Immortal Longevity: Starting by Caring for My Senior Brother's Wife and Daughter

The protagonist's character is a bit ex, taking care of his friend's wife, you just want to do it, do you still want to just enjoy it without taking responsibility? ? Fortunately, the woman was resourceful and gave birth to a baby for the male protagonist, otherwise she would have been abandoned. Then the more ex came, gave birth to a baby, and didn't give him a status. What could a fifth-level Qi practitioner do? ?

After reading more than ten chapters in the early stage, I couldn't bear it anymore. It's really too poisonous. It's been so long that I have forgotten the last time I went to the Su Book Review section to leave a negative review full of speechlessness. Anyway, what I'm thinking about right now is the bad reviews. The first dozen or so chapters are all about matters between men and women, and some trivial things are always here and there. People watching want to curse Can't you write more about the interaction with the world of immortality? You can only write about things between men and women, but you have to write in a grinding way. Your values ​​are also different from other authors. And it gives me a feeling that my logical and inductive abilities are insufficient. It's really a waste of my reading time😓😓😓

It's okay, the protagonist likes to get other people's wives and daughters, and torture other people's husbands and brothers to death. It's a typical old slut, but I like it haha

There is a problem with the setting of the novel. The protagonist goes to a mortal town without aura and is actually able to practice the Sacred Heart Art. Spiritual roots are used to sense spiritual energy. Without spiritual roots, it is impossible to sense spiritual energy. Sacred Heart Art can be practiced without spiritual energy, which shows that mortals without spiritual roots can also practice. As a result, the author either forgot this setting, or there is a problem with the setting.

The character of the protagonist is a bit inexplicable. He is immortal, but he doesn't have much ability to protect himself. He also likes to show off everywhere. He wants to build a family and have many heirs, but he has to be coy about this and not accept the other. He is still grinding when other women come to his door. When he has resources and conditions, he doesn't want to improve himself quickly. I don't know what to say all day long, and I can't stand it anymore.

Grassroots practice. Plain and simple. Do nothing

What kind of immortal cultivating family is this? Breeding family, right?

After reading the review, apart from the fact that I like to take in other people's wives and daughters, and all the female characters, plants, animals and monsters that appear in this book, it is quite good-looking and I can at least finish the book. The ending is too rushed and the outline is finished directly. I should be able to write a million words! !

Not bad

Human trash