A Mortal's Path: Starting as an Undercover Agent

I was entangled too much with Han Yunzhi. My brother shouted all day long, don't fall in love with a mortal. Later, Ye Hongyu came. Can there be less of this kind of plot? This is a world of immortal cultivation where the head may fall off at the next moment. Han Li can survive because every time he runs the fastest, he is still a lone ranger. Don't create a plot where the heroine is in danger and the hero appears to save the beauty. It's so disgusting!

Let's put it this way, later on the protagonist turned into a god, put a magic weapon in the storage bag, and then the magic energy leaked out, making himself full of evil energy. What's even more ridiculous is that the protagonist didn't know it yet. As a result, when passing through the Tianlan Grassland later, he was discovered by the Tianlan people hundreds of miles away. He was almost beaten to death by the secret skills of several late-stage Nascent Souls from Tianlan several hundred miles away. The most outrageous thing was that the protagonist still didn't know how he was discovered. Then he was rescued by the woman in the Qi refining stage who rescued Han Li in the original work. She even licked her face and told people that she was the Lord of the Sea of ​​Chaotic Stars, the number one person in Tiannan, and the legendary cultivator of god transformation. It was so hilarious that I was ashamed of him.

Come on, there are really not many mortals who can watch it.

I have reached the perfection of the golden elixir, but I am still bleeding heavily. I invite the first-level female cultivator of the golden elixir to come and kill my baby together. You will laugh to death. This is such a clueless protagonist, such a stupid person, and such a brainless plot.

This demon refining pot makes it easy for demon beasts to evolve and become intelligent, which is very troublesome.

Another official document! It's not that you have to have many women. But you have to know, whether it is a novel or a movie. A story without emotional investment is very boring. Just keep practicing and upgrading, which is boring. So when I saw it on the shelves, I felt it was boring. Apart from the fact that it was a bit fresh at the beginning, it was very boring later and there was no need to read it. Although many people shout that there is no heroine, there is no heroine! That's just a result of being poisoned by many people who don't know how to write emotional scenes and forcefully sensationalize them (this is also a common problem in domestic TV stores). I just want to say that chivalry, tenderness, iron-bloodedness and a loyal heart will never go out of style.

It can be seen in the early stage, after joining Spirit Beast Mountain, it is a bit unclear what the priority is. You are seeking immortality, not building power, and you interfered with Old Demon Han, but you did not interfere to the point. The demon refining pot given by Golden Finger was also used in an unclear way. If you don't dig deep into your own advantages, it will be awkward to read here and there. Women can't write, so don't write. It's really embarrassing. The higher the poison resistance, the more you can read.

I'm speechless. The first part is OK, but the second part is completely unreadable. There is a small island in the outer star sea where monsters hunt monsters. There are more than 100 golden elixirs on it. The whole country of Yue combined does not have as many golden elixirs as your island.

There are many original advantages, but there are too many original disadvantages.

What is it about? There is no main plot, no plan, no skills, just a demon refining furnace. If you don't follow the line of controlling beasts, I really don't know what your positioning is as a protagonist. The first 120 chapters have only reached the stage of forming a core. The next hundred chapters will lead to Nascent Soul. What are you writing about?