn't have had a gap in his lineage. Surely, there wouldn't have been a situation where no one could attain the Dao within a thousand years for millions of years.

Having written six books and being a first-class author, one can imagine how powerful that is.

There are too many trivial dialogues, and the author's character is at a disadvantage in every aspect, from the overall plot to the details, constantly on the defensive. It's like a plot written with a feel-good story script, yet it's unpleasant and somewhat awkward.