Immortal Maiden, Please Pay Me Back

There is absolutely no problem if the author wants to write a full and true emotional journey. If it does not satisfy your fairy tale-level pure love standards and fantasies, you can completely ignore it and read a novel that satisfies your desires. There is nothing wrong with pursuing real and rigorous character plots. There are always readers who love to see full and real emotional journeys. The criteria for judging novels are excellent plots, well-rounded characters, and interesting content, rather than pure love or not. Reading stories is for fun, not any novel where the male protagonist uses harsh standards to criticize and then breaks through the defense. It would be exciting if the male protagonist got together with Jiang and then his childhood sweetheart in the later stage. The male protagonist's pain and helplessness, the female protagonist's guilt, and Huang Mao's pride and rampantness, that would be really interesting.

It's very subtle, how to describe it, like mixing sesame paste, mayonnaise, Laoganma and thirteen spices.

I need clothes but I understand them, but I don't understand bags and cosmetics so much.

Seeing how miserable the author is, give me a vote

The style is unique and hilarious, and I have been following it for a while, so I will comment objectively: Advantages: The writing is good, the style is humorous, there are constant laughs throughout the whole process, and there are many hilarious little details, suitable for dinner. The male protagonist cheats on the sixth child, the female protagonist is playful and cute, and the supporting characters are designed to serve the purpose of laughter, which basically fulfills the author's claim that all the characters are fun. The various unexpected behaviors of the protagonist and supporting characters create a lot of contrasting humor. The description of the weird and huge immortal is more brilliant, making people think about it and full of expectations. Disadvantages: The plot does not have much new ideas, but the number of words is not many and remains to be seen

If you don't understand these honey generation, I support you.

The dramatic beginning, the magical "two-way redemption", I'm looking forward to it!

What kind of magical writing style do I want? Each character has a full personality

After some evaluation, I died once, and Xiaojing is not that good either.

Popular recommendation: A double-travel novel that uses bronze mirrors as a medium to assist the male and female protagonists in upgrading through system tasks. And through the differences and information asymmetry between the two worlds, misunderstandings and opportunities are set in the background of the big story to highlight the interest of the story and promote the development of the plot. The overall novel is very interesting. Although there are bugs in the plot, it does not hinder the author's innovation in the story. It is worth recommending. Work panel: [Author] Chang Ping Zhi Zui [Bookmark] System, time travel, multiple worlds [Rating]🌸🌸🌸🌸 Content review: I will test the novel, and review good books here. Hello everyone, I am Jiang Liuer, an ordinary book friend. Let's get back to the book. What I bring to you today is a 60,000-word new book that is on the new book list. First of all, the author was attracted by the introduction. This book tells the story of the male protagonist who accidentally traveled to a place called Blue Star. As a college student, he accidentally obtained a bronze mirror. After waiting for a long time, the female protagonist appeared. Through a little understanding of the information, the male and female protagonists began to make progress together. Secondly, it can be seen from the above plot that the male and female protagonists are in two worlds, each with difficulties and sufferings. But it uses events in each world to push forward the timeline of its world. And through the bronze mirror system, items are replaced to carry out so-called dimensionality reduction strikes. Although this plot is not new, the author has re-given meaning to this setting through the coordination of the two worlds. For example, at the beginning, the male protagonist uttered a few nonsense words from the Tao Te Ching, which greatly increased the female protagonist's strength, and she even realized a new way of cultivation. This seemingly funny but always useful treatment for both parties, from the perspective of plot treatment, is both reasonable and unexpected, and can easily satisfy both readers' senses. In terms of character portrayal, through the male protagonist's accidental collision, the image of a male protagonist who plays tricks and is at a loss in modern society is portrayed. And through the calm and decisive character of the female protagonist, it contrasts with the male protagonist to highlight the different worldviews and world systems. Although the supporting characters, except for the protagonist, all have the same single character traits. But for an extremely simple and refreshing novel, this book is very refreshing and perfectly does what the supporting characters should do. All the scenes between the supporting characters are appropriate. It does not feel that the supporting characters are too thin, nor does it feel that the protagonist is too self-centered. It can be seen from this that the author still has some writing skills, but not much. Finally, the author knows from the known content that the work is a simple and direct double-crossing novel, which promotes the progress of the novel by exchanging objects for objects. The performance in all aspects is not perfect, but it is still above the passing line. You can read the novel, but only if you are interested. You can read it. {"TopicId":"804728532092780544","TopicName":"Book Famine Terminator"}