Immortal Road of Immortality

After reading a lot of rankings from top to bottom, I accidentally found this book. It has several major features: 1. The male protagonist is decisive in killing, not the disgusting stallion who is soft-hearted when he sees a woman. Moreover, in this article, the best thing for the protagonist is not all kinds of women, but all kinds of old men, haha. 2. It's very humorous, and it's not the low-level humor of Dickinson. 3. There are no poisonous points, and the author is very good at filling in the holes. 4. It is not easy to read these four words. Recommended!

The writing style and writing rhythm are very good and quite humorous, but after more than 100 chapters were put on the shelf, something started to feel a little off after a few chapters. Goldfinger did not show its effect, and the plot immediately became loose. Success is humorous, failure is also humorous. In the early stage, I saw the occasional knowing smile, but on the one hand, the author wanted to write about the undercurrent of cultivating immortals and intrigues. On the other hand, he also wrote the protagonist with a playful smile, which deconstructed the seriousness, as if this was not a world of cultivating immortals but a game, giving people a sense of drama. The author also talked about some Mortal-style works. In fact, if it were written as a more serious Mortal-style work, with the author's writing skills, it would at least be on the level of "One Hundred Refiners to Become an Immortal". It's a pity that this book feels like a "tasteless" book. It's becoming more and more tasteless and it's a pity to discard it.

If you can get Tao Yun by touching items, why do you need to spend spiritual stones to buy items?

The writing is good, it has the feeling of reading the biographies of mortals cultivating immortals back then, but it also has its own characteristics. The protagonist has made painstaking preparations, and the supporting character's IQ is online. Some of the supporting characters are impressive. A little funny, but overall just right, not too much. Goldfinger is still relatively restrained, I hope to maintain it and not collapse. The current upgrade speed is about right, don't go too fast. Currently, it seems that it can be ranked in the top three among the novels about cultivating immortals that I have read. Better than most well-known works.

You are a trumpet, author, your writing style is so stable

The writing is indeed good, there is something about it. But, but, people who read the book are very depressed!

The writing is very good. The author will update soon. I don't have any novels to fish at work.

One thing to say, the first part of this book is still very good. Although there are a lot of bad points and pitfalls, the flaws do not hide the good points, and it is still quite enjoyable to read. In the middle period, it was just a mess. The more you wrote, the more you wrote. The relationship between the various characters was all messed up. I wrote whatever I thought of. The various behaviors of the protagonist were meaningless. It seemed that there was no outline at all. Dozens of chapters may not be able to push forward the main line. If there are no interesting points, they are just mine points. Similarly, the image of the supporting characters is also broken. The characters are the carrier of the story. This book is not a road novel. Wherever the protagonist goes, a group of supporting characters will be replaced. What is the difference between other people and NPCs 🙂

What is written in 241? Is it a tongue twister? Can't bear more than two hundred?

A very good book. I don't know why so few people read it. Good luck to the author.

Good-looking, no-brainer, ten years of novels

What I don't understand the most is that there are no sects in the current immortality novels, but they all insist on being loose immortals. I'm really speechless and I'm tired of reading them.

Fenglinggen starts, this book is awesome! Currently, there are three basic types of protagonists in the world of cultivation: four spiritual roots, five spiritual roots, and no spiritual roots. Not to mention the Heavenly Spiritual Root and the Foreign Spiritual Root, I have never seen even a Second Spiritual Root.

The first 150 chapters have a lot of poisonous points. You can read it, but it doesn't matter if you don't. It's a tasteless novel with no highlights. I don't have a strong desire to read it. I should overdo it when I'm in a book shortage.

Most of the books are unreadable. The other protagonists have skills that can be used to determine attributes, but they take risks to seize opportunities. Only this one is an honest appraiser and has long-term income for others to see, but the leveling up is a bit faster later. After changing the map, the upgrade was too fast and a bit forced.

To be honest, this book was indeed a good book before I met Lin Fan in the palace, but it took a turn for the worse after that

It's not pleasant at all, it's annoying to watch. The protagonist improves so slowly even though he's failed, and the enemy is on the same level as the protagonist once he gets a chance.

Is Shui Bingyue the heroine? Otherwise, why would the protagonist always be the one who helps people raise pets?

If you feel that your cultivation level is rising too quickly and you won't be able to write about it later, you can write more about your daily life, as well as the details of what you usually do in a day. The word count for Shui Daily is here.

I understand where the poisonous point is, and everything is fine up to now. But when I get to Jindan, I have to procrastinate as much as I can. There are a lot of things to do, and there is no time for practice. I have to establish two sects inexplicably. The first sect has been established, but it has no use. It has not been found by the protagonist. What an ancient rhyme, all the resources were greedy by the skeletons, the protagonist worked hard outside to cultivate to the late stage of the golden elixir, and the skeletons directly greeded the late golden elixir in the sect. The second one was even more speechless, just help the chicken to build it once, but the chicken himself lost it due to his own greed, and the protagonist still insisted on it. I helped establish it again and spent a lot of time building this sect. Later I found out that I was cursed, but I didn't solve it. I ran around all day long and had people knocking on my door. The protagonist was better and started to practice spiritual body. Outside, relatives and friends worked hard to protect the Dharma. Obviously the protagonist only It can be solved as soon as you show up, but no, you have to practice it first and then talk about it. I'm convinced. It's obvious that you have a lot of connections, right? And there are endless bad jokes. Oops Finally, there are a lot of poisonous points, but it's also pretty good-looking. If I had to give it a star overall, I would still give it a five-star rating.

