After Becoming a Villain, the Heroine Collapsed

According to the novel, it's not very good, but according to the pornographic article, it's pretty awesome.

It is really not easy to write this kind of novel at the starting point. To be able to use the writing technique of "parking, sitting in love, evening in the maple forest..." To vaguely describe the content that everyone wants to see without being censored, is really a master. In this environment, you have to give a thumbs up to your brothers.

I've read a few chapters, and that's it? It feels like the protagonist has no other skills besides making others drool 😰

Strong people never complain about the environment🙂🙂🙂

The author understands traffic. . . I've read a hundred chapters, and there are a few jokes that are meant to slap people in the face. They're all about xx this and xx that. . . . Author, is it all meat? It will be boring, not to mention that your flesh is all skin. If you go too far, you don't dare to write it, and if you dare to write it, you don't dare to send it to you. So, if the author adds a fan group, is there an academic version?

Stop kissing, stop kissing, it will swell if you kiss again, how much do you get for commenting on good novels?

What's the point of this? Since you want to do bad things, then do them to the end. I don't know what to say. And the Great Joy Double Cultivation Technique is so rubbish. Since even the heaven-level people can't go on a double break with a woman to improve their cultivation. There are so many restrictions. It's rubbish.

The last book on this subject has been removed from the shelves (after cutting off the heroine, the protagonist collapsed)

Book master, the main character is so slutty, I will order all of them when they come on the shelves

If the author returns to his old profession, returns to his first job, and finishes writing this book, it will definitely become a hit.

I've read nine chapters and come over to chat. To be honest, I quite like the setting of this book, and it's okay to scratch the surface. But the character creation is really straightforward and rigid, and the plot is also a simple one, to put it simply. . . It smells like a brainless and refreshing article. I have only read nine chapters so far. I am quite interested in this book and plan to continue reading. The reason I write this is to advise the author not to write the characters in such a mindless way, but to include all the necessary thoughts, concerns, and plot supplements in detail! Do you understand? Details! The novel must be logically clear and the plot smooth, otherwise it will be unreadable. Authors should learn more about how to write novels. Read good novels and read reviews. Learn what aspects you should pay attention to when writing novels. I am very optimistic about the setting of this novel. Please write it well.

It's okay for diaosi to be obscene and have no brains. It's a pornographic article and it's cool to read.

I have done good deeds throughout my life, so I should read this book

This kind of yellow-haired novel is so cool

I can't stand it anymore. I'm not nutritious anymore. Please keep up your efforts.

I have been doing good deeds and accumulating virtue all my life, and finally found a book that provides spiritual food.

There is such a sacred book at the starting point 🙂

I really gritted my teeth and read Chapter 18. If the author hadn't personally said that there would be a surprise after Chapter 23, I would have thought that the pig's feet were eunuchs, eating rouge until they were full and unable to complain.

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