Looking to the Sky

Platinum capital keeps me awake at night. Judging from the style of the text, it seems that he is a true newcomer, and I really admire him. When I saw the fantasy scene, I couldn't help but post a bragging discussion, it was too much for my taste. The author knows how to use gaps very well, and can create wonderful emotional relationships between characters in just a few chapters. Xu Yuan and Tian Yan, from their absolute opposition at the beginning, to their cooperation, to their subsidence of hostility, the relationship process in this period was very smooth, and the third paragraph was left blank, which in my opinion is a deliberate and wonderful operation, so I will not talk about it here. Merely describing the evolution of emotions is definitely not wonderful, but it is a process of accumulation of potential energy. The relationship that the two slowly accumulated faced the vicious mountain of forgetfulness. It struggled at the top for a moment, and then surged down. The male protagonist forgot the deep relationship between the two. Why do you say this is evil? Because only one party has forgotten this relationship, this forces Tian Yan into a double dilemma. The dilemma between righteousness and personal love, the dilemma between the helpless reality and the innocent girl's impulse. The coldness hidden behind the hero's rationality only makes this pain worse. The gap between the past of love and the present of Dao Ge, the gap between Tian Yan's deep love and the helplessness of the male protagonist, gave this paragraph of text extremely powerful power. After reading it, I even felt speechless for a while, and even wanted to send the author a razor blade. However, in order to ensure the interest of the text, the author added green ink, transferring the pain of the two to the jealousy of the two women. At the same time, it also strengthened Tian Yan's tragedy. This sense of tragedy is tinged with a sense of joy, turning the misery of fate into the joy of persecution. Strictly speaking, there is a bit of ex-wife literature in it. In this section, Qing Mo is really indispensable and plays an important role in adjusting the tone. Back to the blank space, why do I think this is intentional? Because this paragraph is not without description. Through Tian Yan's overly intense reaction, the author's bacteria showed the sweet past between the two. It can be said that no matter how painful Tian Yan is, this past period will be so beautiful. The most important thing is that this is entirely up to the readers to figure it out. I would like to ask, what beautiful description can surpass the content in the reader's own mind? This virtual description is absolutely wonderful, as if there is a gap between continuous curves, and the reader needs to complete it by himself. However, I personally think that a short paragraph of daily life should be added as a representative to guide the readers' thinking. From the perspective of plot development, as a saint from the hostile camp, according to the author's three views, it is absolutely impossible to defect here. If persuasion is a natural process, then the protagonist has not developed to this place yet, so the most reasonable way is to go offline for a period of time, which also just lays down expectations and suspense. How will Tian Yan treat the male protagonist? Can Tian Yan help the male protagonist regain his memory? It's really heartbreaking. As for the author's writing style, the male protagonist who cannot beat his senses, the playful and lively Tian Yan who is just the right amount of unreasonable (and his character that can change into three stages), are all vividly written on the page, making people want to put it down. This paragraph completely captured me, and now I just ask the author to update it more.

I started reading this book which was recommended by an official account before. It was okay at the beginning, it had some fun and plot, but I didn't pay much attention to it in the middle two years. During this period, I was bored and read it. Later, it was just a mess. Everyone's dialogue was gibberish. I wrote four or five pages of what I said in one sentence. If the thing is correct, just read out one or two chapters, and then write about an insignificant psychological activity in four to five hundred words, and his behavior has several meanings, what impact will it have on their prime minister's house, what impact will it have on the royal family, and then he will say something like "That's the chapter comment" "How can you think so much in one moment? Classic review", there are always inexplicable sighs, and the environment jumps from beginning to end to break the rhythm. I have a literary disease that will kill me if I don't write some insignificant environment. I really can't stand it when I see the Tianyuan Competition. It's a fog of war for two chapters, and then inexplicably What's wonderful is that Tian Yan persuades Ran Qingmo to kill Xu Changtian together, and then interjects a lot of nonsense conversations between Tian Ye and Wen. He doesn't know what to do when he should be beaten or killed. The interpolation of narration and flashback is what TM uses, right? After two chapters, the rhythm is broken and he continues to maintain this excellent habit 👍

Ran Qingmo, Su Jinxuan, Tian Yan and the princess felt that Wu Yuan would probably enter the harem as well. That's 5, I hope you don't open too many harems.

