Mecha Warfare: Starting with Gundam 00

What is a Gundam fanfic? The author doesn't even understand the essence and core of the Gundam world. Gundam is an anti-war work, and the emotional drama is only the smallest part of it. The male protagonist of the fan work making a humanoid self-propelled cannon is simply an insult to Gundam

Celestial Being's battleships are so rubbish. In two TV animations and one theatrical version, their battleships are not good. Get some heavy firepower. Get ten or eight of the large ones used in the pseudo-solar furnace battleship. How can the ultra-long-range beam cannon be only used by MA (Alvatore)? Also, you must use a shielded bridge for the bridge. The shielded bridge of the Goddess of Wisdom in Seed is good. In the second part of Gundam 00 and the theatrical version, the Allied Forces have a pseudo-solar furnace battleship, and they can also turn on the three reds for ultra-long-distance navigation. Look at how big the pseudo-solar furnace used on that battleship is. Here I want to strongly condemn the small missiles made of solar furnace particles. Even if you can extract unlimited particles from the solar furnace, the problem is that the missile shell containing those green particles is made of ore, which requires material. Those missile shells need to be smelted, shaped, and precision machined. Only turners, fitters, millers, and planers can be used to make a missile shell? Instead of saying that you cast a missile shell and then pour the particles into it, the casting is not precise enough to seal the particles. It is not possible to just cast a shell to make a missile shell. Also, what does the guidance of the missile rely on and what does the missile's boost rely on? If you say that the missile's boost relies on the GN particles in the missile, then your missile cannot hit far at all and consumes its own particles. If the missile is too small, it will have no power and cannot even fly very far, and there will be no particles. If it is too big, the enemy will easily avoid it. In a word, if you want to use your solar furnace, you can just make a beam cannon. The physical weapon is limited to ammunition. No matter how much your warship carries, it will be useless when encountering aliens of that kind of metal

I have thought about it all. The special training for the top gundam soldiers is that the supply equipment they are given is a sniper for melee combat, and a beam dagger and a solid sword are given for long-range attacks. Let the fool do the sniper battle, and let Lockon do the melee combat. Anyway, it is definitely the opposite of their specialties. When they become apprentices, these people will be invincible.

Knowing the plot direction of Seed, he hired Gai as a bodyguard, and then during the battle with the advance team, he exposed his own Gundam trump card. How could he still be playing tricks with his IQ? Very poisonous

How is the plot now? It feels more and more wrong. One of the points is that Cagalli grew up with the protagonist. She also said that apart from her father, the protagonist can control her, so it has no influence at all, right? It still follows the original work, and it is even more stubborn. The author also plans to write her as a villain. I can only say that the crime is not that serious.

Basically nothing was changed in the first part of Seed, except that the protagonist and his gang were added. It can be said that the presence or absence of the protagonist does not affect the plot of Seed.

The Seed world should be written in front of Gundam 00, just like when you play Legend and get the Dragon Slaying Sword, then seal the Dragon Slaying Sword, and then go to a low-level dungeon to get the Saber Sword,

Anyone who wants to read it, please note that this is a harem story, and the three heroines in the introduction are real. Moreover, the author's writing style is not good, and the emotional scenes are very difficult to handle. If there are people like me who don't like this kind of plot, there is no need to watch it. (I hope the author will not delete my comments. After all, this will reduce unnecessary arguments caused by some people who don't like harems.)

It might have been a good book ten years ago 🙂 (the protagonist Jiuyou's hellish eyes scared me away)

