After the Immortal Disappeared

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​? ▲ This book is actually somewhat similar to the movie Ball 2? What kind of fairy tale or science fiction is this? Artificial Intelligence Moss and Dafang Hu: Dafang Hu can deduce all things, reproduce the past, and evolve the world of dragons; the quantum computer MOSS can also deduce various possibilities in the future and preserve human civilization. I have also seen many book reviews saying that Dafang Hu is AI, which is really similar. The thinking patterns of the two are also similar. The Dafang Pot is purely rational. There is no spirit that does not recognize the owner (the ancient immortal's point of view). It also pays no attention to Xiao He, but it may have an ultimate purpose that has not yet been revealed, so it needs to keep devouring good things to strengthen itself; moss this Bian is also purely rational. In order to guide Tu Hengyu, he will not hesitate to cause a car accident, in order to promote the mountain-moving plan, he will not hesitate to destroy the space station, and in order to eliminate the nuclear bomb, he will not hesitate to create a lunar crisis. His ultimate goal is to continue human civilization, so he will use all means to put pressure on mankind and unite mankind. The third point is that both of them may have been influenced by humans, and some changes have occurred internally, including their thinking. Later, under the influence of General Red, Dafanghu made a promise to Xiaohe to trap Nailuotian. It was mainly the decision of General Red, but taken as a whole, it can be said that General Red influenced Dafanghu; Moss used intelligent life to iterate his thinking, from the cold and rational artificial intelligence 550 to Moss who can joke. The upload of Tu Hengyu's consciousness also brought variables to Moss. Yaya (Digital Life) and Sun Fuling (Zhong Wuhan): Both were "sacrificially sacrificed". Zhong Wuhan was sacrificed to the god Mitian by his father Zhong Shengguang and asked Mitian to let his daughter live in a square pot; Yaya was involved in an accident in a car accident caused by artificial intelligence, and the last part of her life was transcribed by her father Tu Hengyu, and she finally succeeded in surviving in the digital world. Both of them have similar functions to the weapon spirit. Sun Fuling, which is homophonic to the pot spirit, may be the only self-aware existence in Dafang Hu and can influence the decision of Dafang Hu. The lunar crisis began after Yaya uploaded it. Later, under the guidance of her father, she connected the key to save the world, and she can also affect moss to a certain extent.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 .                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               <br Mu Ling and Dong Li spent their lives deducing the future to guide their descendants, Ma Zhao and Zhou Zhezhi's "Digital Life Plan" and "Isolation Plan". All these look like a tragic feeling of fighting against fate and time has not waited for us. I have to sigh, what kind of fairy tale is the author writing? It is clearly a science fiction like three-body + ball! Perhaps the beauty of these different approaches but similar approaches is what fascinates me so much.        IP，？ The transformation of moss and the transformation of Dafanghu? Anyway, I'm really looking forward to it!

I'm a bit confused. As a time traveler, what about the thinking of modern people? In this low-spirited era of martial arts, gunpowder has been invented, but you haven't thought about carrying it forward? It has storage space, but you haven't thought about using it to transport supplies on a large scale? Steam-powered ships are not difficult to build... As a modern person, have you never thought about it? And the difficulty is easier to achieve than other travels to ancient times. After all, the different world where the protagonist lives has various kinds of strange fires, which can smelt steel more easily...

