Immortal Longevity: Starting by Caring for My Senior Brother's Wife and Daughter

I have done good deeds and accumulated good deeds throughout my life, so I should be allowed to read this book.

The problem is really big now. How many female supporting characters can you write in only 130,000 words? Writing about a harem is not expensive, writing about originality and writing about female supporting characters have to be done step by step... Sooner or later, you will collapse. If you just rely on adding female supporting characters to promote the plot, I can't imagine how much you will collapse when you reach 300,000 words. Even a platinum master can't control so many characters with so few words!

Do you have any similar book recommendations? Thanks!

If the male protagonist's level is not improved, Xiao Yun will become a golden elixir. Everything in the Xia family will be surnamed Xiao. Without force and wealth, it is just a piece of fish belly. The daughter's master can't protect the male protagonist, not to mention that he probably won't protect him. After watching it for a long time, I was wondering why Xiao Yun didn't slap the male protagonist to death, and then swallowed all his things. Even if she doesn't care about anything in the future, it will be enough for her to cultivate the golden elixir. Write more about the family's internal affairs. The appearance is very good, but if your realm doesn't have all these, it will look ridiculous and weak. Why not find a good rhythm, space out a period of time between each event point, and then the male protagonist can improve a little bit. Speaking of the latest, the level of the male protagonist must be at the level of the mid-stage foundation building, and then take it slowly. It has put the cart before the horse. Originally, you have to practice slowly one turn at a time. Do you have to practice thirty or fifty turns at a time? How will the family affairs be settled then? If the male protagonist is ignored for a long time and does not have absolute strength, he will definitely be ignored.

If you polish this topic a little more where it should be written, and then put it on a small website, it won't take off.

In the early stage of Jin Dan, he dared to offend so many Yuan Ying Jin Dan. Even Han Li, a lonely man, did not dare to be so crazy.

You made this genre popular, but you failed it yourself.

It is recommended to skip Chapter 163. The author did not know what he thought and suddenly gave the reader a shit. The protagonist and the villain were outwitted at the same time. The battle between immortal cultivators turned into a street gang fight. In short, this is a chapter with extremely poor logic, plot and writing. It makes people want to abandon the book.

Immortality begins with Cao Cao 😁

The level of cultivation has improved too slowly. Now they are all Nascent Soul level enemies. They may offend the Transformation God soon. You are still in the early stage of the Golden Core. You, the Nascent Soul Devourer, can't let yourself break through how awesome your little Golden Core is. It suppresses the protagonist too much. If you don't want the protagonist to improve too quickly, don't give the protagonist so many high-level enemies. You make the enemy so powerful and still suppress the protagonist.