I Couldn't Afford the Betrothal Gift, so I Had to Marry the Holy Girl of the Demon Sect.

To the author: Hello, light and shadow! A few years ago, I saw the title of the book "My Wife Is Clearly a Queen, But Is Too Virtuous". Ha, this is the first time I see such a long name, but the queen is very virtuous. It seems that this is the dream of many men. I clicked in out of curiosity. It's out of control until the update is complete. Later, I was still not satisfied, so I reread it three or four times as soon as I had nothing to do. Ximalaya has an audio version of this book, so I became a member, but unfortunately it stopped broadcasting after the 400th chapter. Maybe this book is not the most popular in Qidian, but it is my favorite. Lin Yao's gentleness, sweetness, softness, infatuation, yet sensible and considerate are deeply imprinted in my heart. Whenever I read passages about her, I always feel infinite tenderness. In addition to the heroine, other characters in the book are also vividly portrayed. Mo Yan's ability and determination combined with Zhang Zhiqin's naivety and naivety, Fang Fang and her little puppy are very suitable for her identity and background. The image of sister Fang Xiaole is exactly like a girl from Sichuan and Chongqing. The smell of hot pot has come out from the screen, and the room is full of spicy food. Xiong Sangou's transformation from being a black man to being cleansed, Yang Jiaxin's change of mentality, Yao's father's arrogance, Yao's mother's girlish heart, and Liu Naoyun's transformation from a scheming girl to a true love. . . It is really not easy for the author to write so many characters so vividly in one book! You write about the psychology of characters, especially the psychology of women, very well and deeply. Most of the subsequent books died midway, which is such a pity! I think it's because you haven't used your strengths and you're not good at plots. I suggest you don't deliberately make up stories, otherwise you won't be able to sustain them later. I suggest you spend more time on character creation and promote the plot through the character's personality. Perhaps writing in this way can give full play to your strengths and write a good book. This book has a good starting point and will be combined with the fireworks of secular reality. I hope you can write it well!

What can I say The writing is a bit physically uncomfortable The main character was hooked at the beginning and it was so frustrating It's okay to say After that, the relationship between the young couple gradually warmed up, and the writing was okay, and I could read it. But when Qiu Yuehe broke through the foundation building and suffered internal injuries, it was a fucking sight. , It's okay for you to practice Qi, but you have to be injured when building the foundation I originally thought that you would have a single female protagonist and then you would have 5 people bathing in the same bath Anyway, I feel a bit conflicted The male protagonist is useless to begin with, don't let Kuku create problems and the hero saves the beauty If you really want the hero to save the beauty, make the male protagonist stronger

Let me tell you my opinion. It may be a surprise to some people, but it may not be a surprise to some people. It's up to you to decide. I have already given up on this book. It looked very good in the early and middle stages. Later I joined the group to find out more about the single female protagonist the author planned to write. I am a human being. How did you write the single female protagonist? You write a single female protagonist, but you write so many other female character roles Why are you still writing emotional dramas and ambiguous ones? If you don't want to accept them, why are you writing them like this? I can watch so many of them for pure love and harem parties, but I can't accept this kind of writing. Either it's 1v1. If you want to write ambiguous emotional dramas, the harem will accept it. You created a bunch of female characters with emotional dramas and then said that there will be only one female protagonist 🤤. Do you really want to offend both the pure love party and the harem party? I don't want to watch it even if I am a pure love harem person.

The writing is too depressing. Without the heroine, the main character would be useless. I think it's okay for the good-for-nothing male protagonist to maintain one-on-one love. However, your writing is like a romance novel, which looks depressing. There is no show of affection between the male and female protagonists, only the male protagonist shows off the minimum amount of love, mainly more than once, and there is alchemy, which I can still bear, and moving the alchemy furnace later, I looked funny but I couldn't laugh out, and I felt completely depressed.

