A Mortal's Path: Starting as an Undercover Agent
凡人之从卧底开始
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- Ongoing
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- 2.5M Words
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- Xianxia
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- Cultivation Civilization
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- 2y ago
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He's been entangled with that Han Yunzhi for too long, calling her "brother" all the time. Stop this mortal romance! And then Ye Hongyu showed up too. Can we please cut down on this kind of plot? This is a cultivation world where your head might fall off at any moment. Han Li survived because he was always the fastest runner and a lone wolf. Stop creating plots where the female lead is in danger and the male lead always appears to save the damsel in distress. That's disgusting!
Let's put it this way: later, the protagonist reaches the Nascent Soul stage, puts a demonic artifact in his storage bag, and the demonic energy leaks out, making him incredibly powerful. What's even more ridiculous is that the protagonist doesn't even realize it.
Keep it up, there really aren't many decent fanfiction works about ordinary people.
He's already at the peak of the Golden Core stage, yet he still has to go to great lengths to hire a female cultivator at the first level of the Golden Core stage to help him kill his own pet? LOL! What a pathetic protagonist! What an idiot! What a brainless plot!
This Demon-Refining Pot is prone to causing demonic beasts to evolve and gain intelligence, which is quite troublesome.
Another official document! It's not about having a specific number of women. But you have to understand, whether it's a novel or a movie, a story without emotional investment is incredibly dull. Just endless cultivation and leveling up is really boring. So when I saw it was available, I lost interest. It was only interesting at first, but it got boring afterward and there was nothing to watch.
The early parts were watchable, but after joining the Spirit Beast Mountain, it became a bit unclear about priorities. You're seeking immortality, not building a power. Also, your interference with Old Demon Han wasn't well-placed, and your use of the Demon Refining Pot, your "golden finger," was unclear and haphazard.
Speechless. The beginning was okay, but the end was unreadable. It's a small island in the outer sea where you hunt monsters, and it has more than 100 Golden Core cultivators. The entire Yue Kingdom combined doesn't have as many Golden Core cultivators as your small island.
Many of the advantages are original, but too many of the disadvantages are also original.
What kind of writing is this? There's no main plot, no storyline, no cultivation techniques, just a demon-refining furnace. If you don't follow the beast-taming route, I honestly don't know what your intended role for the protagonist is. The first 120 chapters only show the Core Formation stage, and the next 100 chapters show the Nascent Soul stage. What kind of writing is this?