My Phone May Have Traveled Through Time

I have read more than 20 chapters, and I don't know why. The more I read, the less enthusiastic I am. The protagonist is written as if someone is urging him to run forward with a whip. He has limited energy and can't make enough money. It feels fake and empty.

It's two and a half million words long, and there's no female protagonist. It's all female supporting characters. They probably only care about making money and don't even bother to touch women.

The mobile phone traveled through time, and then there was no fingerprint to unlock it and it could not be turned on. Global GG🤭🤭

Well, I will post a book review seriously, so please work hard and try to put it on the shelves as soon as possible.

The IQ of the protagonist and supporting characters is online. While pursuing rationality, it is also very enjoyable. Not much to say, full subscription + monthly pass support.

There is too much nonsense and it only takes a few chapters to start applying it. It is difficult to correct the problem of too much water.

The sound of firecrackers marks the end of the year, and the spring breeze brings warmth to Tusu. Zi Bing is here to wish everyone a Happy New Year! I wish all my friends a successful career and new heights! I wish all coders to get out of singles as soon as possible and work less overtime! I wish all medical friends never forget their original aspirations and good luck! I wish all military comrades to keep their mission in mind and return home early! I wish all my friends a happy and prosperous New Year!

To be honest, the author's cover seems a bit discouraging at first glance. As an old bookworm who has been around Qidian for four or five years, I have read too many rebirth articles and am tired of the routines. It's probably all about traveling back in time with some unknown cheats to subdue a bunch of big guys, which is not realistic at all. The author's mobile time travel setting really made my eyes shine. I have read dozens of chapters. It is non-toxic and can be consumed with confidence. 😁

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Sir author, you have a very serious shortcoming. That means the paragraph is too long. Especially in the early stage, I saw that there were no paragraphs on the page at all (my expression was like this 🤪), and I almost stopped reading 🤔. Because the paragraph is too long, the reading progress is very slow. I have only read Chapter 10 now.                                                                                                                                                               , jumped, turned over your back, and found that you did get better in the back. But some paragraphs are still very long. I would like to give you some suggestions. In the future, each paragraph should not exceed 50 words. Then if the first twenty or thirty chapters can be changed, I will try my best to change them. This kind of big opening paragraph has a great impact on the performance of a book. For most readers, it's a long paragraph. They will all find it annoying. Then it was turned off. You should just take my opinion as a model essay.

I heard that your book has a lot of loopholes. It was first published in 2003. I think you made a mistake. In 2003, households with ten thousand yuan were all wealthy people. Why would you pay 100 yuan for a photoshopped photo with Andy Lau? , I specifically asked my mother about her monthly salary in 2003, which was only 300 yuan. She worked in a factory, and many were in offices or had positions. I didn't think it would be higher than 800 yuan. Who would spend such expensive money, and later directly have tens of millions to buy that advertising company? It was so easy to make money before? ? ? You can make tens of millions of dollars just selling lobsters, and a pot of lobsters costs 100 yuan? Now a pot of lobster costs 100 yuan. In 2003, 100 yuan was enough for our family to spend half a month? Go and ask your adults,

After reading a little bit, let me share my thoughts. First, the emotions are childish. Every woman I meet is beautiful, even though they are all interested in the protagonist, a little bit poisonous. Second, it is inexplicably pretending to be sophisticated. The IQ is online in business battles and handling things, but the dialogue and fragments make people feel a bit confused. It can be narrated well, so why show off skills? I was quite straightforward at first, but after the show, I felt nondescript and a little bit poisonous. Third, there are only two ways to deal with the government in a novel, a commercial one. 1. Try to downplay the frequency of the government appearing in the novel so that it will be easy to finish later. 2. Even if you really want to get involved in the enterprise, you should try to downplay the government. Although the weapon of the country requires government supervision, it is a novel after all. It can be dealt with in one sentence, which is a bit poisonous. Fourth, I personally feel that I am very poisonous. Can I not regard myself as a saint? You think you can purify the air, purify the industry, and purify all kinds of things that you think are unreasonable. But look at what you have done. You can't even be loyal to your girlfriend. What qualifications do you have to change others? Either you are a scumbag to the end, tough in business, cunning and cruel, you have several lovers in life, but you are clear about money coming and going. Or just be honest and have a clear conscience in work and life. But now you want to steal food, and you can't stand others doing bad things, so you've gone a bit too far 🙂.

What does the author think? Facebook was launched in 2004, and by 2008, the whole world had joined in, except for the United States. I watched the development of Xiao Zha, and the global Internet did not even raise funds once, and did not give options to my subordinates. Do I really think that I am a bastard? You also dedicated Facebook to the country. How do you develop it around the world? When writing about technology, just write about technology. There is water here and there, and there are smartphones. I got up early and rushed to the late market. It's so selfless. It's so damn addictive that I can't take it with me. I can't stand it even after watching it. It's okay with the great creativity and layout.

I saw it on the book list! The cover is very popular! Come on!

It's so fucking poisonous to escape with money and money there. I was so poisonous that I almost died. Brother, you always say that reality reflects reality. You have to know that you are writing a novel. These are all stories you imagined. Can't you write it more smoothly and make it more enjoyable for readers? Do you have to fight against us? Do we have to hold our breath to watch? I think many readers are like me. They were so poisonous that they lost interest in reading. Goodbye! Abandon the book! Maybe you won't mind that I left alone, but there are many people who may have left without posting like me, so you can take care of yourself for the next novel! Nowadays, life is full of pressure, why read novels? Just to have fun and release the stress in life! After being abused in real life, who would be happy to read a novel if it doesn't feel good? Pull you down!

