Divinization Begins with Martial Souls

After reading about ten chapters, I started to understand the author's mindset. It's a bit like when I was younger and tried writing fantasy novels. I came up with a bunch of seemingly impressive settings and worldviews, along with some self-indulgent and fantastical plots. After writing a portion, I realized that my writing style couldn't handle it at all.

Tang San must die in the first world. Otherwise, it might be a bad point. He's okay as a mini-boss in the early stages, but he absolutely cannot survive past the beginning.

So far, I'm doing quite well with this story, but I can't continue reading it if Tang San doesn't die.

It seems the protagonist is going to accumulate and create his own fundamental laws in a world of one person. I have some inspiration; the author should take a look when he has time. Firstly, in my understanding, most extraordinary systems can be categorized as either Inner Alchemy (a method of strengthening oneself internally, such as fantasy martial arts systems and cultivation systems) or…

Don't rush, everyone. With such a short word count, and considering Douluo Continent as the first world in the myriad realms, it's natural to have to deal with Tang San. But the author also needs to consider plausibility; they can't just give Tang San an easy, mindless power-up and kill him off. The protagonist needs a growth process. It's only a few words yet, so please be patient.

If Tang San doesn't die soon, the beginning of this story will be ruined.

There's a high chance the author is just jumping on the bandwagon of Black Douluo. The plot is obvious to anyone who knows it, and the conflicts, both in their causes and outcomes, are incredibly childish… Take the first conflict between the protagonist and Tang San, for example. The protagonist injures Xiao Wu with a counter-attack, and then Tang San immediately tries to kill him…

I think it's well-written, but it would be too toxic if you kept trying to kill Tang San and he kept having miraculous encounters instead.

This is a common problem in many Douluo Continent fanfictions. They claim the characters in Douluo are incredibly powerful, but then they create characters that are even more overpowered than the original characters. I don't even know how they have the nerve to mock the original work.

It's really annoying to see people mindlessly stirring up hatred. Do you really need to fabricate hatred for Tang San out of thin air? Any normal transmigrator wouldn't have much affection for him. Furthermore, in the original novel, Holy Soul Village had its own quota for work-study students, and there was no mention of it sharing quotas with other villages.