Cultivation: I Can Change Probability

Actually, if you just fix the punctuation, the readability will improve dramatically. After reading the first few dozen chapters, this is clearly a good book.

I can't stand it anymore. The excessive use of punctuation is unbearable. I don't understand how the author can't even use such a basic thing as punctuation correctly?

Having read over 140 chapters, I'm starting to lose interest. This is such an overpowered cheat system, and it's a cultivation world. You could have had them do alchemy or weapon crafting as a side job, but after Foundation Establishment, all they do is gather materials to build ships, then build electromagnetic cannons, talking about their immense power and vast space—dozens of chapters of that.

Just fix the punctuation, have the original book removed from the shelves by the editor, and re-listing it with a contract shouldn't be a problem. Even with perfect attendance, you can earn 1500 a month; with better grades, you might even make several thousand.

Have you ever actually read anything that can be called a book? Why would someone write a dialogue without even the most basic punctuation? Have you ever been educated? Didn't your elementary school teacher teach you to use quotation marks when writing dialogue?

The story started off well, but once shipbuilding began, it went on and on, with dozens of chapters dedicated entirely to ship modifications. It also started to lose its grip on the plot, completely abandoning the cautious and meticulous approach of the beginning. A classic case of a strong start followed by a decline.

Setting aside at least half of the instruction manual-like content, the rest is actually quite good. This dry, instruction manual-like construction content is as rare as punctuation, and far more difficult to accept.

I really enjoy the author's novels, but the punctuation is just too much to bear. So, I used GPT to create a piece of pathon code to add punctuation to Chinese text. Are there any programmers who could take a look and see if it's usable in a novel, making it easier for the author to modify punctuation? Below is GPT's response and the code: Yes, it's possible.

Good grief, group transmigration plus transformation, and the protagonist's cheat codes are the leftovers from everyone else. Are you afraid of getting good grades?

This is terrifying! The main character is a woman... It's no wonder it's a cultivation-themed novel and has no chance of becoming popular...