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ Did not do not want to let the heroine suffer any emotional grievance and harm. To be honest, I like all the female characters that appear in the article. Even for Si Minglan, a character I didn't like at first, I couldn't help but want to protect her and feel sorry for her. I am a very traditional man. But what I like most is the heroine. If my wife is 1% as good as the heroine, I will do everything for her, even if I am the enemy of the whole world! No matter whether the author ends up with a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists, I can accept it, as long as it is well written, and of course, try not to have too many female protagonists. Each additional female protagonist means that the protagonist's love is divided even thinner. This is unfair and hurtful to those women who deeply love the male protagonist, even if they don't care on the surface. In the field of true love, both men and women are selfish, sensitive and fragile. Although in this day and age, true love is almost extinct.

I read it all night long, and it was pretty good at the beginning, but it changed from the point of Shared Bathing. Finally, I couldn't stand the plot of Beihuang and started reading it. I kept claiming that I would be devoted to my wife forever and ever, but I always passively and unresistingly flirted with other female characters. The author claims to have a single female protagonist, but with so many female supporting characters and so many ambiguous plots, I can only say that it is better not to take sides than to take sides. I myself use the emotional interaction of the characters as my selling point. Most novels that want to attract both pure lovers and harem parties will lose one of them in terms of reputation and performance. I declare in advance that I do not exclude single or multiple female protagonists, but according to the latest plot of the novel, if it ends with a single female protagonist, it will definitely be blunt and failed; if it is a single female protagonist in name and there are many confidantes, there is no need to declare a single female protagonist. After all, readers who prefer a single female protagonist have basically abandoned the book halfway.

This book makes me love and hate it. What I love is that the writing is good and the description of the characters is very vivid, especially the heroine, the heroine's maid, and Miss Mo. These characters are well written. Moreover, the emotional description in the article is very good, and the protagonist is also affectionate and righteous, which I like very much. However, there are several points in the article that I dislike very much. First, when the protagonist discovers Goldfinger at the beginning, he immediately wants to find a second woman. This is very undesirable. If you don't have money, you can't get through it emotionally. It's just like in reality, you have been in poverty for decades and have been on blind dates many times while others looked down upon you. Suddenly there is a beautiful virgin who doesn't despise you and doesn't want your betrothal gift. I hope you can live a good life with you. As a result, the morning after the wedding night, you wanted to find a mistress. This gives people a feeling of being ruthless and meaningless, which is inconsistent with the setting of the protagonist being sentimental and righteous later in the article. If possible, I suggest the author revise it. Second, the level settings for alchemists in the article are unreasonable. The second level of Qi training is a junior alchemist, the fourth level of Qi training is an intermediate alchemist, and the sixth level of Qi training is a senior alchemist. What is the ninth level of Qi training called? What are the alchemists corresponding to the 1st, 3rd, 6th, and 9th levels of foundation building called? What are the levels 1, 3, 6, and 3 of the Golden elixir, as well as the levels 1, 3, 6, and 9 of the Nascent Soul, and the levels 1, 3, 6, and 9 of the Incarnation God? If you set it up like this, it will easily crash. It is recommended to modify it. Third, the price setting in the article is extremely unreasonable. I suggest you revise it. I quote the comments from netizens, as shown below Overall, this novel is very good and has the potential to become a fine product. However, I hope the author can revise the several flaws I mentioned above, otherwise it will affect the reading experience. In fact, I deleted this novel several times and then picked it up again. It was not until I got over the flaws in the front and read the back that I felt much more comfortable. However, it is still recommended that the author correct the flaws, otherwise it will affect the retention rate of readers. Come on, this novel is really good!

It's a romance novel about a male cultivating immortality. The male protagonist is a thin dog from beginning to end, relying entirely on his wife to take care of him. I suggest that the book be renamed "Married to a Low-Level Male Cultivator at the Beginning: The Rise of a Black-bellied Lolita" and then be submitted to the female channel. After some modifications to the content below, it will definitely become a hit and female fans will increase. Really, the setting, writing style, and plot are not suitable for male readers. It is very effeminate and a bit toxic to male readers.