From the current point of view: Qingyang's image can actually be seen as a cry from Aunt Jiufang, or an ambition and an attempt - does the heroine have to be shy and have a stunning appearance? Can villains be male-like and female-like, and can female characters only be used as plot rewards for male protagonists? When Qingyang first appeared, he still roughly retained the characteristics of his ageless appearance. There is still an Oedipus complex describing Mai Xuewen (it seems to be called this), which shows that Qingyang's appearance is still the same, which is normal. I guess my aunt has seen it, but I still want to say that female authors, or women, always expect that their appearance will remain ageless and radiant. But the subsequent images gradually portrayed Qingyang's charm and appearance separately. This is what I understand as the slogan "The attractive point of a female character (or even a heroine) does not have to be the face, scheming, talent, and force (even not a person 😍) can be the attractive point." ! The first is the relationship between human beings, the second is that the emperor will not turn his arms into family members, and the third is that Qingyang has no conditions for indulgence (whoever wants to raise a bunch of young and handsome Qingwei understands) Going to the Yao Kingdom, they have begun to deliberately portray the image of Qingyang in an older direction. Of course, there are comments about the influence of the man who often matches Xiaohe and Qingyang, but it can be seen that Auntie wants to reduce the weight of Qingyang's appearance and charm. Because there will be a confrontation with young Lu Wushuang in the follow-up. If the weight is not reduced quickly, the expectations of readers in the plot in the pot will be misplaced, which will affect the perception. However, I am reluctant to weaken the appearance of such a magnificent character and can only continue to deepen his old image Then I can make some suggestions: 1. Is it true that I am also secretly knocking Lu Wushuang and Xiao He? Stop it! If we want to deal with the big ones, we need to deal with the old Qingyang and Xiaohe (). In fact, everyone can't see the specific image. In addition, the profile description of Qingyang when he appears is too obvious. "Female superiority" and "emperor's arms" plus Lu Wushuang's "capable and decisive" and "unparalleled grace" in the back. Normal men will have a strong desire to conquer, so it is useless to add old buffs. Just give her a knife. It is best to look back at the light and so on 2. Female protagonist In fact, it can be seen that the heroine was originally expected to be dismembered into the Lord of Songyang Palace, Qingyang, Master Sun, Aunt and Erniang, the mirror, the god (bushi), a good wife, scheming ability, gentleness, demon/non-human, considerate (physics), and an awesome background. So when will the heroine appear on the scene? If you don't come out, I'm going to marry Lao Qingyang and Xiao Helang. 3. Why do female characters always slip into the abyss of clearance rewards? It's because they are useless in promoting the plot. They can only adjust the atmosphere and give readers a sense of refreshment. Therefore, if you don't want female characters to become clearance rewards/dungeon rewards, you have to give them a plot-promoting role that matches the image. In this case, the clearance rewards are not clearance rewards, but normal plots (even Master Sun beat Xiao He to his knees and kidnapped him back to Panlong City to act as a arrogant military advisor). So as long as it can promote the plot, there is no need to be stingy with rewards for Xiao He. There are many beautiful characters, including the female general of Mou State, the female traitor of Lingshan, etc. The other characters are very three-dimensional (Dong Rui, Wanqi x Fushanyue, Bai Ziqi, Lingguang, Lao He, Commander, Xin Yi, Emperor, Shengzun). Don't worry about the decline in perception That's about it. Miscellaneous nonsense

It's a very interesting book. The first half is no different from ordinary fairy tales. At most, it has more of a conspiracy flavor. But starting from the middle period, after the Burning of Xushan, the battle between secular powers and gods and demons is very interesting. Especially in fairy tales, the red factor of the development of "secular forces" is also added (those who understand should know what I am talking about). In fact, this is very true, because no matter humans, gods, demons, they all have desires and desires. As you read further, you will find that the immortals and gods (demons) in this book are actually no different. They are nothing more than winners and losers. The winner calls himself a "god". But in essence, whether it is an immortal or a god (demon), if one grasps the spiritual energy and the other grasps the nightmare energy, the loss will not be enough to give more than enough. They don't care about ordinary people, they just want to absorb all the useful power in the world. So this is why I said that the second half of this book is a little red. The way of heaven is to make up for the deficiencies by making up for the excess.

After reading more than 1,700 chapters, the book is a good book, but in a sense it is too boring... It constantly creates suspense and anxiety, and when it is time to solve it, it is sparsely delayed for more than ten chapters, and finally leaves a tail to pave the way for the next stage of anxiety... The key author seems to be extremely confident in his writing method, and feels that this is the only way to write a sloppy, ups and downs, and extremely subtle. The problem is that writing a novel of about 100,000 words is good, but it is enough to write a huge and complex story. A novel like an online article, which often has millions of words and is updated every day, has to be written like this. A suspense or an anxiety can often be dealt with after tens of thousands or hundreds of thousands of words, which makes people really tired of reading...

