Cultivation Begins with Reaping Rewards

1: Too wordy, too much nonsense! 2: You're just a beginner disciple, why are you involved in so many social obligations? Your main focus right now is farming. I really don't know why you created that guy surnamed Lu. Does he have any connection to you? You can dismiss him with just a few words! 3: You really don't need to write about harvesting rice in such detail.

The biggest problem with this type of question is controlling the scale of rewards. Too many rewards can easily turn it into a monotonous, repetitive exercise, while too few incentives fail to demonstrate its value.

The section on farming could be written in a more technical style; I recommend referring to the "Encyclopedia of Chinese Agriculture".

Almost two hundred chapters and you're still stuck at the third level of Qi Refining, what have you even written?

Okay, I'm speechless. Those on the first and second levels, already possessing the "Pure Spirit Aura" cheat, are still so timid and hesitant, like neighbors in the countryside envying your good life. They're afraid to show off even on the second level; this stage has the least risk, yet they don't gain more power. If all else fails, they should cultivate the Concealing Breath Technique.

Seriously, in the novels I've read before, spiritual plants could grow simply by having spiritual energy, nothing else mattered. This one is different; it includes sunlight, water, humidity, and so on—it feels more realistic.

Highly poisonous. Shennong is dead. Burn paper money if you need anything.

It's rambling and long-winded, like an old woman's foot-binding cloth—just a bunch of filler words, completely padding out the word count.

Does this book mention Daoist partners, wives, or concubines? Does it mention establishing a clan? If so, I'll read it. I don't like reading those kinds of Buddhist texts; they're too boring.

What kind of cultivation are you doing? You've only reached the second stage of Qi Refining after 50+ chapters; does Foundation Establishment require over 300 chapters? Your skills have all improved, yet they don't boost your cultivation level? Have you become a game character? Are cultivation and skills counted separately?