Diary of a Dead Wizard

The biggest logical problem in this book is the emotional portrayal... It is clear that the wizard apprentices are only people under thirty years old, but most of them are made as if they are heartless. It can be seen that the author wants to move closer to the style of the wizard's journey, but the life span is completely different from the wizard's journey (the wizard's apprenticeship period is depicted even longer. There is obviously no essential difference, but they have to learn different levels of magic during the apprenticeship. If it is changed to all apprentices, they can only use level 0 tricks, and the difference between the first, second and third levels is mainly It's the difference between quantity and locator. It might be better to shorten the period of wizard apprenticeship) Back to the emotional portrayal, even if wizard apprentices can kill people at will, human nature and human desires cannot be erased in just a dozen years... It is clear that the wizards only focus on interests, but the plot conflicts are all emotional (such as resentment, genocide, etc.), Which is a bit of a drama... Everything else is fine, but the correlation between the branch plot and the main plot is too low.

A good wizard-style novel, with decisive killing, human nature, and clear logic. The protagonist is not a virgin, and the villain is not clever. The writing skills of some of the early plots still need to be improved, but the author's writing skills have improved significantly as we go on. All in all, it's worth watching.

The story is very complete, the pacing is good, and it outlines a strange wizarding world. Novel generally has a common problem, that is, everyone understands the routine as they read, but there is no interest in reading it. However, as the protagonist's strength increases and the mystery gradually loses, the novel ends appropriately and completes the plot, which is commendable. Although the characters in the later stages of the novel are somewhat idealized, which is contrary to the indifference and weirdness of the wizard, it allows readers to maintain a reading environment in line with universal values, so there is no big problem.

This is a novel with a strong wizarding flavor. It has some minor flaws, but the problems are not major. By the way, there is a problem in many weird, grammy, and wizard novels. After the pig's feet get a golden finger or become stronger, there is no longer the pressure of survival and the fear of the unknown outside world, resulting in boring in the middle and later stages. Personally, I think the essence of this type of novel has been lost (of course, there is another flavor of invincible crushing, but it no longer belongs to this type of novel). I hope the author can maintain a good attitude in the future and let the weirdness, chaos, and fear always accompany the protagonist, quack quack~

It's a decent wizarding novel with a good pace and is worth reading.

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It is a wizard novel that is very suitable for listening to. It is not a novice, has attractive points, and the plot is not bad~ It is suitable for listening slowly to kill time.

Come on! Beautifully written!

How old is Sol now?

It's so rare that I read it in one sitting. It's rare to find a book with a moderate pace and sophisticated writing. Although some parts feel too hasty, it doesn't affect reading. I won't comment on the content setting. I hope the outline is sorted out and there won't be any abrupt plots later.

I've been staying in Mofan Town for a few days, but I haven't heard anything. I just know that someone sacrificed a girl. After spending so many days, the amount of information I got is not as good as asking a few questions directly. To put it bluntly, apart from eavesdropping a few words on the first night, the protagonist spent the rest of the time eating and sleeping, and then watching, well, it's not that we don't want to see the world of ordinary people, but we don't want to see the protagonist be an outsider and forget all about his previous actions.

It was so weird in the early days and the death rate was so high. I really don't know how wizards without Goldfinger could develop. It's illogical for this civilization to develop to such a high level! The stage when the wizard tower collapsed was too random to advance to a level, and the mentor's intelligence was too powerful. I really don't know what kind of intelligence it is to drag a bunch of traitors in to help you do experiments, tie up your hands and feet, and almost capsize the ship. A second-level boaster is so awesome, but the wizard tower under his full control has so many moles but can't do anything about it. This is the top family genius! Later, the inexplicable teaming up with Feng Yao was just a forcible matchmaking to push the plot. Isn't it good to build a base for development after reaching the third level and initially mastering the golden finger? Isn't it good to tap resources and integrate talents for research? In such an important chaotic area, a young apprentice is assigned to study it permanently. It made me laugh so hard! If you have to go to the fourth level to hang out, you really don't know how urgent it is to contact the wind demon who ran away to another world? Hey, why don't I wear Nirvana? Suddenly I found that the protagonist's IQ and thinking are just like that, and they are all very good! I saw that the Sky City section was officially abandoned, 88

The writing is actually okay, but this kind of writing always leads to death for the sake of death! Unless it is on the battlefield, in troubled times, there is no such a high mortality rate as the protagonist. Otherwise, the death rate is higher than the birth rate, and the population will be gone long ago!