Ever since I saw the protagonist covering up the shares in his hands, I couldn't stand it anymore. The thinking of a small citizen

How many books has the protagonist read and how many companies have he founded? I got rich in two months. There is no accumulation, no learning, no entrepreneurial team, a high school student has no rebirth, and the amount of knowledge is not enough. It would be more reasonable if you wrote about an adult. I have no idea about writing a high school student just to go to college, a good college plot? And haha, I want to do everything, and I don't have to be rich just to do it. I want to do this, and I want to do that, you know?

How should I say that the author is Black Li? If Li had not retreated from the road a few years ago, there would be people like the author Black Lee. I can only say that such people are very brave and dare to speak. But now, in this situation, Hei Li, the yes man of power, whether he speaks up or down depends on the needs of his masters. If you are interested, you can take a look at the changes in the role of Li in the Rebirth Business article a few years ago and the current article. It all depends on the needs of the masters.

Returning an online novel to him, damn it, dragging a young man, must he be sick?

Have you ever seen a woman go singing to get a health care service? Any normal man with some ability likes gentle girls. Only poor guys who are used to kneeling and licking love such little witches.

I read a few more pictures to figure out the problem with this book. In the final analysis, the author's positioning is not accurate. At the beginning, I write about the protagonist getting a mobile phone from the future, and then I study it carefully, look for opportunities bit by bit, and slowly reason and analyze, giving people a sense that the protagonist is very rational. I like this content very much, and it is more suitable for the taste of Laobai readers. Then the simple and crude placement of beautiful women's characters began. Various strange beauties that are extremely rare in reality appeared here at once, which was more blunt than the big star of Shui Yu. The problem is that Shuiyu's Big Star is a standard short story, aimed at readers who don't want to use their brains. Therefore, the golden finger that Shuiyu gives to the protagonist is also a simple and crude system, and the plot is also a simple and crude continuous slap in the face. The overall emphasis is on directness, allowing readers to quickly enjoy themselves without using their brains. The positioning of this book is not accurate, because in terms of career (Goldfinger), the protagonist uses his brain and the reader uses his brain, but in terms of love (Beauty), it is much simpler and cruder. Or, modify the plot of the beauty to make the book more palatable to old white readers. Or, change the golden finger to be more oriented towards novice readers. This is the biggest problem with this book. However, this book has written so much that it is unrealistic to revise it. I hope the author can learn from the lesson in the next book. As for me, I can only choose to skip all the plots of female characters. After all, I still like this golden finger very much.

Congratulations to Milk Tea and Goudong for finally getting together, spreading flowers to celebrate, please be more refined

The previous article has been very good, but when it comes to collecting lobsters, it is a big failure. What is your background? You can make millions a day from just one crayfish. You can collect it for one yuan and sell it for ten yuan, making a 900% profit.

The scene where Wang Jie died grossed me out. It was super sudden and gave a lot of foreshadowing. He died inexplicably, committed suicide inexplicably, seemed to be deceived inexplicably, and also had a literary youth episode inexplicably. I was disgusted by this batch of readings. I have always complained about an author and you are the first one. I am convinced. I would rather you just dump out a chapter. This sudden attack on me is too disgusting. Without further ado, just one sentence that the author is awesome about! ! Farewell🙏🙏

The main character's family fortune belongs to the one who wears shoes. I feel that the most important thing for the main character offline is to build a golden body. Giving suggestions: Learn from Jack Ma, give speeches everywhere to be exposed, become a public figure yourself, and increase your influence. Two Educational charity, I read a novel some time ago. The method of building a golden body is very interesting. He developed an educational software that allows college students to fill up high school students by accepting orders, and collects handling fees to support high school students who cannot afford to go to college, using Alipay as a guarantee. Those who benefit are college students and high school students, while those whose interests are violated are teachers and extracurricular training institutions. Three Finding a second-generation official girlfriend is a bit cliche. Four Introducing foreign capital complicates the shares. For example, start an independent project again, such as bicycle sharing, taxi hailing, and other public welfare projects. Five As long as you have 200,000 employees in industry, the president of the country will give you a little favor. Six Win by surprise. For example, if you find the He family's jade seal and then give it to the country as a gift at the right time, then almost no one will think twice about you. Seven Fight fire with fire and make a friend with a heavyweight rich second generation~ It's a cliche. Eight Join a chamber of commerce, such as China's First Taishan Association, Jack Ma's later Jiangnan Association, Li Ka-shing's Alumni Association, etc. I won't mention a few more. This is actually very important. Either make one yourself, or you must add one~ ……

It's really good, the writing is good, and the subject matter is new. The most important thing is that the character has sufficient IQ, has a golden finger but no magic method to reduce intelligence, and has a five-star rating.

Can 1 monthly pass be recharged?

I've read dozens of chapters and can't stand it anymore. What are you writing? It's scattered, there's a lot of verbosity, there's no main line, as long as the opposite sex appears, they're all stunning beauties, there are too many to mention, it's hard to describe in one sentence, the author really feels like he hasn't seen a woman in his life, there has to be a certain level of obscenity.

It's a pity that the protagonist is too young, otherwise the new generation of masters would be you, the mediocre Master Wu.

The core of this book is licking and nonsense. Has the author checked the information?