The Myriad Worlds Are So Lively

What kind of underworld operation is taking away Thorin Oakenshield? If I were Thorin, I would want to thank the protagonist's eight generations of ancestors~~ He is a king when he is alive, and even if he dies, he returns to the dwarf gods to reunite with his lost family. In the end, the protagonist was taken away by a lonely dwarf, and his only countrymen were the feuding elves... If people love adventure, forget it. But he has been wandering for half his life, and he can settle down whether he is alive or dead, and in the end he has left his hometown~ It would be okay if the protagonist had some appropriate reasons, such as "Save the world with me; there is a group of wandering dwarves who need your leadership", but it turned out to be to satisfy the collecting habit? What bad luck did Thorin have to suffer to be able to find a "mentor and friend" like the protagonist? Morgoth: "I may not be a man, but you are a real dog"

This world is so lively

The mentality and IQ are wrong. I only read the first volume, and it's too problematic. If it's your first time to write a book, and the protagonist is just an ordinary person traveling through time, then you can give the protagonist room to grow. But it seems that this is not your first time writing a book, and the protagonist is still an alchemist, and his status is not low, so it proves that the protagonist has experienced a lot of things. The protagonist can have various personalities, but the IQ should not be too low. I don't say that the mind is like a monster, but a normal big man must have the psychological quality, right? And this protagonist is completely an assembly line novice protagonist, just like an eighteen or nineteen-year-old kid in our reality who has never experienced anything.

It's okay. The Lord of the Rings chapter was greatly stretched, especially when fighting Smaug. After all, he was a god-level alchemist. Such a stretch, except for his personal private world, the fighting part didn't feel the power of an alchemist at all, and there are such limitations. The issue of controlling strength, I personally feel is completely unnecessary. The gods want to see an unexpected epic story. At most, they can restrict the appearance of high-tech firearms and other categories. It is simple. Not to mention the second dragon, at least it can be completely crushed. . Author, you don't look like a newbie. The Lord of the Rings is a perfect dodge. Come on, I'm a little unhappy, but you can still accept it. Come on, I'm looking forward to the next story. Come on.

I just watched the part about pirates, and I couldn't understand why the protagonist just came to pirates and was not familiar with the environment here, so he went around looking for trouble for himself. The first woman I saw asked about the way out, and she said that she followed the principle of equal exchange, provided food and drink to people every day, paid the taxes of the entire village, and helped save the other party's parents from fighting the Capone gang. It felt too It's ridiculous. It's like a person who goes abroad and sees a person who asks where this place is. He has to provide food and drink for the person every day. He also sees that the person's village collects taxes and fees and pays for it with his own money. Suddenly he finds out that the person's parents have been kidnapped and runs to save people. He starts a war with the local gang. I really can't stand on the same level as the author's thinking. Say goodbye 😅

Why do you have to fight the villain and act as a nanny for the original sense of smell?

I was disgusted when I saw JOJO rolling in. I kept thinking that these dwarves were still alive, but in the end, not only did the protagonist lick the dwarves, but he also forced others to lick them, and then even took some of them away to keep for fun. I really couldn't understand it.

The comments mean that Thorin was taken away? Isn't it? Some people really like this white-eyed wolf. Let's not talk about the original work. The movie alone is a completely unlikable character. Let's talk about the original work. If we really want to get over it, I would rather kill him. At least I won't give this b a good look.

The more I fight, the weaker it gets. I feel so depressed when I see it. It's too much to boast about pirates. If the loose rules of the pirate world make it more destructive, then pig's feet should also be able to exert stronger abilities accordingly.

May I just ask a few questions? Just came through the world of refinement? Been a leader? That's a big boss, right? When you come here, the system tells you that the immortal body can be messed with as you like? What I wrote was a soft-footed shrimp, and I had to struggle for a long time with a broken bow. I just wrote it when I had a fever, and it was cool to write. I just laughed at a big boss who has just been trained in the world. Even if he has just passed through it, his skill seal and physical fitness are so rubbish? ? ? And his IQ is very low. Is this the IQ of a world leader who has just been trained? Please go drink six more walnuts. This kind of routine is not suitable for this kind of intelligence. How about you remove the leader of Ganglian? ? I'm afraid you're just cannon fodder.