The author wrote very well during the early period of the wizard's apprenticeship. Weird and terrifying scenes + depressing and tense atmosphere + suspenseful exploration jointly create a very attractive wizarding world. However, after the protagonist became an official wizard, the author seemed to have difficulty controlling this book. It is difficult to understand the rebellious behavior of several mentors, because they "conspired" in Gortha's wizard tower and never succeeded no matter how hard they tried. And Golza even forcibly suppressed his intelligence. He knew clearly that both the experimental subject and the experimenter were trying to kill him, so no matter how feasible the experimental plan seemed, the experiment would not be successful in the end. Not to mention that he knew all about the conspiracy and almost took it off, and then disappeared in an instant. After changing the map, the plot becomes more and more dull, because the protagonist begins to develop towards the invincible flow. Although as the protagonist's strength increases, it is difficult to continue to create the tense atmosphere of walking on thin ice, but I still hope that the author can write a more exciting plot.

The scheming scheme of the Mage Tower replaced a group of women with so-called mage

I feel like sleeping with Feng Yao is really this? ? ? ? ? ? I believe that most of the people who can see this place are lovers of no heroine or single heroine. Those who like to have a harem will probably run away in the early stage, so who is this writing for?

From Chapter 113 to now, the protagonist has not grown at all. The plot suddenly slowed down, became lengthy, and included various tender descriptions of the seniors. It suddenly lost the cold tone of the wizarding world, and the boss evil spirit was played around in circles without feeling any sense of force. I think the author wants to cancel the order, so I'll give it a try first.

Why does it feel like the author is being fucked? How can people say that such an authentic wizarding novel is dull and boring? This kind of imagination and writing logic are obviously not on the same level as studio batch writing. Anyway, I am a group of people who enjoyed watching it. The rankings feel real and fake.

The book is currently well written, but too much ink is spent on the wizard's apprentice. . . . I have always emphasized that there is no essential difference between wizard apprentices. As a result, there are so many supernatural powers and abilities in the apprenticeship stage. It is difficult to write a good story about the improvement of subsequent upgrade abilities. There is a high probability that the future will be the same as before, and the future is worrying.

How does the mortality rate in the wizarding world maintain the current social structure? It feels like wizards of any level die casually.

The first two-thirds of this book are absolutely magical. The plot of the apprentice trembling in the wizard's tower and being precarious is so well depicted. It's so immersive that it feels so chilling to the back when pushing a cart in the corridor.

What was exciting in the early stage was the horror atmosphere and the fact that the protagonist was weak and relied on a golden finger to survive. All the events that the protagonist experienced as a second-level apprentice were very confusing and their meaning was unclear. The only function is to slowly kill the other people in the Wizard Tower. The character of the protagonist is not as clear as the supporting characters. It can only be said that there are too many poisonous points. It can only be said that ordinary audiences should easily be unable to stand it.

It's difficult. I originally thought he was a desperate lunatic, but he turned out to be a rich and handsome man who had to go home and inherit tens of millions of wealth if his business failed.

Oh... My Keli... Suck, sniff, sniff The author doesn't write emotional dramas, to be honest, I give praise But, if you think about it, Keli is the first light for Thor in his struggle in the darkness. Of course, Saul's resolute character may not care about it, but in a weird world where you can die at any time and be sliced ​​into pieces, becoming good friends with a sweet girl with cute little freckles (ah! I love freckles freckles!) And bringing him into Saul is a light in the darkness! Oh my freckles girl, kill me! Tips: Reject the white, thin and young aesthetic, start with you and him!

