Beauty Helps Me Realize Immortality

It feels like it was written by a girl. The emotions are just right, the upgrades are not hurried, and the thoughts of many boys are also grasped. The logic is clear and reasonable. It is a rare article about daily love and immortality, and it also has a rare number of female protagonists. I really like it. I have read dozens of chapters so far, and this is the only article that made me reward at the starting point! The last time I was asked to subscribe was "Xiangong Kaiwu", which made up for the regret of "Gu Zhenren", and it is indeed interesting in itself. It seems that this time, I have to thank the author again. He has enlightened me a lot. Come on!

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It's strange. The more I read this book, the less I want to read it. After almost two hundred chapters, it's not a poisonous weed.

After reading Chapter 280, how can I say, it becomes more and more boring 1. The revenge plot started early, and after reading fifty chapters, I can still chat about daily life without pushing the plot 2. The erotic scenes are also repeated, there are four people in total, the characters and the erotic plot account for a lot If you read it as an erotic novel, it is okay to read 200 chapters, but I don't recommend it later.

I have never seen a protagonist with so many faults, such as smoking and prostitution. Is this something very honorable? Why are you so casual with the protagonist? And Gu Na, why did he stop thinking about humiliating others and humiliate others when his status is slightly higher? Not to mention that the protagonist is glorious and upright, at least he doesn't make mistakes everywhere.

First of all, the author's writing is good, but the tone of the whole book is too... How should I put it, it feels old and sluggish. There are also some side stories and so on. Most people who read about cultivating immortals and falling in love are young people. This book makes romance and cultivating immortals bland. What a pity about the writing and setting of this book

Come on, the wife-making stream is pretty good.

The writing of this book is quite strange, the language and vocabulary are rich, but it seems to have a jumping feeling. At first, I thought I read it too fast, but I still got this feeling after reading it slowly. In short, it is not the mainstream way of writing male videos. Furthermore, after reading the first hundred chapters, I felt that the author did not write an outline. The plot was here and there, and I couldn't stand it at first. However, he wrote the Ghost Festival chapter very well, so I gave a little more hope. But after reading more than 200 chapters, I really couldn't hold on. The author probably wanted to write a big world view, but when I saw more than two hundred chapters, I felt that the map was quite big and nothing else. Almost all of them are plots on the twelfth floor. What about beyond the twelfth floor? There is too little description, it just feels like the map is big but the rest is very narrow. The same goes for the description of the heroine. There are only a few adjectives going back and forth, such as three thousand black hairs, love threads, and lotus arms. Among them, the word "lotus root" appears very frequently. Those who know the heroine is a person, but those who don't know think the heroine is Nezha. Also, the author probably wanted to write about the different worldviews from modern time travel to classical immortality, so he wanted to write with a bit of ancient charm. The characters' speeches and descriptions are all very literal, but I don't know whether it's because I want to write more clearly or because my writing skills are simply not good enough. It's very strange to read. Some of the descriptions of the protagonist's daily life seem to have been shoehorned in with those words. Summary. I gave up the book after seeing more than 240 chapters. The author may write better in the future, but my defenses have been worn through and I can't hold on anymore. The description of the secret realm in the book is indeed remarkable, very detailed and clever, and the section on starting to cultivate immortality is rare. As for the description of the heroine, if you can accept the shortcomings I mentioned above, it is actually not bad, but there is little description of the strategy, which feels a bit abrupt. As for the highlights of this book and the h-plots of the heroines, I can see that the author is a scumbag, likes to feed porridge, and likes the queen. There is nothing else to read, and there is no feeling at all. To be honest, I admire the author for this. I have read a lot of harem stories, and you are one of the few who can write such a plot dryly. Even if other authors of harem novels briefly mention the main plot and write some interactions between the male and female protagonists afterwards, it is enough to leave room for imagination. But you have described the main plot in detail, but the writing is very empty and makes people lack passion.

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This book is really great! A rare treasure author found on Daily Guide! It's a pity that it's not popular! Wait for the double monthly pass at the end of the month! This is my first time watching a wife-making drama, and the emotions are well written and the plot is great. Although the strength is not that invincible, I don't feel suppressed or abused when I watch it. It's great!

