Madam, You Won't Really Drug Me, Will You?

What can I say? The first 100 chapters of this book are really outstanding, but the writing style starts to slack off later. In fact, I think the writing method can be based on the swordsmanship in the snow. There is no need to always use so many modern metaphors. It is not satisfying to read. Although it is a time-travel novel, it is just a story line. That's all. If you write less modern metaphors and just stick to the main line and continue writing, I think it's actually a good book, not as bad as what someone said downstairs. In terms of rhythm, I think it's okay. At least the book gave people a bright-eyed feeling when it first came out. If we purely recommend the way the story line is written, it should look better in the later stages.

The intelligence system is very novel, but it is more like the author's golden finger than the protagonist's, because the setting is 5 pieces of information every day, but it is obvious that the author does not have the ability to write like this. The title and introduction of the book and most of the previous chapters feel 1v1, but it still follows the old male protagonist style.

The fighting is too boring. After shouting out the moves, it takes a few minutes and then shouting out the moves again. It's too annoying. The plot is just average and can be watched at a very slow pace. It gives me the feeling that it will collapse in the middle and late stages. I'm really short of books. You can read it.

Has the system not appeared for a long time?

I like this book very much. I like it very much. I just hope the author can write it quickly. I don't have anything else to say. I only have two words. More to come.

The biggest problem with this book at present is that the author directly removed the plug-ins that the protagonist used to start his career in order to suppress the protagonist's strength. Otherwise, if there were plug-ins, many of the protagonist's problems would not be a problem now, whether it is the location of the wild Dao Fruit, or how to obtain other branches of the Four Seasons Celestial Art, or the weaknesses of the enemy. The layout of forces, etc., Basically the protagonist can take off on the spot, but the author chose the stupidest way to deal with it, that is, to pretend that this plug-in does not exist and not mention it in the following text. You can just give a random reason to block the protagonist's plug-in. If you don't mention it, it will appear that there is nothing in it, and the protagonist looks like a fool.

Why add so much drama to the villain? He also described in detail the father-son relationship between the Yu family and his son, and even tried to structure the early death of the other's mother, sudden change in personality, etc. Do you want to whitewash it or what? Why do you write a book without a clear purpose? The more you describe it, the darker it gets. You can't clean up this kind of person even if you want to. Where do you portray the villain's feelings? It's disgusting to the readers.

Originally, it was quite interesting to have an intelligence system, but later the intelligence system was just a decoration. Practicing Kung Fu is child's play. You can level up immediately after taking a pill. . . It's getting boring, so just give it up.

I'm afraid the author has run out of skills, right? I saw this section of Wushan and this routine has been used three times. In addition, if the author does not pay attention to the basic principles of cool writing, and later creates a mentally retarded plot to abuse the protagonist, just wait until you die violently. I will see how many numbers you can change, and I will just waste the entire subscription money. You don't pay attention to any of the basic principles of "hiding", "independence" and "shun" in Shuangwen writing. You simply haven't committed a fatal problem yet. I hope you will pay attention to it later.

It looked okay from the front, and there was nothing poisonous about it, but when I saw the princess, the palace, and the two elders Xuan Bing came out, I felt a bit like eating flies.

It has become like looking for the main text in the whole explanation 😅. You also inexplicably told Du Xiong what a real man is, and then you want to accept Du Xiong as your subordinate. There is also the demon-slaying monk. Isn't the purpose of keeping him here just so that you can write two more chapters later? Is it okay to earn so much money for a few words? If your content is more concise and the pace is faster, everyone will be happy with it. I can continue to support you in the next book. I used to have a monthly ticket of one or two thousand a month, but now it is only a few hundred. Author, think about it carefully.

When I saw the back part, what I wrote was nonsense. Abandoned the book.

