Returning from the Low-Demon World, Starting with Artificial Intelligence

How to say it? It seems to be quite smooth, the rhythm and content of the story are good The protagonist's pretense is also very smooth and not awkward The description of the supporting characters is also no problem, and there will be no sudden intellect Everything seems to be so smooth and smooth I suddenly don't feel like continuing to pursue it In other words, I am tired of reading this kind of writing at this stage I have read one hundred and two chapters so far That's it

The South Korea chaebol is really not a god. The South Korea government has inherited most of the organizational structure of the military government, and its administrative power is unique among major capitalist countries (this is why it is only served for one term and is often liquidated). The country's policy towards Japan and South Korea does not allow one family to become dominant. As long as it does not harm the country's core interests, it will not interfere in its internal struggles. Therefore, Therefore, the government, chaebols, and prosecutors are multi-polar, and the big beauty has remote supervision from the outside. Of course, the chaebols have one hand over ordinary people, but they also need to make roundabout alliances to compete with real politicians. In South Korea, it is really not to the point where no one is afraid of except the big beauty. After all, the big beauty is not the dog of the South Korea chaebol. Everything will end up protecting you. You have to resolve your internal conflicts yourself.

The "Plane War" chapter is the climax of the recent period. I hope the author can grasp the rhythm well. I have been reading books about ethics for ten years, and I can feel the progress of ethics. Especially in this book, the IQ of the supporting characters has improved, and the plot foreshadowing and description of conflicts have improved. Unlike before, the role of the main plot is just to connect famous scenes that are "reproduced". And it clearly draws on the experience of the previous book (Evil God). In the previous book, after the protagonist became the "evil god", it was indeed a pleasure to be invincible, but the contradictions were no longer obvious, and the pleasure was also numb. If the protagonist can deal with all threats head-on, the rest of the plot can only be pushed forward with a bland narrative. This problem has been solved in this book. After the protagonist is relatively invincible, the plot is promoted from the side description and the perspective of the supporting characters, and then the protagonist is interspersed as the main line of contradictions (the threat of the four gods of the abyss). The main line of clear contradictions is highlighted, and at the same time, the protagonist has a sense of peace of mind that he is invincible. The method is similar to the original version of One Punch Man. Of course, there are still many and obvious shortcomings in moral integrity, which are mainly reflected in the techniques. Narrative techniques, detailed descriptions, storyboards, supporting characters updated too quickly, etc. The supporting characters in the book of integrity are consumed very quickly. The advantage of this is that there are constantly new supporting characters to advance the plot without the collapse of combat power and plot. The disadvantage is that some supporting characters have been "finished" directly after they have successfully gained the readers' love, which makes the readers feel a bit uncomfortable. I feel that in this regard, we can refer to the method of supporting supporting characters in "Dragon Ball". The supporting characters are gradually graded in strength. There are Vegeta who keep up with the protagonist, and Tianjin fans who are left behind. The less popular ones gradually fade out but have occasional roles. In addition, the subsequent plot advancement of characters with prototypes in life requires the author to think from the perspective of the character. Only when he can create a reasonable subsequent reaction and plot for the character can he understand the character thoroughly. If you just immerse yourself in writing, your progress will be very slow. I hope that no matter how busy you are, you can study the techniques of other excellent authors, observe all kinds of people in reality, ponder the thoughts of the characters, and summarize your own strengths and weaknesses to continue to improve. Good techniques can add a lot of color to the work. Jie Cao's imagination and creativity are very good. I hope Jie Cao's level will continue to improve, and I wish Jie Cao's works will get better and better.

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In terms of business war, I recommend the author to read Peak of the Great Era, which is full of useful information.

There are too many pitfalls, including music, mathematics, games, business wars, bloody dramas, school show-offs, and many things that are messed up without any beginning or end. The plot basically does not progress, and it feels lonely to watch every day. In summary, the logic is good, the writing is good, but I am not in the mood to read, so I am ready to reduce inventory.

It feels more and more boring, and it starts to become routine. The protagonist researches new things, releases new things, suppresses attacks from foreign trolls, and the protagonist fights back. Then there are several plots where the protagonist goes to various places to show off. The protagonist waits for the other party to cause trouble and then fights back. He has basically never taken the initiative to fight the other party, so he can grab the other party's market and expose the base. It has been a long time since the legendary mage. It's time to change the map. The aura has been revived. It's dignified. A legendary mage and a beautiful country capital are playing with you punching each other. No one can hurt the other's fundamentals. I can write thousands of words at the current rate. The pitfalls opened by the protagonist include mathematics, movies, games, artificial intelligence, biopharmaceuticals, mercenaries, etc. Catching ghosts and exorcising evil spirits, chip lenses, just these pitfalls according to the template above - suppression - counterattack - public opinion victory, I don't know how long it will take to write about it, let alone the new pitfalls that will be opened in the future. Is the protagonist planning to play with the capitalist families in the beautiful country until all the avenues are wiped out?

