A Journey Through the Heavens, Beginning in DanMachi

I hope to be able to write about the power of Mianjigu. The foreigner I read on the same site made me mad. I took Nanami with me. I went to Hokage and copied the Sharingan and Wooden. It's like the reincarnation eye, the eight gates and the flying thunder god. The god of death is also the same. It makes me feel sick.

The title of the book begins in the wrong place. The heroine Yukino Kato E Asuna 🤔

Is this considered a slow start or too superficial? The ability description is incredible but the performance is like a minion.

It's because the sister is too lazy and her body can't stand her own talent. The talent overflows and in turn fixes her eyes. She can learn without looking at the other person or listening to a few words. But she is too salty. Only when the younger brother is related will there be movement. You can't use physical strength to kill her at first sight. When she dodges, you will lose. Use your tricks and add some ingredients to deal with you. The longer you fight, the less likely you are to win. Or you can defend her for a long time and drag your sister to death. Her body is too fragile.

Although the stories written by Lu before were very watery and had some poisonous points, they have never overshadowed the protagonist, and now they have overshadowed the protagonist.

Not to mention your setting of the protagonist's talents, what you wrote is really boring. You said it is a comprehensive comic, but only a few female characters are involved. You didn't open the copy until you wrote more than 70 chapters. You have been upgrading it in school before. There is no emotional progress in writing those female characters. It is extremely boring to read.

Although Jianjigu is indeed very strong, there is still a process of contact and learning. What if you encounter a strong enemy with omniscient power who strikes first and gets in trouble? It's still relatively easy overall and you won't encounter such enemies🤔

Now that you have become stronger, why do you feel like you are coming out every time you think about it? The same goes for copying through the eyes. Why don't so many powerful people copy and become stronger step by step? It feels like I just start when I remember it. If I can't remember it, I just assume I don't have the ability.

The author, are you Lillie Isumi? The writing style feels similar

Jianjigu's copying ability can quickly enhance his knowledge base in a short period of time, and then use the huge knowledge base as the basis to build a new practice system and become the Taoist ancestor of the new system! Jianji Gu's inferences from one example to another can play a huge key role in the process of creating laws! If the protagonist can continuously optimize the practice system he created, detachment will not be a problem!