A good book, with a strong taste of wizarding novels. I stayed up late to catch up on the latest updates. It feels like I was on a journey to chase wizards. The protagonist is a bit unhappy about being stared at all the time. There is nothing wrong with it. The writing is smooth, not holy, has a bottom line, and has written something new. It feels like my eyes are shining Xiancao

I really liked this book, so I drew Thor⚡️Because it was the first time I drew a person carefully and I was a novice, so I couldn't draw many ideas. I originally thought of a noble wizard, but ended up getting a mercenary. From the beginning I saw Now I feel that all the other supporting characters are in a vague state. I don't know if there will be a solid supporting character in the future. Of course, don't listen to my slander. You can write whatever you like. Finally, I hope this book will get better and better, and my painting career will also get better and better🎉

The male protagonist is no longer abstinent! The target is Feng Yao, but there is a question mark as to whether Feng Yao is the heroine. As for the relationship with the wind demon, my personal reading experience is still not comfortable, because I always thought that the male protagonist is abstinent! At least he is a character who is not too controlled by lust and will not take the indulgent route. I expected it to be a single female protagonist with no cp or a very dull love line, but now I feel that the future love line may still be single, but he is not clean! The Temperance Party is furious at x (just kidding The main reason is that the protagonist loves and Breaking the rules! At the same time as I read this book, I also read a book called Astrology Wizard (or Constellation Wizard). I deleted it from the bookshelf so I can't find the specific name. The author probably had a sexual relationship between the male protagonist and the female character before entering V. I looked at the label of the heroine next door, and then weighed the writing of the first hundred chapters, and left decisively. ↑This is great. The showdown before entering V, the indulgent faction left, and the abstinent faction left happily. So there are hundreds of photos in this book, and it's a bit back-stabbing to find out... Let's wait and see, Kongsha and Byron wrote really well before🚬I feel that the plot is not very weird recently, it's not as exciting as before🚬🚬🚬🚬🚬🚬🚬🚬🚬🚬🚬

Because many readers are struggling with the apprenticeship test. The author will briefly explain it here. First of all, I admit that what I wrote here is not clear and appropriate enough, otherwise I shouldn't have posted a special explanation. It's still a matter of ability, and the conception is not perfect and rigorous. Secondly, the test is divided into three items: magic power, mental power, and elemental perception. Before the first fat man in the article died, he commented that he "had no magic power and no mental power", which was terrible. Again, the first time the diary said, "The qualifications are not good (or is the talent not good?)" And the second time it was reminded that "The magic test failed," actually it refers to the magic talent. And why did the protagonist get banned after only one item failed? It was because someone wanted him to get banned and used the topic as an excuse. (The little fat man is the foreshadowing) Finally, I will mention it again in the future as a supplement to the plot here. To summarize, the test does not require excellence in all three items. The protagonist discovered that the doll consumes a lot of energy and makes people dizzy. He was so sick that he rushed to the doctor. He planned to pretend to be fainted here. There was no response in the diary. He thought it was feasible, so he used the doll to test his extremely high mental qualifications and then pretended to be dead. As a result, he passed the test even though he was seriously partial to the subject. (Spread flowers~) I will explain this plot here. If you think it is far-fetched and awkward, it means there is something wrong with my writing. Please don't get too entangled and continue reading the story. I hope you will like the following story! (There shouldn't be too many such specialized explanations about the plot in the future. And thanks to the many gentlemen who helped the author explain, ✧(◍˃̶ᗜ˂̶◍)✩)

The early stage of this book should belong to the mainstream of sadism. Please read it carefully. It is not about emotional abuse but about difficulties. The difficulties keep coming one after another, and it takes a long time to solve any one. Looking at the protagonist's performance from a God's perspective, there is nothing exciting about it. On the contrary, there are constant negative emotions. I thought I could see the spirituality of a modern person, but it turned out that I could only see a little bit. The protagonist didn't remember the nature of his previous life at all. After staying in the wizarding world for two years, he also forgot his three views. He lost his nature and completely became like other protagonists in other worlds: wearing the skin of a modern person, the core is already an aborigine. I don't know what happened in the later period.

I like this book very much. I used artificial intelligence to draw a few pictures of Thor, as well as Fenda. At least they are more in line with my imagination of the characters in the book. Before Thor had a full body transformation, he still had ordinary human skin. Then he gradually began to act like a human being 😂 His skin became increasingly pale... Involved in the soul experiment stage of Pink University and began to search for information in the library. Go out to explore at the same time There is also the whisper of the elves Finally, there is Pink University There is also the Q version of the wizard tower, underground laboratory and wizard tower enchantment. Mushrooms, all mushrooms, and moseng fruit The mysterious wizard tower