The Third Generation of Tokyo

Senior sister, why don't you let the new group of young eagles go?

I heard that I was imprisoned in a small dark room, so I had to read it 😍😍😍

Sisters and Sisters can be given a score of 9 or above, and Eagle can be given a score of 7. This book has a maximum of 5 points. I don't know if it's because I have read the Hen Card fanfic. The beginning is not attractive to me. You put an anime worldview into reality, which is too inconsistent. Animation can use a girl band as the theme to cover up all these contradictions. If you put it in reality, it will look like the darkness of the Toyokawa family, and it will become clowns. Let me talk about what is unreasonable. Even if the son of a big family is kicked out in real life, he will not be able to afford a house like in the anime. Shouldn't he travel abroad? Or in Japan, if the father of the head of the family is kicked out, all contact will be cut off, even his salary will be wiped out, and the head of the family cannot give money privately. How is the plot written? Xiangzi takes the protagonist, an outsider, to overthrow his grandfather so that his father can stay. Wherever the supreme power is interfered with by an outsider, even if Xiangzi is a god, her family will not agree.

Isn't this an old eunuch bobtail cat?

Which bastard sponsored the treasure chest?

Now this title of the book seems like someone fired a cannon at me, it made my head buzz. But the advantage is that it is simple and crude, which may be more in line with the market. . . But can you add a alias in the introduction: Takasaki Xiyanpu

I originally thought it was an ordinary Tokyo novel, but Toyokawa Shoko came out and Bengbu lived.

The male protagonist is just a pure kid 😒😒 He can write without stage fright in front of his peers... Stop making trouble, brother

I remember reading Flowers and Swords when I was a kid, and the Young Eagle before was considered to be of a high standard. The writing in this book is like the campus costume work next door. It's so childish and Long Aotian... It has the beauty of ancient Internet literature. Can my senior sister write it to the level of foil swordsman? I'm really dizzy at this pretending piece.

There are female music characters to support the popularity, and political games to support the depth. I feel that this book is still good 🤭 Come on, author, please write more! However, I don't understand whether the protagonist is a native or a reincarnation. At present, it seems that he is a native, but he is more mature and calm, not just a simple Asasi.

I don't know if anyone has the same thought as me after reading it, "Ah, that's it" and then moves on to the next chapter. The plot lacks ups and downs and is too straightforward. It relies entirely on the characters to keep you watching. However, the characters are not original, and non-insiders will not be able to get the cuteness.

Will you accept old cucumber Mori Nami?

I know that girl bands are certified fashion items But the darkness of the Toyokawa family is still too ultra-modern.

Setting it in Akita is actually not a good option, because Akita did not really give birth to a conservative kingdom. For example, from 2003 to 2009, Akita District 1 was controlled by the Terada family, a democratic family (Terada Gakushu is now Akita's ginseng). Akita District 2 is the result of repeated battles between Noroda's successor Kaneda and the opposition parties. It is not a kingdom that can be called a kingdom. In Akita District 3, the Muraoka family and the Onokawa family fought. In 2009 and even this year, the Muraoka family had the last laugh.

Can't we mention the output of the novel "Ms. A Dream from the Palace"? Don't you write about what we eat?

So, the young eagle is just such a eunuch?

This subject matter is not good. It is too weird to mix a 3D two-dimensional character into the novel. I would call it a fan, but it is not a fan at all. So I borrowed a setting and called it original, and mixed it with a character that feels inexplicable even if I don't understand the hen card. Neither side was very satisfied.

I can already predict the intensity of women pulling their hair in the future.

Good points: The beginning is quite original, the painting style is eye-catching, and the writing style is good... Bad points: There is a bit too much inner drama, and the character of the protagonist feels like the protagonist from a few years ago. Can such a protagonist retain people? There is also the description of the heroine at the beginning. Although it is written that she is an ordinary girl except for her identity, it feels full of flaws and looks weird...

I have always been my senior's Shura chef, and the subject matter of this book is so suitable for the twisted relationships between the characters. I must keep writing it! Now that you are gone, what shall we eat? 😢

Is the protagonist a native of Xiaoli or a Chinese who traveled through time? In the early days, the natives could not be brought in.

I think the author writes a lot of historical articles, but he still writes urban articles in this way. I have read a lot of mygo fanfics, but none of them is like the author who writes mygo articles that emphasize character creation and daily interaction into a running account. It's so boring. Even if the author says he wrote it out of interest, wouldn't the author himself find it weird?

Want to see a little cat...

I don't know where the main plot has gone. The background of the congressman's son's origin in Japan has been completely reduced to a roadside. Everything is just to pave the way for the protagonist to create an environment for love. But in terms of fan fiction, the original work has been smashed into particles, and all the characters have just been skinned. It is difficult to balance the roles of each character, not to mention that there are a lot of people waiting in line to appear. I have the impression that the author initially just wanted to put a shell on the main plot so that he could fall in love with the girl in the band? But now the plot has only the main character revolving around the girl, the main line has been diluted too much, and what was originally a shell has become the new main content. Now there is a feeling of dissatisfaction on both sides. Traditional audiences who want to see the starting point of the protagonist's career development have nothing to watch. Readers who like mygo fandoms find it difficult to feel the two-dimensional flavor and lack of sense of substitution. It is really difficult to stick to it.

Is the author really not thinking about changing the title of the book? The writing is very good and the writing style is very popular among Japanese novels. But the title is too shocking and I feel that it will easily dissuade many passers-by. When I read this novel and saw the title, I wanted to quit, but I saw that the author had previously written about France, so I was attracted to it.

To be honest, it's not at the same level as the previous books. It feels like I'm trying out a new subject matter. It's written like a novice. There are a lot of poisonous points but it's not very serious. If you read it carefully, it may be a bit uncomfortable, but if you don't think about it, you can read it. I feel that if the author is really not very good at writing on this subject, he can consider writing under another title instead of ruining his reputation.

What my senior is best at is writing about sisters' Shura field. At best, those worldviews are just that my senior likes them and uses them as backgrounds. Think of the French Revolution, the Toyokawa family, etc., Which only provide a big framework. Why ignore the main dish of sadomasochism in the Shura Field and nitpick the corners of the background board (although it is indeed a bit intellectually depressing when dealing with Xiangzi's family conflicts at the beginning, and it is a bit incapable of substitution...) To this day, I still remember the flower and sword scum in Xia Fran's reaction when the engagement was announced at the masked ball was so delicious 😍😍 So senior sister, can you fast forward to the foreshadowing of the appearance of the other members of mygo? I have been hungry for a long time 😭

Where is the new group of seniors? The group went crazy last night when I saw it

The plot and character descriptions are perfect, but the plot needs to be a little more "deep", just a little more ruthless, which would be perfect.

I watched Flower and Sword ten years ago, in 2016, during my sophomore year in high school. At that time, Foil was probably not finished yet. I have been working as a social worker for almost three years now. . The Young Eagle's book was automatically subscribed to "Falling in Love with Agnes", but the comment section hasn't finished yet. There shouldn't be any historical main line here, so we can build the Shura Field in a beautiful way. So can this be finished until the end of high school in the harem and marriage?