This book is seriously underestimated and should be as good as "The Sky Survey". It should be the top 2 works from the starting point. I was a little shocked to find out that the author is a girl

The number of words in the chapter review is limited, so I will add a few more sentences 😵😵 here to describe my inner feelings and give reassurance to newcomers who want to read the book. I like the taste of this book very much, although in some parts I think it could be written better and better. But like the author said and what I believe in: Done is more important than perfect! It is difficult for an online novel to have beautiful writing, smooth and concise plot, and continuous and stable climaxes. If the comfort while reading is far greater than the short-term boredom, the admiration of the book is greater than the depression of hating it, and the flaws cannot be concealed... Then it is worth reading. If you screen with a diode mentality, you may really miss many excellent works. Not to mention that the quality of this work with thousands of chapters is much better than similar works, with long-lasting updates, high-quality story core, and a stable framework despite the length... As a reader, I feel a strong sense of sincerity and respect.       fr， (The author draws a cake and I draw a cake too: if there is any balance left after the completion of this work, I will order it in full or a physical book to show my support✊)

I have read more than a thousand chapters of Immortal. I prefer adventurous plots. After seeing the protagonist settle down and develop, I stopped taking risks. I can't hold on anymore. I can only look forward to the author's next book.

Does the author have a habit of speaking? He likes to add the word "there" at the end of a sentence. When he is immersed in reading, he suddenly says "what, what, how, how, how?", Just like reading a Japanese light novel, and he is instantly entertained.

After saving for half a year, I finished reading it in less than a week. The book is written very smoothly and the story is addictive. Compared with the story before the Bejia line, the Yangshan Farming Expansion section is indeed a bit dull. I think the main reason is that this section is too difficult to write. There are no conflicts at the moment, it is mainly foreshadowing. I believe that as the competition between the two major powers intensifies later, the conflict between Yang Shan and Yang Shan will become more prominent, and it may be better by then. Now the power is developing so smoothly that it is a bit unreal.

I read this book because I read it on Weibo, so I took a look at it. The first few volumes actually didn't touch me much. Until the Dunyu volume, Hong Chenglue appeared. He Chunhua suffered a big loss as soon as he made a move. Later, in order to gain power, he abandoned the injured to steal the house. Hong Chenglue's thoughts and methods of winning made me feel , This is a good general. Later, Hong Chenglue used the green bottle to cause He Chunhua, Zhao Pan and Nian Zanli to suffer heavy losses. Both sides failed in the Hanhe War. Only Hong Chenglue was the big winner, which also led to the Northern Demon Kingdom. Bejia had always been a backdrop before, but this time readers pay more attention to Bejia. ​When I arrived at the Devil's Nest volume, I was even more surprised by the author's imagination. The contrast between the world of dragons and the real world looked very cool. Next was the Utopia of Demons, with a big climax, Havoc in Heaven, and a more in-depth introduction to Bega. The most impressive part of this paragraph is actually the verse, the water-spirited dove occupies the magpie's nest and makes wedding clothes for others; Hiding the front and guarding the truth, exploring the truth in the imaginary, Wen Daolun's walking when encountering water, Mu Lingzun's encountering Huan's separation, blinding his eyesight with a leaf, and Dongli entering Kanshui. This experience in Bejia is not just about getting the big square pot lid in the end, but also a deeper understanding of Bejia's politics and contradictions, and also knowing that he is the descended body of Naruotian. This article of Naruo mainly solves the problem of Naruotian's divine descending. ​Yangshan Juan is about developing one's own power. When I read it, I still thought Lingshan was good. It was simpler and cruder to want He Lingchuan to rely on a big force. However, the author gave a blow to the head and understood that Lingshan is not a good thing. In this volume, I actually look forward to some scenes of Xiao He returning to the Lu Family and the return of the Dragon King. It is a bit cliché, but it is quite refreshing. , The author did not write like this, but asked Xiao He to create a power from scratch that neither relies on demons nor immortals. Although it is difficult, it also opens up a third option for all living beings, no longer oppressed by immortals and demons. Now the author has entered the final stage. I hope to write well, just keep my own rhythm, and maintain the quality. The quality of the author is still very high.

