Versatile Mage: All Flames Bow to Me

The most difficult thing about writing a French fanfic is that the protagonist Mo Fan has too much charisma; Mo Fan is a person who risks his life to save the common people. Does the protagonist of the fanfic have the wisdom or charisma to match his courage?

All writers in France like to have high intensity in early battles. If the upper levels feel that they can do anything by forcing the lower levels, then it is probably an internal self-destruction rather than rapid progress, and it is not a purely idealistic world view. Just believe in light. If humans really have this ability, will they be at a disadvantage against monsters? Let's look at the reality. Human beings can only send things one by one. If they are in a hurry, they will be ruined together.

Skill List

The world view of a full-time mage is outrageous. Civilization has developed for so many years and only a few skills, such as wind, water, and light, have been abandoned. No one has thought of developing wind blades, water jets, lasers, or fusion magic like in the original work, but it seems to be an enemy of the whole world. In the magical world, technology has been developed, and there are only a few people who research and develop magic. It is outrageous.

I feel like the settings are okay, the hook-up is quite novel, and the twenty-four kinds of strange fires are fully functional and interesting. Although the writing is a bit green at the beginning, I can see that the writing becomes smoother and smoother later on. I hope the author can stick to it, come on!

During the crisis in Bo City, Mo Fan was already at the intermediate level, and the thunder element was already at the third level. The protagonist's ability to cheat in one element was actually not as fast as Mo Fan's cultivation. He was the first person I've ever seen who deliberately lowered his level and couldn't even catch up with Mo Fan.

Can the author not give Mo Fan the resources of the original work? Every book I read is full of excerpts, which is a bit annoying. There is no freshness at all. This is the most taboo thing about writing a book. It is better to arrange opportunities yourself. Even if the writing is not good, it is much better than those who grab resources.

Don't reduce your fighting power. With all the strange fires, including the emperor's flame, how is it possible [forbidden curses can make you an emperor]? The Void Swallowing Flame and the Pure Lotus Demon Fire are in all states, and the dry and cold moon eyes are all killing randomly The peak [Void Swallowing Flame] is the Nine-Star Fighting Saint. Emperor level, small emperor benchmark [1-3 stars ⭐ Douzong]. The middle emperor's benchmark [4~6 stars ⭐Douzong] The high emperor's benchmark [7~9 stars ⭐Douzong] Douzun instantly kills [Peak Douzong], it is not an exaggeration to say that the Dark King is the highest [3 stars ⭐Douzong].

To be honest, fan fiction without the original heroine is really boring.

The protagonist's strange fire is useless at all. It only appears once in the battle in Chapter 44. This is because the protagonist's mid-level mage cannot defeat the primary and second-level mage. Although he cannot use mid-level skills, the opponent also has magic equipment. In this way, the protagonist can only take out the strange fire and fight, otherwise he can only avoid it in frustration on the stage. I don't see what's so great about the main character. There is no natural talent to break through to the middle level (such as black and yellow fire, three thousand fires, various fire bonuses), or you can only buy the Stardust Vein to give you a breakthrough, various accelerations in your cultivation, and you can still win if you are cornered in a fight and forced to use strange fire. To be honest, I really didn't see any strength or talent in the protagonist. Maybe you will say that if your talent is exposed, you will be killed, but I only see you fighting for water and increasing chapters by suppressing combat power.