No, writing so many other female characters, and wasting so much ink, you told me it was a single female protagonist, I have been waiting for when to finish it, and I still feel that it is too slow, even if the relationship is good, it feels like the time has come. The male protagonist needs dual cultivation to quickly improve his cultivation and spiritual quality. The female protagonist is not here and agrees, and then I find that it is a single female protagonist. Is this how the single heroine is written? I am in a harem, and I can have a single heroine, as long as I don't come to the harem. It makes me uncomfortable when you write it like this. If you want a single heroine, don't have so many emotional scenes with other girls. How is this written? Ever heard of emotional scenes with other girls to show the hero's loyalty? Isn't this just looking for trouble?

Author, please write a single female protagonist. Can I call you dad? Please write a single female protagonist and adoptive father. Can you please write a single female protagonist?

The protagonist is portrayed like a teenager. Both IQ and EQ are low.

I've been reading this book without any thought. I really can't stand it anymore.

The boss has a suggestion: don't have more than four harems. If there are too many, it will dilute the plot.

Writing about so many women and having a single heroine? It is still a world where the jungle prevails. If you have strength, you have to do whatever you want. People who keep their heads in their belts, why should they restrain their emotions? Flirting and being irresponsible?

I'm getting more and more confused after reading Chapter 80. The author is patching up the male protagonist and will never open a harem, and he keeps inserting people into the male protagonist. What is he doing? Also, the problem of realm is getting bigger and bigger. I'm dumbfounded by the foundation-building explosion-seed Gan Yuanying. And it's really speechless to force all the male and female partners to be in the same realm.

Why are you scolding me? I really like this book. It is one of my two favorites that I am currently reading. Just watch it as a group drama, with the male protagonist just an observer. Each girl has a distinct and interesting personality. The male protagonist, driven by the female protagonist, can be regarded as a little genius. It is not normal for many girls to like him. When the heroine was still a giant xlori, not every man went crazy after watching it. The male protagonist is a catalyst that promotes the inner activities and plot of the female character. It is either a male protagonist or another male. They are all written as male protagonists/men dressed as women, just to prevent readers from feeling uncomfortable. If the female protagonist and the male protagonist were involved in the whole spiritual bathing method, I wouldn't be able to read this novel.

So this is the writing style of female videos🤓

When I saw the third chapter of the text, I couldn't stand it. The protagonist was in trouble, and as a result, practicing Qi to reach a small rank was like a natural chasm. So why did the third senior sister use her trump card to jump to two big ranks at once? Did the protagonist's fault fall on Wang? I endured it for a long time, thinking that I was cultivating immortals at a low level, but I suddenly started to fly. The progress of the protagonist is still slow... It seems that my brain is not working well Can anyone help me and give a spoiler about what happens next

I've read too many fairy-cultivating novels about killing decisively, and I really can't stand this kind of thing. What I wrote before is okay, but after building the foundation, it's hard to say anything about it. The protagonist is also indecisive and relies entirely on the system to push him forward, just like the Asashi male protagonist in traditional Japanese light novels.

If nothing else, this single girl will die! The straight kind, the kind that can't be changed even if you change it!

If you guys are dissatisfied with the plot and setting, feel free to complain, thank you!

The male protagonist has no sense of existence, he relies entirely on the female protagonist to feed him

The author's description of the emotions between men and women is indeed a good transition from shallow to deep, and it can be above 90 in this aspect. Regarding the plot, I suggest you follow the readers' suggestions and correct the loopholes in the plot, but I suggest you stick to your own ideas about the direction of the plot. From the five people bathing together, it can be seen that the author's plot is very contradictory (from the fusion of Liusu and Qin Gengyun's souls, there is also the idea of ​​a harem). But later, he probably thought that the heroine was not suitable for a harem, but did not open it. In this regard, I think the author can be more self-conscious when creating the work. Of course, interacting with readers and listening to readers' suggestions are the inherent qualities of a good author. However, when changing the direction of the plot, you must consider whether it is reasonable and whether it can be reconciled after the change. For example, like five people bathing together with a heroine, the outline is a conflicting plot with a single heroine. The remedy is to have a harem, otherwise the plot will be inconsistent and people who like harems or single women will not watch it at the same time (a work cannot be liked by everyone, so clearly define the market for your own work). At the same time, review is also very important, and the ending is a bit hasty. For example, the male and female protagonists met in Zhaiyu Lane, but they demolished and built the temple of the Goddess Empress. It is also abstract to transform the three pure things into one, but I personally prefer to play with abstraction, so I will not discuss it. However, the heroine's subsequent life is inconsistent with what she revealed before. She actually just wants to live a life free from worldliness in Zhaiyu Alley. Of course, every good book will have shortcomings and regrets, but its own shining points will be dazzling. I hope the author can maintain the description of the emotions between men and women. I believe that by polishing the plot carefully, the book will become better and better.