The writing and plot logic are top-notch, and there are few novels of this caliber from Qidian!

It's really torture to read it day by day because I can't bear to read it, but it feels really good to read it in one go like this. From the beginning, the whole plot and character descriptions are very good. The only problem I feel is the part where I go to Xiazhou. I can't remember the details, but the look and feel of that part is really bad, as if it was written by another person. Another annoying thing is that there are almost no book reviews that discuss the plot. They are all written by people who feel that the plot is too slow and can't stand it anymore. They write reviews with a gun and a stick. A short paragraph written in the previous chapter leads to the following, which can be connected to the next chapter. This phenomenon happens almost every time. I finally saw a book review of a paragraph and wanted to see what everyone was talking about. But when I opened it, it turned out to be a curse. 🙃

I think the biggest feeling after reading this book is: safe! Peace of mind! It is trust in the author's writing skills and plot settings! Although this is the first book I have read in Yunjian, I feel a sense of security that this article will proceed steadily and tell a story 23333 I prefer books that provide me with [a unique adventure experience that is immersive, imaginative and emotional]! So far this book has done it all! Like it very much! Please continue to work hard, Yunjian! ! ! ps Although many people think that Yunjian's writing is slow, I feel relieved when I see so many people scratching their heads and waiting for the follow-up wwww It's hard work! Another wave of PS monthly tickets! Next month I will steal some battery cars to support you (not PS again. There are so many book reviews in the forum that give pointers. Yunjian, you are really popular. I forgot about it later (.

The biggest problem with this book is that it took too long to change the map, and there is no contact between the previous and later ones. When I went to the Gold Shining Plains, I didn't care about my hometown at all. The development of the Yangshan Islands, the war situation in the Kite Kingdom, the war situation in the Bejia and Mou Kingdoms, and the plan to take back the Lu family. There is no plot at all. The situation has become smaller all of a sudden. It would be best if you could occasionally take part in it and gain some understanding of the entire world process.

It's amazing, it's amazing, all I can say is it's amazing. I didn't order this book before because it had too many words, and I was afraid it would be seriously watered down. But after reading it, I wanted to accuse the author of feeding me opium in the book. I couldn't stop, I couldn't stop at all. I finished reading more than a thousand chapters in half a month, and now I feel so empty 😭, I love it.

Nice! It was only in Chapter 1700 that I discovered the immortal method.

To be honest, it is best for authors to pay attention to chapter breaks sometimes, and not to break off when the word count is reached. The effect of following up is really affected by chapter breaks. Some chapter breaks are really uncomfortable.

Strong recommendation, writing ideas, huge huge huge stick

So well written. It's been a long time since I've encountered such a good novel.

The writing is very good, but I still need to accumulate books, otherwise I won't be able to do it well.