I saw the author talking about the decline in the performance of the novel, because I have personally watched the performance of the one next door go from being far behind, to tying, and now surpassing it, so I would like to express my personal views on this novel off the cuff, because I wrote it casually without a draft, and some of the prefaces did not match the afterwords, and even Even some of the words are not pleasant to hear, but please believe that there is absolutely no malicious intention on the part of the individual, so those who see it should just think that they are talking to themselves in a daze and laugh it off. Let me talk about these three points: 1. The characterization of the characters; 2. The characterization of the team; 3. Portrayal of the opposite sex; Let's talk about the first point first, the portrayal of characters, maybe because of life experience. The protagonist in the author's works occasionally shows the kind of "iron-blooded" feeling that is very conscious when using swords, which cannot be felt in any other similar works. It looks very... Comfortable (such as Chapter 1174), this is the author's biggest feature and greatest advantage. Please write more about this aspect in the future, but the portrayal of other characters is quite uninteresting (such as Chapter 657). I have also seen the original animation, and I really can't believe it. Uncle Xiong, who can calmly push his son away when facing death, will say that kind of words and do that kind of actions to the protagonist who returns home. This is fan fiction. The plot can be more imaginative than the original work, and the character's experience can be very different from the original work, but only the portrayal of the character's personality is different from the original work. The work cannot be too different, otherwise the sense of tearing off from the original work when reading will be really uncomfortable sometimes; Then the second point is the portrayal of the team. I personally think that the protagonist in the author's works is an unparalleled warrior, an excellent squad leader, and a newly qualified platoon leader, but as a The company commander made things difficult for him, so the description of leading the Celestial Team in the opening 00 was very smooth, but when leading the protagonist group to clear the large dungeon, some of the plots were really unbearable. For example, I wonder if the author likes the character Yitzhak very much, and I feel that the protagonist can tolerate him very much ( Such as Chapter 837), when I saw that, I really wanted to ask the author: Do you dare to speak to the company commander like this when you were in the company? Where is the protagonist's control over the team, and where is the discipline of the team, so that an organization where superiors cannot establish absolute authority over subordinates can form combat capabilities and fight on the battlefield? What I can't stand the most is why everyone in the protagonist group is included, such as Ofer Ram Thao. In reality, I am just a common man, and I really can't share the love of a high-ranking person like him. In the original work, this bastard restarted his destiny plan and launched military campaigns for personal affairs, resulting in a large number of casualties and treating ordinary people's lives as nothing. He was killed by a thousand cuts, and he was included in the team. What kind of operation is this? Personally, in my opinion, the protagonist group is at most a Liangshanbo-style "gang" composed of green forest heroes. It cannot be called a "team", and it has nothing to do with the word "army". Maybe it is because I am a military fan, and the requirements for the depiction of the team organization will be relatively high. After all, After all, the PLA is the most well-organized and disciplined organization in the world, and its strong combat effectiveness comes from this, so in the future, we should pay more attention to the description of the team at this level; The third point is the portrayal of the opposite sex. Personally, I still think that 00 in the beginning is the best portrayal, because Kujo's feelings are a fait accompli, leaving a lot of blank space for readers to Imagination, while Wang Liumei is very negative. When I read it, I felt that readers would feel sorry for not accepting her. This is the best way for all authors who are not good at writing emotional dramas to deal with this problem. However, in SEED, the plot of seriously falling in love with the captain, deputy captain, and the demon was really awkward. When I accepted the emperor sister in Geass, I couldn't help but sigh - can this be done? Personally, I really feel that the author is not very good at writing emotional dramas. If he is not good at it, then he should use his strengths and avoid his weaknesses and write less, or refer to the 00 articles at the beginning. Isn't it handled very well? The writing route that I think is suitable for the author is: portray the protagonist as a "predator" with extremely strong combat power and high combat awareness, who can reasonably open an unparalleled "predator" in the dungeon, and travel to the mission world to be a lone hero. If you want to open a harem, try to keep their "beauties" in the original world as much as possible, and take time to go back to accompany them. Only take no more than 100 people with you. Three "wives" with the best relationship (Private goods: Please keep Shirley Lou with you, this perfect girlfriend, haha). If one person or one machine cannot support the combat power, there must be a protagonist group. Then portray the protagonist group as one who does not question the protagonist's orders and will execute them without compromise. A fleet of robots composed of ultra-intelligent AI and The machine clusters try to reduce the presence of "people" in the protagonist's group. If he participates in leading the team in the dungeon world, it also portrays the protagonist as a staff-type character who leads the team in a ruptured manner and whose combat awareness can convince the crowd. He only needs to come up with ideas behind the team's first leader. The protagonist only needs to be able to step forward at critical moments on the battlefield. Come on, author, as long as you still write fan fiction about robot warfare, I will always support you.