I picked up your book for the second time. The first time was when I caught up with the latest chapter at the end of last year and started reading it. The second time was in October this year. I saw that the quality of the chapters you wrote about Xiao Zhao fighting Huangfu has declined. I, an old bookworm, can tell it at a glance. It turns out that it was your poor performance in this book that caused your emotional breakdown. Although there are still many chapters that have not been read yet, I feel something in my heart and want to communicate with you about the part of this book that ends before the Tianxiang Walking Trial. First of all, the world setting of your book is fine, the writing is exquisite, the female characters are very appetizing, the lines are fresh, and the characters are coherent and vivid. It is only better than those platinum masters in the harem novels at the starting point. Judging from your feelings, I know that you have devoted your efforts to these characters. But why is the performance of this book not ideal? My understanding is that the pace is too slow, why the harem story of Master is so good, because they separate the women's skills and treasures one by one into reward packages. After one strategy is completed, it is the next. The book has some problems with its pacing after all five heroines enter Xiao Zhao's house. The main plot is too slow. There are too many daily routines and memories are constantly interspersed with it, almost becoming a soap opera. As a result, the number of words in each part far exceeds the original plan written in your summary, making it very bloated. My suggestion is that if there is no major progress in the plot, and there is no further change in the relationship between Xiao Zhao and the heroine, there is no need to write so many love words and physical contacts in detail. Although the characters are more fleshed out, the heroine is living with the hero. A simple sentence or two between an old couple can be understood by everyone. Most readers come to read the story rather than live in the book. Dialogue and memory descriptions that cannot promote the plot and emotional changes of the characters should be reduced. I have also posted before to remind you that the male and female protagonists cannot sustain this book on a daily basis, so Urumqi needs to speed up the development of the main plot. The above are my opinions on why this book has poor performance. They are all my personal opinions. Show this comment to your girlfriend: I am a loyal reader of your husband. This book is well written and I like it very much. Unfortunately, the pearl is covered in dust for the time being, but as the saying goes, the moon will shine when the clouds open. I hope you two can work together and persevere to complete this book. It would be a pity to give up halfway.

After reading the first volume so far, I can only say that the problem is huge The beginning to chapter 44 is very well written, which makes people motivated to read on, but after more than 200 chapters, I can only say that the problem is getting bigger and bigger If it is said that it is a fairy tale, it is too bland and has no explosive points. The battle complex is even more like Laqua in Laqua If it is said that he is farming, it will not be a bit satisfying. The most enjoyable part may be something that all system novels have, and Dark Blue adds some points If it is said that he is a romance novel, he even praises his brother, and the heroine's favorability level will be increased in a short time. The subsequent female protagonists are not as good as pure accessories, and then there are repeated male protagonists making money to support their wives. There is no separation between the female protagonists. They will grow up and reunite with each other in the future. They will not help each other in the incident, and there will be no unexpected plots. I can read these contents in 10,000 words, and I will be fine. Watch it I would feel aesthetic fatigue after reading 700,000 to 800,000 words. To put it bluntly, the author originally planned to finish the first volume in 30-40 weeks. However, the writing style of the book was doubled after the completion. It was simply because the outline was not detailed enough.

Shuyue!

After reading the 180th chapter, I feel like I can't stand it anymore. It's a bit deliberately circumventing and making it difficult to talk about it. Maybe I'm so used to killing and decisively that I can't stand the romance novels. It's too pretentious. However, this group of portraits by the author is a bit interesting. There seem to be few passers-by, and the characters all have their own personalities. A casual sentence is full of philosophical connotations. I feel that there are too many insights, maybe this is the case for love stories. However, because there are so many characters, it feels difficult to detect the main line. The protagonist's golden finger is not that strong, I quite like it, it is easy to grasp. The article is generally okay, but I feel that it is not a real dog, but a fake dog. It is suitable for ordinary romance novels, not suitable for rough guys who fight, kill, or farm.

I stayed up late to read it, it is really good. In the name of Shennong, I declare that this book is worth reading. It is indeed a thoughtful book in the same genre. It is not just a naive novice, and there is no plot that seems solid but is disgusting.