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I was a little touched when I saw Mr. He looking for Concubine Mei to go out and work as a spy in Mou State. The first is doubt, who is this? Oh, Mai's child, why are you looking for her? Oh, she has done some things over the years, which shows that she is very capable. Well, why does she have such ability? Why should Mr. He believe her? Why does she have this confidence? Questions kept popping up, ah, it turned out to be prejudice. I had prejudices against her, and not just her. I also had prejudices against Master Sun, General Hong, Qingyang, and even the master of Songyang Mansion (I really forgot his name, haha) who hadn't appeared in the game for a long time and almost forgot about it, but I hid it very well. The following speech is somewhat controversial in the current environment. It is not very popular on both sides, so I will probably treat it as if it does not exist. It's not that they shrink into their shells, but they don't have the motivation to argue 1. What constitutes prejudice, what is their future? Among such charming characters, who will they fall in love with, who will they marry, who will they fall in love with? Feeling unwell? This is considered mild. In fact, I think it's more dirty. You can't force a man to have no desire to conquer. Second, the source of the stereotype is family. I can only say that I have never thought that the word "butterfly" is actually quite suitable for me. Growing up in a fourth-tier small city, I was in a period of rapid economic development, with a prosperous economic foundation but no corresponding cultural support. As the saying goes, I was actually a "nouveau riche" in another sense. Going a step further, in my opinion, women never have their own careers. My mother, my relatives, none of them (I suddenly remembered that I actually have an aunt, but I don't communicate much), maybe they have, but in the end after getting married, it became a business belonging to the small family. This leads to my concept that women do not need to have any ambitions and goals after getting married. "Once you get married, you can live a down-to-earth life." So I wonder, are the female characters created so perfectly? How to collect it? How do you handle it after collecting it so that it doesn't collapse? Seeing Mei Fei here, I suddenly realized something, that is Three, the adjustment of cognition. There is no need to accept them, they can have their own careers. The owner of Songyang Mansion (I really can't remember, even the name of the shop) just likes money and management. Mrs. Sun just loves children, and education is one of her ultimate careers. Qingyang doesn't understand. Maybe she has feelings for her benefactor and also has the ambition to make a contribution (I don't quite understand the ambition of a rights animal). General Hong, she just likes the soldiers and people of Panlong City and wants to protect them, so Panlong Army is her career. This is the solution. Master Sun likes Xiao He, but she will still teach and give lectures in the rest of her life. She will still be angry because of a certain naughty kid, and will laugh at the clumsy excuses of a certain naughty kid. This is the composition of the character Sun Fuzi. Speaking of Concubine Mei, she may be dangerous and beautiful, but in my old understanding, family fun is her ending, what about other than family fun? It has nothing to do with me anymore. But the fact (she came out again) was not the case. She liked the feeling of dancing on the tip of a knife. After avenging her father, she found that it was this atmosphere that she liked, so she would go out to help Xiaohe. This is her ambition, her preference, and her career. Why didn't I realize this before? Cognitive adjustment, this feeling is still a bit novel. Four, off topic, okay, is Mei Fei the new sister? I narcissistically thought that my aunt saw my previous comment and sent Xiao He a new benefit. I feel that Mei Fei belongs to Xiao He's Qingyang. But I haven't read the back part yet, so I don't know how the internal affairs are written. But I still make some suggestions based on the stereotype of "". If you are writing about internal affairs, you can start with the changes in the lives of minor characters under the policy reforms of certain protagonists. Use side descriptions to explain the effects and changes of this policy. For system innovation, you can try the system after feudalism (actually, I feel that Xiaohe has learned the essence of his strategy, which is to make more friends, but is it better to have a specific system?). If you are not confident, you can ask your husband more. I am not saying that we are really talented when it comes to beheading. Hehe A string of numbers for readers who still don't want to reveal their nicknames to avoid being written into the plot. 2025.07.13

I'm just a stranger, I've watched 80 episodes in one go, and I came here specifically to share it with more people. This book is very good! I became more and more addicted after reading Chapter 30. I didn't pay attention to the time, and I almost stayed up all night by accident 🤭

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This map was posted in the book review area in the early stage and has been modified several times based on the opinions of many book friends. It will be continuously modified and improved in the future. I hope everyone will give you more opinions It will continue to be updated in the future 😁😁😁 I was on a business trip a few days ago and didn't have time to update. I have time today, so I will make a small change first: a lot of place names have been added. , Modified the problem of Panlong Desert being close to the sea, adjusted the position of Rongshan Sect, bordered Blade Port and Bailie, and added Fu Kingdom 😊 Thank you for your help and suggestions. We will continue to update them in the future. There is an error in the mutual positions of Bejiamu Kingdom and Shining Gold Plains, which may be changed in the future. Thank you for your attention 🌹🌹

Hastily drawn Master Sun🥺