Mortal Begins as an Undercover Agent

Another official document! It's not that you have to have many women. But you have to know, whether it is a novel or a movie. A story without emotional investment is very boring. Just keep practicing and upgrading, which is boring. So when I saw it on the shelves, I felt it was boring. Apart from the fact that it was a bit fresh at the beginning, it was very boring later and there was no need to read it. Although many people shout that there is no heroine, there is no heroine! That's just a result of being poisoned by many people who don't know how to write emotional scenes and forcefully sensationalize them (this is also a common problem in domestic TV stores). I just want to say that chivalry, tenderness, iron-bloodedness and a loyal heart will never go out of style.

The evaluation is expected to become my mortal fanfic that looks as good as the mortal who cultivates immortality scientifically and the mortal who cheats and cultivates immortality.

If you don't update properly, it will be difficult for me to support you, author.

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Can you sort out the order of chapters? It's messy and looks very uncomfortable. I have no desire to read it.

The number of updates has dropped rapidly recently.

I was entangled too much with Han Yunzhi. My brother shouted all day long, don't fall in love with a mortal. Later, Ye Hongyu came. Can there be less of this kind of plot? This is a world of immortal cultivation where the head may fall off at the next moment. Han Li can survive because every time he runs the fastest, he is still a lone ranger. Don't create a plot where the heroine is in danger and the hero appears to save the beauty. It's so disgusting!

Let's put it this way, later on the protagonist turned into a god, put a magic weapon in the storage bag, and then the magic energy leaked out, making himself full of evil energy. What's even more ridiculous is that the protagonist didn't know it yet. As a result, when passing through the Tianlan Grassland later, he was discovered by the Tianlan people hundreds of miles away. He was almost beaten to death by the secret skills of several late-stage Nascent Souls from Tianlan several hundred miles away. The most outrageous thing was that the protagonist still didn't know how he was discovered. Then he was rescued by the woman in the Qi refining stage who rescued Han Li in the original work. She even licked her face and told people that she was the Lord of the Sea of ​​Chaotic Stars, the number one person in Tiannan, and the legendary cultivator of god transformation. It was so hilarious that I was ashamed of him.

Come on, there are really not many mortals who can watch it.

I have reached the perfection of the golden elixir, but I am still bleeding heavily. I invite the first-level female cultivator of the golden elixir to come and kill my baby together. You will laugh to death. This is such a clueless protagonist, such a stupid person, and such a brainless plot.

This demon refining pot makes it easy for demon beasts to evolve and become intelligent, which is very troublesome.

It can be seen in the early stage, after joining Spirit Beast Mountain, it is a bit unclear what the priority is. You are seeking immortality, not building power, and you interfered with Old Demon Han, but you did not interfere to the point. The demon refining pot given by Golden Finger was also used in an unclear way. If you don't dig deep into your own advantages, it will be awkward to read here and there. Women can't write, so don't write. It's really embarrassing. The higher the poison resistance, the more you can read.

I'm speechless. The first part is OK, but the second part is completely unreadable. There is a small island in the outer star sea where monsters hunt monsters. There are more than 100 golden elixirs on it. The whole country of Yue combined does not have as many golden elixirs as your island.

There are many original advantages, but there are too many original disadvantages.

It took more than one hundred chapters and hundreds of thousands of words to arrive at Chaotic Star Sea, and there were many original works, which caused Flood of Gold to deviate from the main line. Whether subjectively or objectively, the chances of entering the palace were greatly increased.

What is it about? There is no main plot, no plan, no skills, just a demon refining furnace. If you don't follow the line of controlling beasts, I really don't know what your positioning is as a protagonist. The first 120 chapters have only reached the stage of forming a core. The next hundred chapters will lead to Nascent Soul. What are you writing about?

It's a bit awkward, and there are too many private goods, and sometimes I don't even know what I'm talking about.

The author has some ideas, but the writing is difficult to describe in one sentence, the words do not convey the meaning, and the content is confusing. If you don't read carefully, you can just leave it at that.

The writing is okay. It would be best if there is no heroine. Even if there is one, it is not the one in the original work.

The author made the protagonist's monastic life even more difficult than that of Han Li in the original work.

The timelines don't even match up! Author! Ling Yuling is probably not as old as Yuan Yao! Ling Yuling, whom Han Li met when he came out of Xutian Palace, was building a foundation! Xutian Temple reached the peak of its golden elixir before Ling Yuling was opened. Ling Yuling was the son of the two saints of Tianxing in his later years. Later, when the longevity of the two saints was approaching, they directly used the method of passing on skills to help Ling Yuling conceive a baby.

The writing in Bloody Forbidden Land is a bit too baffling. The protagonist is in a period of refining his energy, and a bunch of powerful women appear inexplicably.

I hope you won't be like the fool Spirit Beast Mountain next door, doing Zhenfandian, ZZ organization

I think Mortal Immortality is good to read, and I can also cultivate immortality scientifically in Mortal Science. However, I can't stand it in the early stages of this book. It's okay to jump directly to Chapter 126 and start with the Chaos Star Sea chapter.

I always thought it was a magical book. When I updated it to Chaos Star Sea, I read it twice and voted for it a lot. Then I returned to Tiannan and read it from the beginning again, and then read it again. The more I read it, the more disappointed I feel! The author has a lot of private stuff, and the functions of magic weapons and exercises basically overlap, and it doesn't feel satisfying. Many things written are unclear and vague. The more I read, the less I want to read it!

There are too many originals, and it's boring to read. If original characters didn't appear from time to time, I would have thought I was reading another novel. It feels like 70% of the whole book is original. There are more original characters than original characters. Yuan Yao and Wang Ning are completely gone. There are two more Zi Ning and Yuan Li. It's so speechless.

The setting is pretty good, but the content is too poor. I guess the author may have read the original work many years ago, but didn't read it again before writing the book. He probably forgot a lot of the content, so the content is a bit messy.

Will Zi Ling, the most beautiful woman in the Chaotic Star Sea, appear again?

Let me make a small suggestion. You can actually write some content about the development of your own territory. After all, the new system brought by the protagonist is definitely better than other mortal territories. Therefore, in terms of human resources, it will definitely be easier to produce high-level monks than other forces. Moreover, if the development of Luan Xinghai is compared with that of the previous Xingong, it can also show that the protagonist is different from the neutral faction of Xinggong in the past. At least his life will be better than that of the previous Luanxinghai. At least this kind of thing must have merit. However, merit seems to be of little use in the mortal world. I just make a suggestion and hope it won't disturb your outline 😌

This book doesn't look exciting at all. The author's quality is still too low.