It feels weird. The ideal and character of the protagonist is a person who pursues knowledge and truth, but the author's protagonist is obsessed with business activities.

The biggest problem with this book is that the confrontation always involves passive counterattacks, but it does not convey the feeling of strategizing. I recently read a similar urban black technology novel "Sapiens", and the confrontation was obviously much more exciting. Basically, they took the initiative to cause trouble. Unlike the climax of this book, which is always a bit lacking, the frustration of the Americans is not seen until the point is made, and the frustration of the readers is particularly obvious.

After reading dozens of pictures, I was still scratching my head for a long time before I started the main story. It was just a hammer here and a stick here and there, and I had no desire to continue reading The master of catching ghosts and slapping people in the face, rescuing people on the plane, and reversing things on the Internet. You can be considered a literary renaissance here.

When I first read 300,000 words, I was still wondering what kind of explosive speed this is.

30 Words, what do you want me to read? Looking lonely?

Ahem, although I am active in the comment section of Infinite Prophet and have always said that Infinite Prophet's combat power is inconsistent and the system is chaotic, I have never said that it is not good to watch. The Evil God does not have the feeling of Infinite Prophet at all, it is a bit too artificial. Even if it is opened later, it does not have the feeling of Xu Yue. Infinite Prophet is better. The God of Guns accepts all comers. Although I want to complain about this, it is really good-looking.

I took a look at it, but the introduction was not very attractive.

The value of Bitcoin does depend on capital, but capital is not a fool. It takes only a short time to play drums and pass flowers, and bubbles will always explode. Bitcoin is mainly a channel for them to launder money and black transactions, and it can also evade taxes. Many dp transactions are tested in Bitcoin.

This kind of novel about a parallel world glued to technology has one biggest poisonous point: you have to give back to China, but it's difficult to grasp the degree. Practical factors determine that we have to face a lot of obstacles, which is very difficult to deal with. Feedback will have to give way to benefits, which will create a lot of trouble out of thin air, and the country will be led to the rhythm, using dirty tricks and messing with people's mentality. This kind of behavior purely based on conscience is difficult to last, but it has to be like this in the novel. When I think about it, it feels very "realistic" and "humane".

Two sentences worth 6,000 words, awesome and professional

Author, it's okay to update slowly. Don't be irritated. Especially for a lot of netizens' unintelligent remarks and comments, you can have them, but not so many. I waited a long time to save a few chapters and opened them with great anticipation. As a result, there are such unintelligent remarks in every chapter. There are still many in each chapter. This feeling is too uncomfortable.

It is true that there is a lot of nonsense, and it would be a bit timid to develop domestically, so why not just go abroad to develop? Everything is not connected. It is recommended that the author listens to it after writing it, instead of reading it once, he will know the problem...

Let's put it this way, it's a full book. It's a bit boring now, because for all the achievements, for each achievement, the author has to spend 4-6 chapters describing the emergence, development, the amazement of the world, and high-level cooperation. It was indeed a bit interesting at first, but as the plot progressed, a large number of repetitive plot chapters appeared, which made it difficult to watch anymore and I skipped reading without wanting to read it. . . I have to write these things in the early stage of the plot. The problem is that I already know what I want to write about later on, scientific research, super powers, and later promotion. Everything is within expectations. I can't write an unexpected plot. This is not a youth love science, so I gave up.

The writing is too confusing. It's about math, music, games, ghost removal, and crime solving. It covers countless fields in just a few dozen chapters, and it's a bit baffling to read.

The protagonist is quite open-minded, but it feels like a bit of an urban drama, a bit petty and doesn't have the overall sense of the Homo sapiens next door.

I've just read the free chapters now, and I feel that the protagonist is very fragmented. He wants to explore the truth of the world while also getting involved in the entertainment industry, which is very bad.

I will read it again in 2026. I really can't stand it anymore. The author describes the United States so well. Considering the newly disclosed information about the Epstein case in reality, the American capitalists in this book are simply saints...

It is a novel full of main themes and zzzq In the real world, I have been scarred by overdue mortgages, peer infighting, etc., And I have to take political classes while lying in bed at night, right? I feel that the author's writing style has been changing from the universal swordsman to the evil god, the prophet, and then to this low devil. He was attracted by the evil god and the prophet. As a result, I was disappointed after reading the early works and recent works.

The author likes slap-in-the-face plots 🙂

In order to promote mages, this novel has greatly weakened the gods, the poison of faith and various weaknesses. During the Seven Realms War, the gods did not do anything. They just watched. Why are the gods so busy! Of course, this is the author's plot setting, and as a reader, you can't follow the author's setting. In my opinion, the gods coexist with the Tao, coexist with the Tao, are the masters of laws, and the masters of rules.

Suddenly I remembered that the initial pitfalls of the golden finger were not filled.

Understand?

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