My expectations for this book were very high at the beginning. Even in 26 years, I still think that the opening chapters are better written in time-travel novels. What stood out to me the most was that he did not escape the situation in time-travel novels where people around him would find out that he is not his original self. Problem, patched The label that originally attracted readers to this book should be the Immortal Second Generation Invincible style with multiple female protagonists in the harem. There may be some small grinding in the middle, but the main character is pretending to be a big dick. The rhythm of killing the original protagonist Qin Mo is very written. Okay, and then the part where the relationship between Tian Yan and Li Qingyan heats up is also well written, but when the author starts to stop updating, it becomes very boring From the part of Zhenxi Army, I feel that the author is going crazy. Normally writing this part should be the protagonist's development and development. Li Junwu's emotional drama is very cliché. The man risks his life to save the woman, and the woman risks her life to save the man. Then the relationship between the two heats up. However, the author chose to make Li Junwu really die at this climax, which is very abstract. Of course, letting her die here really escalates their relationship and you can It's more cold-blooded to write about the protagonist's changes, but I came here to read cool articles. This part of yours makes me very unhappy. Here is a follow-up plot. There is a secret copy in the protagonist's memory that can save her, and the good-breasted brother can live Then there is Li Zhaoyuan. I think the writing of the character was a failure. This is the part where the author started to interrupt frequently and thought he was going to run away. If he goes against the protagonist, he will definitely die, but his death is not straightforward. To be honest, he kept saying he wanted him to die but not killing him. I really thought that the protagonist would have to retreat in the end. Bu, I feel sorry for the person who chased me. A person who crawled out of hell. The first thing he did when he came to power was to suppress the prime minister's office. This is not what Tang is. I despaired of this plot until he ascended the throne. I could only start to forcibly detoxify Li Zhaoyuan, and then I could connect with the Empress script For those who want to read this book, my suggestion is to read the content before the protagonist goes to Xizezhou to regain the Zhenxi Army. The first half is complete except for the incomplete world view. Just read the book review for the world view. The second half is the same as Shi La.

The writing style of this work is acceptable, and the character creation is also decent. However, the plot advancement is too "slow" and there are more and more signs of failure as it goes on. Of course, it will not make people abandon the article. But there is one shortcoming that is really big, that is, the biggest shortcoming of this work in terms of performance is the author's update rhythm. Assuming that the author can update steadily, even if it is only once a day and have a break every seven days, as long as the update is stable, the performance will be much better than now. (This is one of the foundations for good results in online literary works) Judging from some of the author's previous chapter reviews and leave requests, it can be seen that he is now in a complete trough period in creation and writing. Moreover, during the trough period, because he was unable to adjust himself to a good state, it has even developed and affected his physical and mental health. It is really regrettable. I hope the author can recover soon... There is also a piece of advice: If it is really irreversible, I hope you will put your own health first. I have seen writers who have been tortured to the extreme during their trough period. They really can't bear to see similar tragedies happen again. Moreover, if they force themselves too much to write and create works, they will not bring them pleasing works to readers. This is undoubtedly a two-way torture.

The immediate incident at the beginning attracts readers, and the subsequent romance with the female characters is very well written. The male protagonist also has an IQ layout. At least it looks very powerful. However, Tian Yan is a bit abrupt at the end, a bit deliberately to lower the favorability. Overall, it is still very good-looking. It is really, unexpectedly good-looking, and it can be rated high.

The imperial court was just talking nonsense. What is the concept of 200,000 miles of maritime territory? The earth is only 40,000 miles from the North Pole to the South Pole. The so-called area under the jurisdiction of the imperial court was at least as large as hundreds of contemporary China. Such a large area was unified by the dynasty. What a bullshit😎

The creation of characters is to serve the plot, but it really shouldn't be done to a fault with the character creation. It seems that this is the case in The Secret Next Door 2, which is being criticized. But the plot is like a multi-dimensional universe, with countless endings that fit the character's personality, and family happiness is only one of many endings. The author did not have the confidence or spent too much effort to write this happy ending for the whole family, so he said it was a mess, but not completely, because he still had the confidence to shape the characters well, but he just allowed the plot to develop blindly. Oh, it is not blind, there is still a direction, that is " "The protagonist is immortal"... This reminds me of Dragon Clan. Jiangnan designed a plot that fits the character's personality, but this plot limits the ending he wants to write. To put it bluntly, the plot is not designed well, and it has a strong conflict with the desired ending, causing it to freeze. So the author limited the desired ending to "the protagonist does not die". From this point of view, the probability of writing a happy ending for the whole family is smaller than the probability of the author giving up the pen. Although it cannot be said that it does not exist, the probability is just small. "When a book is written, the right of interpretation no longer belongs to the author." But the quality of the ending can be known as soon as you read it. It can only be said that the characters serve the plot, and the plot shapes the characters. They complement each other, and the ending of the characters only depends on where the author's pen is. I hope that the final ending is happy for the whole family, instead of just saying that the ending is too fitting for the character. Maybe this is also a good book, but at least it is not the book I want to read. As for whether to charge or not, there are many people on the list who wrote bad endings and eunuchs. It can only be said that the author is still too thin-skinned, maybe mainly to reduce his own psychological burden in disguise, so I won't make too many comments on this.