The pressure leveling was too heavy, which was better in the early stage. Now it feels like the protagonist is just a fw 😅

The early stage was pretty good, but in the middle and later stages I started to write as I thought. I personally have the following insights into the shortcomings: 1. The realm depreciates too quickly. The protagonist has worked hard to become a master of magical powers. When he comes out of the gate, any dog ​​he passes by outside is a master of magical powers. The clan brother and the chicken brother have mastered magical powers without much effort. Often, once the protagonist upgrades, the gold content of this realm is not enough, and they are everywhere, but some old monsters are always stuck in the Nascent Soul; 2. The later battles are too weak. There is too much suppression between realms. The same Nascent Soul stage should not be one move in seconds. It can be easier to fight in the later stage and the early stage, but it should not be one move in seconds like a small soldier. 3. The plot is too tight. It feels like you have been on the road to upgrade non-stop in the middle and late stages. After upgrading, you are rushing to upgrade again. You do not make good use of your advantages. This situation is less in the early stage and more and more in the later stage. 4. The protagonist panel is not systematic. The skills and spiritual body are of the wind type, and the method is of the thunder type. It is a whole galaxy if nothing happens, and the magical power is not gorgeous enough. A golden finger can give the magical power of an elephant trunk; 5. There are too many meaningless supporting characters. There are some well-known supporting characters appearing every now and then, but there is often no plot and picture matching. It feels like you just know this person and then disappear; 6. The overall plot is not easy to move, sometimes evil, sometimes demon, sometimes Black Lotus, sometimes Holy Land, all kinds of interspersed but the perception is too confusing; 7. Contact with the upper realm too early, the protagonist is still in Jindan Yuanying, which involves many immortals The plot of the world, where the Purple Chen Star was broken several times, has lowered the value of the fairy world. The protagonist is obviously far away from the fairy world, but in the Nascent Soul stage, it seems that the fairy world is just like this... In short, the personal essay gives some shortcomings, and it can barely be regarded as the goalkeeper of a good work. However, in this junk market, I hope the author can learn from the shortcomings, accumulate and conceive a better work.

First, the writing is really fucked up, with too much useless nonsense. Second, the hook is too big and there is no limit. As a result, the protagonist upgrades slowly, which makes the protagonist look very incompetent in comparison. . .

First of all, I almost missed it when I first read the title. My first reaction was that it was a boring template. Then, I hope that Yan Guo and Huangquanzong can write without routine. The Song Kingdom is a traditional template for cultivating immortality, while the Lu Kingdom is a more modern template, similar to applying for a job in a university. The Yan Kingdom currently only knows about the magic path and the Huangquan Sect, but has not introduced it in detail. I hope there will be interesting settings that are not so routine for cultivating immortality. When it comes to the magic sect, my first reaction is "The Man in the Way". Although I don't like it, the various magic sects in it are very interesting, such as the Chongming Sect set by dark capital, the No. 1 Demon sect with many happy mental patients, etc. The righteous setting is also okay, and the entire country is one camp of the Liuhu Dynasty. Then, there are the fields of Buddhism and Taoism, etc. I hope to write about that kind of religious atmosphere. Many writings about Buddhism actually feel like ordinary sects and practitioners. However, except for the different methods and sacrifice, compassion, destiny, fanaticism, etc. That are often written about, I feel that ancient Buddhist practitioners should have a more sense of fate and inhuman cruelty. Then, the plot of the three brothers in the Forbidden Mountains is very interesting. It has the feeling of three big villains, and then they deceive the Tiger King, analyze the plot of both sides' strategies, and trap Mr. Nong. I like the plot, but after that, Xiao Yizhou feels very ordinary. At the end, the weird big eyes at the beginning are so cute, and they even wink with the protagonist. When will they return to the factory!

The author is trying to be clever every moment. He barely tolerated it before building the foundation. After building the foundation, every sentence is mixed with gangster-style slang. It is not like a novel about cultivating immortals at all. He is always acting.

The main character is written in such a way that it feels useless. He is messed up and can't use it. He gets involved in random things and helps here and there. Can he just do one thing? Collect ancient charms and use gold fingers to the extreme. What kind of influence is useless? Another drawback is that when the protagonist upgrades, the enemies around him will also upgrade and they can't stand it anymore.

I was quite uninterested when I saw that the character Ka brothers are the sons of luck. The biggest poison in the novel is that the protagonist is a non-chief. Besides the protagonist, there are people who are the sons of luck. They have all kinds of luck, especially the protagonist's brothers or sisters. The protagonist consumes countless times of resources and is surpassed. In leapfrog battles, various boasted realms in the early stage make the protagonist a cabbage as soon as he reaches the realm. As soon as the protagonist rises to the realm, a group of talents will be refreshed. , The protagonist is born with sarcasm that makes everyone jealous and ridicules him when he sees it. The protagonist relies on the golden finger to break through, and the supporting characters who have been unknown for countless years have all strengthened simultaneously. The protagonist of the infinite thriller relies on the golden finger to survive all kinds of narrow escapes and strives to survive, and then after going out, there are countless dozens or hundreds of old players. Each of these old players activate the protagonist to be ten times more successful? Upgrading the protagonist is more difficult than constipation. It seems that the resources and opportunities are all fake.

The part about grabbing the Ten Thousand Years Spiritual Milk is really cliche. You can guess what the plot will be like from the appearance of the characters. That part is all about dancing

Lin Fan ruins the entire book. Without Lin Fan, this book would have done very well.

Withdrawn, the previous article was well written, I felt it, but after seeing the battle between good and evil, entering the Vanguard Pathfinder Team, the Expendables, withdrawn, the idea is to fight for the immortal road, but it is not such a struggle, there is always a lack of respect for power, I will always have a golden finger, I have the aura of the protagonist to protect me, I will not die, I will do whatever I want. I don't feel like I'm making progress step by step. It's just right that I can't become popular, and I don't look at the current market situation.