Proving the Dao and Becoming an Immortal While Laying Low in a Fallen Family

I can't stand the first two chapters. There are too many characters. I will introduce them in a few chapters. I also need to change the character descriptions and settings. If I can't write it myself, I will copy it first and then modify it.

I have finished reading these chapters The entry is okay, but the development is very strange, the causes and consequences are explained in a hurry, the logic of the characters' behavior is problematic, and the people cannot be established The events are very sudden In fact, the writing is adequate, and the setting has certain characteristics, but the story-telling ability is a bit poor It can be seen that the setting is very good The setting of the world view, but the most important thing in web articles is the sense of substitution and story content. There is some hope in signing the contract, but the writing method is wrong and it is difficult to achieve results Look at Dachixianmen. Dachi is eager to learn in the early stage, so it is better to learn how to write first.

It is basically pieced together by AI, and the author himself has not figured out the logic.

As a resident singer, I suddenly thought about whether there would be someone who could write nonsensical stories fluently, and a golden finger with a singing buff would write a book.

Where is the brain? Why do you have to wait until your father is beaten to death to use it?

My humble work on the fairy tale genre, "Walking in the Merciless Way, Forced to Pursue the Saint", please be honest and support me, fellow Taoists.

It's so sluggish, please work harder later

After reading it for so long, I feel that this is the author's first time writing and the plot is incoherent, but the setting is very new and the writing is not great, but not bad. I hope I can keep writing.

It's okay, keep up the good work👏

Got it via Douyin🙂