Versatile Mage: Innate Power

Really, the first part is good, but problems arise later. The protagonist keeps helping Mo Fan, but never gets feedback. There should be back and forth between friends, not unilateral export. The protagonist's strength is fascinating. One moment, he was the strongest and unpredictable when going through the plot with Mo Fan. The next moment, he was ranked behind Mo Fan and even Mu Ningxue, and was called the second devil... To be honest, the bottom line of what many readers can accept is that he is at least no worse than the protagonist in the original work. But I saw Chapter 148. Mo Fan was possessed by Flame Fairy and punched the prone Dongfang Lie, and the protagonist had to break his leg bone to defeat him. The protagonist often helps others without any reason, and even feels a little nosy. For example, the time when Hu Xue was there, the time when the big snake shed its skin, the time when Ai Tutu took over, and so on.

It's so comfortable to watch without a heroine, there are no awkward emotional lines, and it's not brainless. The protagonist is not a fool, so it's very comfortable to watch.

Holy Mother, you are very nosy.

I feel that the author needs to strengthen the protagonist. The protagonist is really not very outstanding. He should strengthen the high-level wind element and get a stronger soul seed. If you don't arrange a totem or something, aren't you just looking for a totem later?

It's very comfortable to watch without a heroine. It's not that I don't like female protagonists. I can accept two or three female protagonists. It's just that some of the stories are like a bus. If there is a female protagonist, it's like I've never seen a woman before. And although this book is relatively ordinary, it's not that there are no hooks. It's just that it's not obvious in the early stage and the protagonist's character is not outstanding 🤫🤫

I've finished reading the full text, and it's very comfortable to read. I like watching the protagonist interact with Mo Fan and the others. I feel like watching the Pirates fandom is like Ship Flow. Watching the protagonist join Fanxue Mountain, help with development, and cultivate farming. The plot of Angel Soul in the middle is a bit annoying, and the final boss Mika is encountered at the advanced level. Well, it made me feel so insecure that I felt a sense of urgency when watching the subsequent plots. I was still being watched by the boss and felt like I was still here. This was very annoying, but after that plot, it was fine. I still quite like the friendship between the protagonist and Mo Fan. After all, the world view of the original text is still too dark.

This is the crappiest French fanfic I've ever read

It's really rubbish, the plot is basically pasted and copied, and the main character is a virgin.

Main character. Mo Fan's background board🤭

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