The Heroic Spirit Throne Travels Across the Myriad Worlds

It's well written, don't write it again in the future, the systems of each world are different, the strength level is not correct, it feels out of place 😅

I'm a little speechless after reading the introduction... Whitebeard wants Cu Chulainn to be his son? Does Cu Chulainn's father know?

Tell me the root cause The full name of the root is "the vortex of the root", which refers to the origin of all phenomena and all causes and effects in the moon world. The origin of everything specifically includes matter, concepts, laws, space, time, phase, parallel worlds, planets, multiverses, worlds outside the universe, nothingness, life, death, etc., All exist from the root. This is It is the root, and the root is Gaia, the inhibitory force formed by the thought tide of the planet. The mental network phenomenon shared by primates is Alaya. The five magicians below are the modification of cause and effect, parallel space interference, soul materialization, existence erasure, and time travel. As for the truth-telling of the Demon God Pillar True Ancestor, it is somewhat insufficient.

That's what Guo's Jueji said, but the setting is the same, and it has nothing to do with Xingyue 😅

The setting of Xingyue is just a background board at best, not even a real world. This book does not specify that the main world of the protagonist is the world of Xingyue. So... The focus is on heroic spirits! The focus is on the heroic spirits! The focus is on the heroic spirits! Say important things three times! ! ! ! ! ! ! ps: Book club group: 1061248892, all readers are welcome to join the bragging!

Hey, forget it. After reading the third chapter, there are too many flaws. As I said, I'm tired and don't want to complain. I'll see you in the next book.

There are several poisonous points in this book: 1. The protagonist is too nanny and childish, has no opinion, and almost no plan. To be honest, she feels like she is not being taken seriously. So Paige just points her finger at the protagonist and scolds her again and again? It's really better to hide behind the scenes 2. It's called Throne of Heroes, but it's all about how the protagonist sends various things to other protagonists in the world (grandpa is online) 3. The description is too colloquial, and it's very dramatic. I wanted to write it funny but it's actually very funny. Awkward 4. I like to follow the plot. This may vary from person to person. You say that the general trend is inevitable but the actual changes are not small. You still cling to the plot and say that small things don't matter, but why do you think that a small change will not affect the general trend? Does Marvel also have heaven to regulate it? 5. The setting of the moon is not rounded, and there are many loopholes. The 72 pillars of demon gods destroying the world at the beginning feel weird...

The beginning of the first chapter is not appropriate at all, and the plot is not smooth. In fact, there is no need to write about it. It is just to spread poison. Just write about the system, or the masterless Hall of Valor magic base, and Xingyue's magic knowledge. Bringing Gaia and Alaya is just to spread poison.

If you are poor, you can be alone, but if you are rich, you can help the world? This makes the protagonist look like an ancient bachelor who has just graduated, rather than a great hero who can withstand the malice of the entire world as the author himself said. He can do whatever he wants to do, why should he explain it? What are you afraid of? Are you afraid that readers will call you a holy mother? What is your main character? Is he a guy who needs to live by the rules set by mortals? After reading this, you, the protagonist, have been written not like a great god standing on the ceiling of the world, but like a nouveau riche. And as a person who has survived for tens of thousands of years, the protagonist is really too lusty, like a little boy who is still in love for the first time. In summary [The author's subjective consciousness seriously affects the world of the novel]

The idea is good, but you have to read the setting of Xingyue before writing.