The author seems to be able to reveal the essence of a person with a complex personality and often inconsistent words and deeds in just one or two sentences. A person with this ability, when he is in a complex emotional whirlpool, can jump out and see through it sharply. This point is shown in the book "My Wife is a Queen", which is of great help to me in solving complex real-life emotional problems. The book "My Wife is a Queen" has always left me wanting more. After "The Holy Girl" came out, I can finally renew our relationship. There are many similarities in the characters of the two books, and there are also new ideas, which allows me to continue to enjoy the emotional feast. "The Holy Maiden of the Demon Gate" can be regarded as the sister chapter of "My Wife is the Queen of Heaven". In the first half of the book, Qiu Zhihe's performance can be seen as Mo Yan traveling into the world of fairy tales. After Qiu Zhihe later fell in love with the male protagonist, she became strong on the outside and soft on the inside. She looked like Mo Yan on the outside and Lin Yao on the inside. Qin Gengyun is very similar to Fang Xiaole. He was a loser at first, but then he developed a system and gradually cheated. The woman he met was also a very prosperous woman. Lisu is a bit like Fangfang. He often takes the blame for the heroine and has a carefree personality, but Liusu is much funnier than Fangfang.

Congratulations to the author on the successful completion. My wife is a queen, I give it 95 points, and this book is 80 points. It's still an old problem. The author is good at writing about ordinary life, characters' emotions and moods, but not good at constructing plots. The following chapters of Zhenyang Zong were almost unreadable several times. Out of support for the author, I bit the bullet and read it. I hope to reach a higher level in the future. It is recommended to refer to works such as Da Bong's Watcher to see how they structure the plot. My wife is a diva. The plot of this book is okay. It is probably about real life. I guess many of the plots actually happened, so the author wrote it more easily.

It's better than Xiao Bai Wen, but a lot worse than Xiancao. Compared with a novel, it is more like a wonderful stand-alone immortality game plot.

The author really has the intention to write, but the quality is really mediocre, and the shortcomings of his writing skills are too obvious. The descriptions in the book gave me a strong sense of seeing a novel for junior high school students, and the various settings are also messy. It is the kind of thing that can be read without thinking. I hope that the next work will be significantly improved.

We see the inner demons that appear inexplicably here in Chapters 44, 45 and 46, and then the stereotypical brothel oiran. It is worth noting that the original plot here was that the protagonist and the oiran continued to have sex for an hour, and then the author changed it to the protagonist who suddenly realized his conscience and ran away in shame after listening to a ditty for an hour. I originally wanted to read and complain, but I didn't expect to see a spoiler that this book has a single female protagonist? No, why did you spend so much effort and effort to portray the female character Mo Xiaolan? The author's original outline should be about the harem genre. Before it was released, there was an obvious trend of multiple female protagonists. In the end, I don't know why there was only one female protagonist. There is a saying that there is no way to flirt without marrying. Since there have been a lot of descriptions of other female characters in the past, let's continue the harem route firmly. Instead of changing course midway, don't be influenced by readers and be irresponsible for the plots written before. The plots about other female characters are very unpleasant to watch. Especially when I saw some discussion about the plot of bathing with other female characters to heal their wounds later on, how did it develop into a single female protagonist in the end... The position vacillated, and the result was that both the single and multiple female protagonists were not pleasing to both parties, so why bother. I can accept it regardless of whether it has a single or multiple female protagonists. The author's writing skills are not low, but it was ruined at this point, which is a bit regretful.

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Single female protagonist + multiple female characters are not a good combination. Although it is not bad to watch the main female protagonist's role, it is not impossible to have a few good female supporting characters to further the relationship. I have just read more than 40 chapters of the Beihuang volume. I don't know if it will change in the future.