It looked fine at first, but in the middle I started to feel more and more uncomfortable. What the hell is it that everyone carries their own exercises with them? After practicing a single exercise for more than ten years, do you still need to carry it with you? ? Ask a monkey to practice, and he can recite it for you. You insist on killing monsters and spraying treasure? ? I looked at my face full of question marks The same is true for the realm, which can only be broken through by taking medicine Find the magical power, find the prescription, find the medicinal materials, and make the breakthrough through alchemy The routine reincarnates endlessly

Basic Movement Chapter Movement Chapter Qi Refining Chapter Dacheng

Suddenly, Feng Xuewen, who imitates Li Xunhuan, came along, 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮, and there was a literary setting without any foreshadowing, and then inexplicably, Feng Xuewen was able to absorb the literary energy and become a melting pot from an ordinary person in one step. The previously written setting of the aura of heaven and earth fading away, and the ability to break through the realm by absorbing pills only seems to be like a clown when everyone takes pills to break through🤡

It was fine at first, but then I became more and more intelligent. There were also typos and typos. I really couldn't stand it anymore. It felt like it was generated by AI.

Not dead, you write a title for me called "Death". Don't you understand what this word means?

It took me a few days to read the Five Poison Sect chapter, but I didn't expect that the previous chapter, which was pretty stable, would suddenly have an exaggeratedly bad chapter. It's abstract enough that the princess was caught with three escorts holding pills. Who protects the princess when she is in trouble? I have played this chapter twice in a row when I found herbs to break through in dangerous places, although the second time was to find herbs to cure the disease after breaking through. The most outrageous thing is the character Linglong. Since you are not interested in power, don't fight for it. The protagonist has no brains, no physical skills, no emotional intelligence, and the leader who has a lot of trouble to lift together. It's hard to lift this talent unless he has been promoted to two levels. He keeps saying that he has a good relationship with Elder Snake, but he can't remember the plastic friendship even if he eats the snack or not. No wonder he betrayed you. There is no trace of doubts about this kind of flaw. She was also crazy about being cute in front of the villain, and even found a time to expose her brother when the whole clan was around. I thought there was some manipulation, but in the end it was still a fight between a few masters, so it would be better to conduct a sneak attack and kill an elder first. The Gu Mother didn't know what she was doing. Such a poisonous sect had 0 control over her subordinates. She couldn't control any poison or poison. If the first one was injured and retreated in seclusion, it would be a bit too clownish to be killed by one of her own people if it wasn't for outsiders to save her. Based on her control over her family's power, it would be safer to retreat in any cave than in her own camp. .

I couldn't stand the chapter about the robbery and murder of Bai Wenjing. It was watery, disgusting, and mentally retarded.

After reading Chapter 170... The feeling of familiarity is getting stronger and stronger... The content of this book is almost copied. Although I haven't read the back, there is definitely a plot that uses the Mulan people to bury weapons and weapons, and the burial is by the river...

If the breakthrough realm setting is too stuck, can't I break through naturally? Pills are actually auxiliary

It's so rubbish, the plot is so rubbish, the martial arts novel has no passion at all, it's all fucking stupid, the synopsis is copied from "The Legend of Heaven and the Dragon Slayer", and all kinds of stitching are added, the writing is rubbish.

Doesn't the protagonist read history? There is Zhao Kuangyin, there is Cao Cao, and he is called Chen Jiusi, but there is no reaction at all?

Has the character been replaced? It's difficult to write. The protagonist's intelligence system seems to have disappeared from the world. The plot behind it is also inexplicable and the person becomes intelligent 😅

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A very cliche plot. When the protagonist goes to a place, there must be traitors inside and several villains watching; the rescue must be the last to arrive; the villain must be brainless, and he will fight to death for every trivial matter; every time he rebels and says that he will be killed, he must first talk nonsense; the word count is high, and every time he has already given a detailed introduction before, he will still say it in detail several times; the protagonist has always said that he needs to keep a low profile, and in the end, he is the most high-profile in the world, but it is Lao Zhu who insists on keeping a low profile. Also, I don't know when the system was deleted.

September is also getting closer

Why bother? Why do you have to copy Yitian? It's so hard to think of the plot yourself.

Dear author, can you please re-open a new book? I really loved reading this book in the early stages. I kept ordering it and will read another one!

I just flipped through the catalog, and why was my Chongba missing? He was one of the greatest Han emperors in my mind.