The first point is that most people are definitely attracted to the plot of Marrying a Wife. The core of the reader is the sense of immersion in the protagonist's own feelings. Second point, in the early stage of the author's fluent plot, the development of the harem was actually quite good, but later he began to focus on describing the relationship between the male and female protagonists. This kind of plot description is similar to that of daily romance novels, but what attracts people in daily romance novels are often simple plots, that is, the pure love of the male and female protagonists is expressed through language and daily life, and pure love is expressed through one plot after another. The recently popular school beauty is a representative work of this type. Third point, as we all know, the usual harem novels are usually about the protagonist going against the will of heaven, and then conquering all kinds of proud women. The general routine is to unlock new maps, and further improve the protagonist through people and big scenes. Wife-marrying is generally about increasing your strength by constantly recruiting people. This is the author's idea from the beginning, which is the golden finger. This golden finger is the core, and this will be the focus in the future. It is necessary to consciously weaken the presence of the heroine, increase the protagonist's ability to accept the heroine and then strengthen his own plot. The fourth point is that Yujing in this book is a big scene, and it is also a good subject for harem novels. In harem novels, in addition to the emergence of new heroines, what is often attractive is the improvement of the protagonist himself. This is the same in novels, and everyone is always the protagonist. In fact, it is also a good subject to take out Yu Jing alone. You can see the author's writing style. My suggestion is to increase the description of upgrades in the middle and later stages, but it must still be related to the income. In fact, many readers of this book are old readers who have been reading for many years. They have read many types of novels, and they often pursue novels with more reasonable plots. The biggest feeling when I read it now is that it is a pity. Many of the books in the book have good themes and are published in new books, but there is a feeling of uneven distribution. Now that I have written it, it is no longer advisable to change the writing method and return it to the original state. After all, the scene has been spread out now, and it is wise to strengthen the connection between upgrading and collecting the harem. Of course, I have always felt that these are two books, one is about marrying a wife and upgrading, and the other is about the fantasy harem. The latter is quite similar to Wen Dao Hongchen. The biggest feeling is the recent plot of Bone Collector, which is actually very consistent with the theme of this book. It is good to recruit people and improve their strength while unlocking new maps, or recruiting people while unlocking new maps. The relationship with Qing Zaihuawai is actually very good. The plot mainly revolves around the male and female protagonists, but don't expand it too much, because the description of Yujing in this book is very large, but the description in many places is very small, which cannot support such a large scene. The characters are relied on to support the scene, just like the poster is relied on to support the description of Yujing, the Tianxiang Tower and Yaohua Lord are relied on to support the Taoist Tribulation, and the Twelve Walks are used to support Yujing. You must stop describing the big scenes of the plot. It is a good plot direction to expand the plot through the addition of a new heroine or accessories, but this is just a suggestion. The greatest joy of online writing is the expectation of an unknown plot. Everyone has different ideas, so just satisfy part of the expectation.

When I saw the protagonist become the slave of a monster, I felt awkward and very poisonous, so I gave up.

Three Hearts and Three Phases

I just saw Si He enter the stage. He is really high in cultivation and very capable. But the male protagonist really felt uncomfortable when he called Master Si He. With three darling wives at home, Zhao Qing turned to call them master. There is nothing wrong with what my aunt said. When a male protagonist calls someone else's master, it doesn't matter where his wife is at home. You are not asked to be a 🐶 by serving her every day. However, the author borrowed this sentence from his aunt's mouth. There may be other developments in the future. For now, continue to order it and take a look.

I can read a hundred pictures. The plot direction in the front is reasonable and well-arranged, but the back part is very random. Just write it down. It's very bland and has a bit of an emotional scene. The description of the article is very weak, and the test is a test, analyzing left and analyzing right. Out of the water, there is no content. And the content is not about men's thinking, it's a harem written by a female author, there is thunder

So far, it seems to be pretty good. It is more attractive than the dog-like novels about being a dog. The writing style about daily driving and cultivating immortals is much better than other works. It is completely jumping left and right in front of Shen He. I hope you can keep it up.

I see that it is too boring now, just like a single-player game. After playing one game, I am shocked and satisfied. I may play two games later, but if I play three or four games, I will only get bored. The first part of this book is one of my favorites I have read this year. However, the plot is too serious and the main plot is very slow. From the first chapter to the present, there is only one fight in more than one million words. All the combat skills in the previous chapters are basically useless. Although I also like daily love, you are just talking about the plot throughout the whole article and do not push the main plot at all. The levels and realms are written in such detail and it turns out that it is impossible to use it, because this book is about daily love! It was clearly written so well that Ming Xin was written in the beginning, but it ended up giving me a big headache... Daily love + harem + cultivation of immortality is such a good theme. Up to now, most of the plots only focus on the emotional scenes and other plots, and the repetitive plots are boring. The more I watch it, the more boring it becomes. The interaction with the heroine will only make me uninterested. Obviously, the previous plot with the heroine will make me writhe like a maggot on the bed. The emotional description is inferior to those about marrying a wife. The result is that others can be high-quality, but you can't!

I can't stand it anymore after reading more than 200 chapters. . . . . .

I also watch Pure Love Harem, and I really couldn't stand this one in the middle (for those who paid to subscribe). It's definitely a bit toxic. Maybe it's because I've watched it for so long, so I endured it and continued to read it. After the story of Ye Xi ended, I didn't mention it anymore, and I didn't mention it anymore. Be it the heroine or the maid, it can be seen that the author is trying to avoid interactions as much as possible. This and the names appear a lot less. If you really mind, you can skip it and it won't have any impact. The bird-eating monster is disgusting. There is no need to accept it. To be honest, it might be better not to accept it.

The writing is good, and the caution and righteousness shown in the plot are very interesting. It's good to watch! I like this style of story. The protagonist should stop wandering and keep persevering. Come on, author! Vote for you every day

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It feels like when I watched Fat Bread Meng Meng Shan Hai Jing

After Ye Xi's plot, her roles became less and less. I feel like the author took the advice. After reading that plot, I thought there would be a lot of roles in the future. After all, she was almost given a separate volume.

Good book, when will a new book be released 🙂