The Fantasy Library

Let's talk about it briefly. From the all-round power cooling to the death-burning magic eye that burns the brain, to the summoning magic, every book likes to add various restrictions. To put it bluntly, your author's writing skills are not good, and you can't grasp the protagonist's combat power once it breaks the standard. The previous local error, full firepower, can push level 9, just to give a reason to overwhelm the combat power to level 7 and follow the plot. Once it deviates from the original plot, it will not be written. The main character If the fighting ability is beyond the norm, it will be suppressed. It is written that I always like to get a dancing clown to come out to provoke, but the protagonist really likes to watch him dance, and then take action after dancing. What kind of age is this kind of plot that makes people sick? No wonder the comic city is almost dead now. The masters with good writing skills have changed, and those with bad writing skills use the old-fashioned way of writing to reduce intelligence. I want to write the protagonist Yun Danfeng Qingqing and pretend to be cool, but the writing turns out to be a clown. The protagonist of this book is like a robot. Of the more than 80 chapters, there is only one chapter that feels a bit dark and windy blocking the road. The whole book is as bland as water. I hope there will be more improvements in the follow-up (can you change your habit of putting a limiter on the protagonist when you disagree)

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I hope there won't be any more original worlds added, it's really discouraging.

Ah? Being an experienced author, I really didn't expect that he would suddenly go crazy in Chapter 106. The reasons given are also outrageous. It's like gradually breaking through the constraints. You could just add some foreshadowing. He kissed her directly and forcefully. To put it bluntly, even the guy on the roadside who was slapped in the face by the protagonist in other books was also a gangster.

Author, are you Japanese? Otherwise, why would the protagonist still be Asasi? I'm still a virgin now. Even Japanese anime rarely write about this outdated setting.

I feel that Ruqing's writing style is getting worse and worse, and the protagonist's structure is completely unmemorable. I think I can remember Noah and Fang Li even after several years. The current protagonist gives me the feeling of double standards and double standards.

Ruqing, if you continue like this, the only thing left in your book will be the filial son. Mountain breeze, Gu. The upper hexagram Genshan is [stop], the lower hexagram Xunfeng is [conformity]. Those above are stagnant, while those below are submissive. This is a phenomenon of decay and decay.

The author writes a variety comic very well, but it can't be separated from the plot. No matter how powerful the protagonist is, the plot generally remains the same, just like the plot. I hope the author writes better and better, everything is a personal opinion.

Why are you so nice to Rias? It's special training and it's breaking off the fragments of the holy spear to make artificial artifacts. No matter how cool you pretend to be, isn't the only thing you can do is lick it?

Are the artifacts you received in the first few worlds just decorations? The Zanpakuto can't beat others without using the God-killing Gear? When I read a book like yours, I just see the protagonist holding an artifact from another world and showing off his abilities. What is this thing you are writing about now?