The Culprit

Doesn't anyone think this was written in a very deliberate and pretentious way? A bit like a child in The Legend of Langya🙂🙂🙂🙂

The first few pictures are meant to persuade you to quit, right? In the third chapter, the little girl Su Nuo died, so what's the point of writing this supporting role? And the protagonist's response to his sister, it can be seen that this protagonist is very born, an absolute refined self-interestedist. The setting is also unreasonable. His sister is so powerful. Farming is better than working as a thug in other people's homes. Besides, the prerequisite for being a thug is self-destruction. This book is also full of buffs.

The male protagonist is similar to the previous book, "Will Someone Like Me If I Lose Emotions?". I think there is nothing wrong with this kind of character. Although he is very cold-blooded in the early stage, he will slowly regain his feelings as the plot progresses, and he will be domesticated while taming others. It is quite interesting. It is very different from the kind of protagonist who is selfish from beginning to end. Don't get me wrong if you criticize the male protagonist for abandoning the book after reading the first few chapters. But the plot of Su Nuo at the beginning is very confusing. It is better to write it directly as a counter-routine. Watching someone who looks like the heroine suddenly die in the next chapter is at least a reversal . Nowadays, the writing is neither better nor worse. A seemingly very important and full of foreshadowing person died without anyone paying attention. It was a very unrealistic death. It felt very much like a fake death or being in a fantasy world. After reading many chapters later, I realized that he was really dead. There was no sense of reversal at all. Overall, it's pretty good. The flaws don't hide the flaws. I hope there won't be more updates this time 😊

Seventy percent, literary youth Eighty percent, going my own way One hundred percent, asking for leave Understand the applause 😎😎

I'm a little lucky

The update is already unstable before it is put on the shelves...

Have you prepared an outline this time?

The author has a new book now, so you must be careful not to do it on the side. If you do it now, you will almost die suddenly. Like Xiaolangjun, chaos, etc. Are all lessons learned from the past. Now this is the biggest thunder point.

Qin Yi is equivalent to having Su Hui since he was a child, but because of his brain disease, he can only have a partial window of awakening. At other times, he is a fool, uncontrollable, and has no memory. Every time he regains consciousness, he has to face unfamiliar environments and bad conditions. This may indeed lead to fear of the world, extreme self-interest, and a perverted desire for control because of the uncontrollability of his life, but the protagonist is too naive. Maybe Hakimi enjoyed writing it himself, and felt that Qin Yi's setting was well established. He was immersed in his own world and didn't know what the world was. But because of the education they have received and the gentleness of human nature, readers are extremely disgusted with such an extremely selfish person who plays with other people's feelings. No reader would stay with a growth story like Haji Mi's story, in which a person is gradually influenced and becomes emotional. If Akaishi is red for a moment, can he be red for the rest of his life?

The male protagonist's character is too bloodless. What are you doing living like this, just to live a simple life? It looks so uncomfortable

In the nine-year compulsory education, there is no basic moral outlook. At least, it should be neutral and kind. This way of treating the people around you as a tool, throwing it away after use, "disposing" of those who are out of control, and putting yourself first, can people really like it? It's not impossible to recreate the palace maid's strangulation. In addition, does the male protagonist really travel through time with this style of behavior? Isn't this purely local?

Let me tell you my personal opinion (it just means that I don't like it and don't criticize it). What can I say? The beginning is still amazing, but personally I can't accept the character of the protagonist. This does not mean that the male protagonist of the online novel must be more holy and loving. I think it's okay to be indifferent to enemies and strangers, and I admire this kind of male protagonist who is decisive in killing and can achieve great things. But for a female protagonist who only has you in her heart and all her eyes are on you, it's full of indifference and impersonality. I personally can't accept this kind of value. I think it's OK to treat enemies and strangers no matter how you treat them. Treating your own people and someone who only has eyes for you is still full of calculations. I can only say that it's a bit too naive. I think I am I'm not a good person, but I personally can't accept this kind of value, and I can't put it into the author's mind. Some people may like it. After all, it's hard to agree with everyone, and I personally can't represent other people's aesthetics. I write this comment just to catch up on updates in the past few days, to give myself an explanation, and to give a thumbs up to new book friends who have the same aesthetic taste as me. I don't want to go against my will and wish this article a good sale, but I hope we can see each other again.

I followed "Fairy" in my sophomore year of high school. At that time, I was living in the dormitory and were not allowed to bring mobile phones. Every time I took computer class, I would secretly search pirated websites to read it. Once a week, if there was not much update, I would read the previous chapters two or three times. When I got home from vacation, I used my own account to replenish subscriptions and monthly passes. Finally, I stumbled across all the subscriptions, and also bought the event peripherals for this book, serial number 001. During the time when the college entrance examination was about to take place, the school was not very strict. I borrowed the mobile phone brought by my classmates and secretly watched "Fairy" at night. However, the author's updates were really annoying. I had an early self-study at 5.30 And could only re-read it again and again at 3:00. When I got to college, I read "Fairy" twice more. Because of this book, I also came up with the idea of ​​writing online articles. I tried it for a while in my sophomore year, and signed two books through internal investment. The results were half good, but I still didn't stick to one book after that. It wasn't that I didn't want to write, but I really couldn't write it and didn't know what to write. At that time, I was shocked to realize that writing a book was difficult. I thought of the days when I used to scold me for not having enough updates, and I felt relieved. In a blink of an eye, now I am about to graduate in my junior year of college. Perhaps I will never forget Ran Qingmo's cool and cool nature. She is so in line with my childhood fantasy of a heroine. She is not as tacky as other novels. She is either the unruly and indulgent daughter, or the quirky and eccentric children of the world, or she is so violent that she is inhumane. In my opinion, those are not heroines, but vulgar bitches. In short, "Fairy, Please Hear My Explanation" has left me with so many memories and so many emotions, so come on for the new book~

If the first chapter is somewhat intriguing, the rest is baffling. The setting of the protagonist, the sister, a few dead people and monsters, and the vague world are simply boring and boring.