After reading Chapter 160, I felt that the first part was good but the second part was getting worse and worse. Why not keep the pace of dungeons and adventures everywhere. What barbarians, sects, and dynasties you see? Isn't this the ancient clans, royal family plus a Huns? It's a bit boring, but I can imagine the following chapters about barbarian wars, strategies, sect conspiracies and so on. 🥱A little disappointed

Interesting, some thoughts. It can be said that Tian Yan is my favorite in terms of character design, but the handling of the emotional development with the male protagonist is hard to say perfect. Fall in love and kill each other? There is too much love without killing. The setting at the first meeting is that he is afraid of being killed, but the subsequent interactions are really unfazed and sweet. This makes it difficult for readers to deal with it. In the illusion, we finally got to a good place and were about to depend on each other, but then they cut it off, leaving a foreshadowing of teaching exercises to restore memory. I know that 90% will be completed in 15 years later, but the climax that was the most emotional for such a long time was stopped without a breath, causing Tian Yan to look like a heartless person, and I can't even sympathize with it. Of course, I believe the author has his own considerations, and I look forward to the follow-up (Please don't lose the settings of Sanwu Lolita, I just like to see Sanwu being exposed and get angry) (There is no random change in size, so it will be updated faster)

A web novel with the highest completeness, especially the true finale of the extra story! The world is no longer a drama that ends when the protagonist reaches the highest level of combat power. The finishing touch and the difficulty of implementing the ideal are the real finishing touches! Every character in the book has his own position and vital interests. The development of technology and the contradiction between the system have irreconcilable structural conflicts. It is impossible for the people in the book to surrender their lifelong beliefs and foundation just because the protagonist reaches the peak of his combat power. And if the protagonist gives up his ideals and becomes Emperor Xu, what is the difference from the previous world? Only by truly shattering the entire world can a new world be rebuilt. It is the all-stopping struggle between these two sides that pushes the entire book to an unparalleled climax! The characters in the book don't just get off work after the play is over. After writing the book in the later stages, the author is no longer writing the book, but using the gradually enriched character image to reasonably deduce how to proceed next. The only character that the author can really control is the protagonist himself. This is why I think he is a real divine book. Many characters have become independent of the protagonist. They are no longer villains for the protagonist to defeat or elders to help the protagonist upgrade. Instead, they are characters with their own thoughts. The death of Li Junwu, which book reviews have been criticizing, I think is because the author made a choice between the structural rationality of the entire book and the readers' emotions. And I personally feel that Jun Wu didn't have much ink in the early stages, and she's a woman. I have never read a book in which the author was criticized for a year because the hero's iron brother made a sacrifice. I would only call him a tragic hero. The whole book is based on rationality, most of the characters are subjective and independent, the ending is ambitious, the plot is exciting, and the writing is first-rate. In comprehensive evaluation, it ranks first among its genres and among the top ten in the category of cultivating immortals. (Personally, I think it's really number one, it really speaks to me)

