Versatile Mage: Ice Soul

After reading a few chapters, let me tell you my opinion. First of all, the protagonist's surname is Ye, and he and Mo Fan are from the same family. They all call Mo Jiaxing dad. It should be considered that he and Ye Xinxia were sent to his house for him to adopt. Let's just say that this wool cannot be harvested by a sheep. A lot of fan fiction is just to be the protagonist's brother or younger brother, and directly follow the plot without any brain. It is easy to write, but there is nothing new. The second is about fighting beasts. The protagonist probably has no money. The author writes that Dean Xiao asked the protagonist to join the summoning department to participate in fighting beasts. However, Dean Xiao in the original book should not have this kind of character. In the past, he lost the summoning department and lost all his pants. Dean Xiao did not ask anyone to help. Remember that you are a mature author. If you have no money, you can add individual plots, such as accepting a commission and discovering a treasure. You don't have to follow the original work. That's all, come on

If we're not harem studs, we're just good friends.

Single heroine or harem? I hope it's a single heroine

There are too many bugs at the beginning. Your physical strength as an ordinary person is stronger than that of a demon. You can kick the slave demon wolf more than 20 meters away with one kick. How could you do it without plug-ins, but the article does not mention it at all 😅

The protagonist is too useless, not even as good as Mo Fan and Mu Ningxue in the period. He is 50-50 against anyone and cannot beat anyone. He has to be injured every few chapters to recuperate.

Magic skill list, not necessarily accurate

All I can say is that if it were me, I would care more about my family than those who have nothing to do with me. If a person doesn't even care about his family, then I think he is not a good person no matter how righteous he is?

Ding Yumian

After reading the first chapter, you have a way to die🤫

It perfectly misses my favorite character, and it's not a harem. Instead, I push my sister to Mo Fan to start a harem.

An ordinary nanny article with no highlights for the time being.

It is recommended that the author write clearly that there are two series. After all, this is one of the popular attractions.

There is my own original work in the front, but in the back I just copy the original work and add 100 words about the protagonist in each chapter, haha

Mo Fan likes to have a new dog🐶, and he really gets into trouble with Bo City

If the author doesn't know how to write, don't write randomly.

After reading about half of the story so far, I feel that the character of the protagonist is still very strange. He has basically no feelings for other people, or he is just stupid and can't express feelings. Most of the time, it has nothing to do with me. I don't care how many people die. Sometimes I can't stand the sacrifice of others. When facing Salang, even if he knows that the other person is crazy and guilty, he doesn't take any action because he is a family member. In one chapter, it doesn't matter if other people die, and in the next chapter, he is full of guilt because Bo City was destroyed. Knowing that Mu He was a member of the Black Vatican, he did not tell anyone else. He knew that Salang was going to destroy the ancient capital and did not notify the evacuation or ask for help. When it started to rain, he probably knew the reason, so he rushed up to fight with a bunch of Black Vatican. In the end, he was tricked and fought to the death with his inner demons Don't tell me that there was an emperor-level demon who wanted to give benefits before he died. The result was like this The other party is humiliating himself if he wants to give him a favor. He would rather die than obey. If he wasn't good-tempered, I don't know how many times he would have died The same goes for Xinxia. Knowing Mo Fan's thoughts about Xinxia and Mu Ningxue, when Mo Fan felt the gap between himself and Mu Ningxue, he instead poured chicken soup. At this time, shouldn't he threaten his own sister to break her legs or something?

Poisoned, very tiring and uncomfortable to watch, mixed with personal emotions, too many things, I suggest you don't watch it

Relatives of the protagonist, old routine, persuaded to quit

See you later

It's really good now. I feel like it's the best among the full-time fanfics. The writing is almost clear, there is no intellectual behavior, and it is a single female protagonist. It is not too inconsistent with the setting of the full-time mage, nor is it too outrageous. There is no overhead world structure or anything. It is quite consistent. It can also fill in some pitfalls, satisfy some tragedies, and avoid them. It feels good. Come on, come on, try to update three times a day.

Just abolish the plug-in? ? ?

Mu Ningxue, My Wife as a Full-time Mage, has a single female protagonist. It's very interesting and has a great emotional line.

The writing is okay. There are no other fanfics. I have read several. Other fanfics are simply white-knuckle fiction and the plot is unreasonable. This plot is quite reasonable and the writing is relatively smooth. It doesn't have too many hooks. It seems to be in line with the world structure. Then I hope that it can be more powerful and help the country develop better. It can eliminate all the evil forces in the original works and avoid some tragedies. This is my personal opinion. The single female protagonist is good.

Versatile Mage Star context, you can read it

The mage's physical body is very fragile, and unless he reaches the super level, his body will be greatly improved if he has a magic energy tempered body. Otherwise, it would be impossible to compete with the demon body in physical form, let alone at the same level. So there was something wrong with this book from the beginning. It's enough to be able to kill slave-level monsters at the elementary level with the physical body.

The update has been discontinued. The update has been discontinued. What else should I write to finish it 😡