As the title states, the plot does not need to be as big as the world view of the book, but the heroine must not be left behind 🙂

If my grades are not good, I will probably run away.

I have followed almost 100,000 words. How should I put it? It seems that a lot of plots have been written, but it always feels like a fog and the meaning is difficult to understand. In addition, the character of the protagonist makes me feel a little physically uncomfortable. This is just my personal opinion and does not represent the majority of readers. See you again by fate.

I really can't accept the character of the male protagonist. This only represents my personal opinion, coupled with the author's character, I can only give you a suggestion for those who like to read. I'm reading this book after I finish it. The first two volumes of the previous book are very well written, and the first female protagonist who appears is really good, but the later part is like force-feeding you Akaashi, and at the end of the writing, you either ask for leave or stop writing.

Does your plot make sense? A gangster prince fails to rape a female thug, and colludes with the female thug's enemies to destroy her family. The female thug disfigures her face and escapes the chase. The gang boss stops the chase out of pity. He punishes himself three times and walks away. Will we all still be good brothers in the future? The male protagonist seems to be decisive in killing, but upon closer inspection he turns out to be a selfish and brainless giant baby.

It's really choking to read. This book is written in a pretentious way. The Riddler is deliberately cold-blooded and cruel. It's really, really, really. Why is it ranked first among new books?

The plot is a bit toxic. You think he is the female protagonist, but he is offline in the next second. The male protagonist feels not very human, has no emotions, and basically uses everything around him.

The character who spent a lot of pen and ink in the previous chapter will directly receive the lunch in the next chapter. The author feels that he is an old literary and artistic person, but in fact he is just like Shi

I dare not read the book written by this stupid person until it is finished 😄

If the updates are interrupted frequently, you can simply cut them off. Readers will feel uncomfortable and the book's grades will not improve.

It is a very in-depth book. Like other short stories, you can already tell the ending after reading the beginning. I have listened to the book at 2 times and have no thoughts. It is just a good way to waste my life. I will read this book word by word, over and over again, trying to understand the characters' thoughts, what the author wants to express, and to get a glimpse of the future development. I would imagine pictures in my mind based on the article paragraph by paragraph, and play it like a movie. After get off work every day, I would eat fast food worth 13 yuan, drink a large bottle of ice-cold Coke, and eat while reading this book. Can you understand this feeling of pleasure? -Working is boring and boring, like a machine repeating, I don't know what the meaning of life is? When he reaches his age, he spends tens of thousands to marry a woman from the same village, takes on mortgage and car loans for decades, and then quietly waits for death in the countryside without the protection of five insurances and one housing fund. -Now there is finally something to look forward to in life! I'm looking forward to the new chapter and want to confirm whether the new plot is what I thought it would be. Maybe I can find a beacon in this book that points the way forward in reality? -What a contradiction. I thought that the protagonist could gain love, have friendship, defeat the "villain" in a brain competition, and then have a happy ending. But I think it's too dreamy. Reality is 90% unsatisfactory. The protagonist should abandon all emotional lines, use all means to achieve his goals, be born at the bottom, and achieve great things. Is this what it should be like?

So far, the plot is very interesting, especially the protagonist's "rational, profit-seeking, and personality that does not conform to popular tastes", which is very attractive to some readers, including me. In addition, the characters of the supporting characters are also great, such as the sister who was adopted. I originally disliked most of the supporting female characters because of my preconceptions. This has been the case in the past. However, this female character is very special. She does not have the common feeling of being completely controlled by a PUA but under the control of the protagonist. She is a real living person, which is wonderful. Unfortunately, I have a bad premonition about this supporting role, like a scene in the crematorium? I can only hope that it won't happen. If it does, it won't matter. For people like me, love will tolerate everything. Another thing that makes me happy is that the author's writing style is very good, both in terms of the tense atmosphere and the visuals. Judging from all the chapters so far, this is reflected. Both the personal behavior of the characters and the fight discussions generated during the interaction are almost perfect. It has a comfortable feeling like watching animation. In the end, it's a bit of a pity, although I think it's great. However, judging from a small number of comments, the character design of the protagonist does not seem to be so close to the public's aesthetics, and I am afraid that the results will not be able to reach new highs. At the end, I wish the author that his wishes for this book will come true.

What is the use of this ticket? It pops up every month

The writing is good, and the plot flow is well described, especially the description of the male bandit escaping after being fatally injured in the opening chapter. It is very realistic and is the main thing that retained me. The protagonist is a character who will do whatever it takes to survive. The sister is very cute. Generally speaking, it is highly recommended. However, there is also a shortcoming, which is the dead girl. Of course, the death of a rich girl is nothing to me. I just lament that she died so quickly, but this highlights a risk. In addition, this old fan of the author said about the dead girl in the previous book. I took a look at the character card. As well as the comments from book friends, he should be considered a relatively important person, but he still died. This risk is very fatal to me. This is much harder for me to accept than the old problems of interrupted updates, eunuchs, unfinished work, and digging holes but not burying them as mentioned by book friends. I can only say that I hope the situation of the dead girl in the last book will not happen, otherwise I will be incompetent and furious 😳

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8 Days after it was released, six chapters have been updated 🤫🤫🤫, God Man