In Liu Cixin's novel "Ball Lightning", the protagonist develops technology that can eliminate hurricanes. This can save countless lives and properties in Ami, a country where hurricanes are frequent. However, the US imperialist military later made hurricane weapons based on this technology and destroyed the Chinese aircraft carrier fleet. After reading this, most readers will scold the Angsa gang for being crazy, and some may lament that technology is a double-edged sword, but few people will throw the blame on the protagonist, saying that he is an accomplice of the American emperor and the culprit of the destruction of the fleet, and should bear the main responsibility. In this book, the first official appearance of the fourth sister Xu Yunyao was the disaster in Shengshan County. The male protagonist and a large number of readers blamed her, thinking that her formation killed 200,000 people. However, if you think about it carefully, this statement is very problematic. Kitchen knives can kill people, and sugar can be used to make homemade bombs. If you want to do evil, you can always find various ways. Setting up a maze to protect a place, everyone can benefit from it, so the fourth sister works for free to do charity, what's wrong with it? It can only be said that the operation of Wanxiang Sect is too crazy, and the bottom line of normal human beings limits the imagination of Fourth Sister. But if this is the case, shouldn't everyone criticize the Wanxiang Sect? Isn't Fourth Sister one of the victims who was taken advantage of? What's more, without the fourth sister, Wanxiang Sect will still find ways to set up formations to harm people. It's just a matter of time to change the formation master and spend more budget. However, the readers followed the male protagonist in verbally criticizing the fourth sister, as if she had done something heinous. Personally, I think the main reason is that the author deliberately portrayed Xu Yunyao in a negative direction. Whatever Xu Yunyao agrees with, the male protagonist will oppose it, almost to the point of arguing, constantly emphasizing that she is "naive", "a holy mother", and "too idealistic". This kind of character creation seems to me to be a bit too strong. For example, when Bai Zhao discovered the identity of the male protagonist, the male protagonist had to choose between Ran Qingmo and the fourth sister, either to die himself or to kill Bai Zhao. There was also a plot where the male protagonist attacked the fourth sister, which attracted a lot of "Xu Yunyao was written off" in the comments. But obviously this is not an either-or question. There are many ways to solve this problem without killing Bai Zhao. In fact, Bai Zhao did not die in the end - so what did you say so much before? Looking back, the fourth sister is opposed to killing a family hero who has made no mistakes and seeks other solutions. Is there anything wrong in this? One thing to say is that I personally don't like the character of Xu Yunyao very much, but my main dislike comes from her betrayal of her family and backstabbing her father in the original plot of the game - a kindness that is not born and raised can never be repaid. Even if there are thousands of reasons, this kind of betrayal is shameful and hateful. But in the current world line, the fourth sister did nothing wrong. She travels around the world with her sect disciples - this is allowed by her father, and is even part of the grand chess game; during her travels, she kills demons and helps the people - isn't this a great thing? She believes that the Wanxiang Sect should only kill the first culprits, and should not massacre the sects indiscriminately - there is no problem, even in ancient times they usually did not kill all the enemy troops. If we start a full-scale war with the sect in the future, will we really massacre all the people related to the sects in the world? Do you want to kill the three-year-old child of the outer disciple? Do you want to kill the officials and businessmen who are related to the sect? Should we kill the people who cultivate the sect's fields and eat the sect's food? If they are all killed, how many people will be left in the Wei Dynasty? In summary, I personally feel that the author used too much force when portraying Xu Yunyao. As a spiritual fast food, online articles are basically based on refreshing articles, so readers especially hate the "Madonna" type characters. Most readers choose to take on the role of the protagonist when reading, so when the protagonist opposes the fourth sister in an almost arrogant manner and criticizes her for being childish, the readers' dislike of the fourth sister will be further amplified. If the author did not intend to really portray Xu Yunyao as a villain, such character creation would be overdone and somewhat of a failure.

Sure enough, this author is unreliable. I have been very disappointed with him since last year. I said I would never vote for a monthly ticket if I asked for leave again. It was just a waste of time. I came back to read a few chapters when I remembered it. I haven't read it for a long time. When I saw the update time 17 days ago, it turned out that it was still dead 🙂 Fortunately, I stopped the loss in time.

There is a problem with this kind of books. Before time travel, you have to add a PC character. After time travel, you will directly become a eunuch.

If it really doesn't work, I'll use the big one. Shu Huang

There are already books about sworn sisters and adopted sisters. The current trend of works has changed a lot from before. Mitian, you see, in the serialized "Qingshan", Chen Ji and his sworn sister Zhang Xia got married. Also, in "This Book Is Poisonous", the male protagonist expresses his love for his adopted sister at the beginning, and now there are many harems. The male protagonist of "Rebirth: A Handbook for Raising a Step-sister" talks about rejection, but is actually getting tired of it. "Rebirth, a sister is growing up in the family" The adopted siblings send sweets to each other. Even the newspaper guy is back in action. Let's make up for Xinyao's wedding together. {"NickName":"Mitian Building 111","UserId":223323511}

Please end the war part as soon as possible. So many chapters lately seem boring.

Refining

Tian Yan and Zhou Chen? ? ? Is this right?

Sorry, I really have too many regrets after reading this book. I hope the extra chapter can make up for it some. The first half is well written, but it is a pity that the northern war part has been prepared for so long, and the result is like a splash of water, without reaching the ending it should have. The second half started to get a bit wet, and I didn't read it that carefully. I only read two or three lines at a glance. For readers who are catching up on updates, reading the second half is very painful. However, for me who has already finished reading the book in one go, the overall book is okay, but there are really many typos in this book. I am used to looking for finished novels. After reading some book reviews and the first one or two hundred chapters, my expectations for this book were still very high. Unfortunately, I could not maintain them. It is a pity for this work. I hope that the author will continue to work hard in subsequent works.

The writing is okay, but in the later period, I can obviously feel that I am a little weak in dealing with big scenes. I also created too many professional terms for the plot, which seems cumbersome, or I can't control such a grand world view. The current pause is probably because of this, and I need to go through the outline. But the character creation has indeed grasped the key points, and the writing is good and memorable. Dabingtuozi, Xiaobingtuozi, Qingyan, Tea Art Novice, and Shameful Succubus. The small scenes are still well written. I really like the beginning of Tianyan's plot.

The protagonist's personality is a bit conflicting. Many of the plots are well written individually, but they are very inconsistent when put together I don't like the sword heroine. The writing is okay, but I am too old to watch this The ending is too hasty. It is obvious that a lot of it has not been finished. It can basically be said to be unfinished

As the title states, this is the first time I have ordered all the books, and I have read online articles for many years without really seeing the ending. This is the only one I have read in recent years. . . The characterization is the strongest in online writing. . . He is very good at using events that are close to life, full of fireworks and have a strong sense of reality to outline the characteristics of people. No one is flat. The chapter about the airborne landing on the battlefield, the two chapters about the duel between emperors and prime ministers, and the two chapters about the second prince killing his mother and confronting the protagonist, are the condensation of description and calligraphy skills. The description of the scene and psychology can be regarded as the best in the Internet at that time. I have read it many times. Especially the duel between emperors and prime ministers gave me a sense of shock that I felt when watching the ending of Alexander Hamilton. It was also very similar, especially when the emperor's sword was directed at the will of heaven instead of the prime minister. . . I strongly recommend reading it with Ham's music ( Finally... The ending is indeed a bit rushed, and I feel like it could be expanded on more... I would have thought that there would be a single chapter of Tian Yan to write about her being a little bit OOC. The psychological activities behind it, or the interspersed descriptions, and the perspectives of some of the main characters. I hope there will be extra chapters ( Wonderful experience, thanks to the author🙏

Happy New Year to all book friends 🙏🙏🙏

Haki

A very good novel I remembered reading this book at Qidian after reading the comic. When it was first released, it was put on the bookshelf to gather dust because I didn't want to wait for updates. Just finished reading this. How should I put it? Maybe I read it in one go and didn't experience any interruptions, so I felt pretty good about it. I skipped the "Zhuang Zhou" chapter before and read it again when I have time The setting of this book is perfect, and the characters do not do anything that goes against their personality. The thing that suits me best is that the protagonist does not have double standards, looks at problems very rationally, and can understand the enemy from different standpoints, rather than the kind of writing style that "opposing the protagonist is a heinous crime" From being arrogant and stupid to being wise, he has grown up along the way. The feeling is better than the next door "Jobless Reincarnation" Whether the protagonist takes over or merges, the final tone is set by Xu Yinhe's sentence "I still don't recognize my son" As for the parts I don't like, only the good-breasted brother and Xu Yinhe can't agree. But after reading the author's postscript, he understood. He struggled for a long time whether the good-breasted brother should go offline or whether Xu Yinhe should come to the rescue. He knew whether Xu Yinhe's first shot was the climax or the pleasure, but he still chose to maintain Xu Yinhe's character. The human nature of this book is very three-dimensional. The emperor wanted to be ruthless, but he was indeed ruthless. But after all, I can't let go of my former dream. After all, I still have friendship with Xu Yinhe... And his family. It's really sad. The true feelings of Xu Yinhe's family The relationships of the "Big Three" are also well written, and it is clear that the relationship between Tianyan, Qingmo, and Princess is clear. There is a clear gap in the relationship between the other female protagonists There is also the second prince's mother, who is praying to God and worshiping Buddha. There is only a small scene. The sentence "I'm sorry, mom is just an ordinary person, I can only think of this way to help you" really brought people to life in less than a chapter. Last question, will there be any extras in the future?

The previous chapter is the fairy grass among the fairy grass in my heart, but about 690 chapters after the climax, the author started to write randomly. The technology tree, BOSS, sect, own power, court political drama, and power seizure mentioned earlier were all sloppy. No surprise, I really couldn't write it down, otherwise it wouldn't have been discontinued for a long time, and many free chapters were given. It was very painful to subscribe and catch up at the same time. I knew it was unfinished and deliberately left a few chapters stuck for a long time, so I couldn't bear to finish it. Although the author said that he had finished it, he also knew that the ending was not good, so he wrote many extras. It is a pity that I will not watch the next one. This makes me deeply sad.

I haven't saved up 100 chapters yet, so why is it finished? Didn't I say before that there are about 3 chapters left to finish? Are you sure these 100 chapters are not just one chapter to be finished?

The beginning of this book is very good, I have read 15% of it, but why do so many women appear? It feels like a harem... Does it still feel cliche as you write? Don't put more effort into the plot.

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